Trying out a new writing style - Chapter The First

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well, actually I did submit it...and one of them was interested, but at the last minute, I got cold feet. I thougth it wasnt good enough and that it needed revision. So I asked them for time, and I am ashamed to admit, it is now lying in the back burner.

I lack the discipline needed for an author, Q!!

awww don't feel too bad...maybe then by posting your revised chapters you'll see how much posters really enjoy your story and get over your cold feet