3 months pirragu than revised first chapter re post panrikerinngale, athe thaan mean pannen!
Sure! It is intelligent!
Yuck! Are you nuts?
3 months pirragu than revised first chapter re post panrikerinngale, athe thaan mean pannen!
Not just revised...also completed...
By the way, comments onnum kanoom?
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
Badri, no worries, I will revert asap once finish reading.
badri, you have progressed well since your first entry. I like the way you handled the history of Yati; especially on Hothrim Supa.
Hope to see more of it soon.
Thanks, AR!!
Will try to squeeze in time to do some serious writing!!
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
Badri,
At last, I have finished reading it..Sorry, I know i'm quite late.
U left us on a cliff..Initial pages were a bit of a drag but once Valthor convinced Nambi that the eye works in reality, the going was very gripping.. You can pat yourself on yr back for keeping me hooked from the 12th page onwards till the end of first chapter, given the fact that I also had a minimized window with 'my fav. book'open and didnt feel the urge to do an Alt+tab...
If you really want to hear criticism, it is to do with yr long sentences that demand the full attention of the reader, who, may not catch the subtle satire beneath if we choose to read fast & skip lines.. Thankfully, your punctuation was perfect that eased up the effort required to read lengthy descriptions.
Liked the way you invented names, especially Roomurr Myll
Give us more, Badri..Good work!!!!
Your attitude determines your altitude!
Badri,
Inga enna kathai vittitu irukinga???...
“The real contest is always between what you've done and what you're capable of doing. You measure yourself against yourself and nobody else.” - Geoffrey Gaberino
Hey Badri,
I just read the 1st post... really loved it... Felt like I went for a ride in the time machine to the purana ages...Extremely interesting... Will read thru the revised 1st chapter soon...
“The real contest is always between what you've done and what you're capable of doing. You measure yourself against yourself and nobody else.” - Geoffrey Gaberino
WOW!! Now, that is some achievement!!!Originally Posted by scorpio
You can pat yourself on yr back for keeping me hooked from the 12th page onwards till the end of first chapter, given the fact that I also had a minimized window with 'my fav. book'
Thanks a ton, Akka!! Will try to work on it more and get out more chapters
Thanks, Dev..looking fwd to your comments after reading the revised and completed chapter!
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
Badri Ji,
Very Nice!!!! 8) Obviously even better than the first chaps/posts. The wait was worth it! Luv the names BTW!
Back after a while...
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