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RR
16th August 2005, 10:24 AM
Fallen Hero

That man should fall before his age...
That he may trip and trample others...
That he should become degraded....
Where disgrace was once alive.
That he should change so lowly...
And change right before our eyes.
To the very ridiculed sight he himself,
Once had passed harsh judgement over.
Such rantings fill the air; words once archedly shunned,
Such dances of turmoil; ever-circling the piteous guilt,
Such questionings of that once familiar father loved...
Such pain that fills those who still wonder:
Where have you gone when you are still here with us?

Remembrance reborn

Memory will you ever escape me?
Will reliving such dawning humiliations ever cease?
Will you not let me say I cannot ever recall:
That which visits me in times of unstir?
It does its deed to jolt and blush;
The hue that can do no more than darken still.
All that was at rest...
Just mere preoccupations before...
Now spin in vivid turmoil...
To announce that voice of wretched reason.
How shut eyes and head ashaken:
Do nothing else then render myself odd.
So that yet another reminiscence is imprinted..
With the spilled taint of another.
Creating that time forsaken remembrance.
Once again...

-Querida

xlntbarani
22nd September 2005, 06:43 PM
-- Remembrance Reborn --

a thought of high standard ... :)


//
hue that can do no more than darken still
//

When reading... i thought...
How 'Q' wrote this...

Hi Q!...
did you went inside 'your' brain..
and sketched the action and reactions..
em... :roll:


Nice... Do More... :)

Querida
3rd October 2005, 02:14 AM
:P very funny XlntB

I meant that when one is not so fair...even as one 'reddens' our hue just darkens...

malligai
17th October 2005, 10:09 AM
"Fallen Hero "

Touche!! :thumbsup:

...simply beautiful Q....what a stark reality... :(