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11th March 2007, 08:39 PM
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Lonely... Always
LONELY... ALWAYS.
I'm looking at these four walls.
With no windows and no doors.
These four walls are made of brick.
Not of wood and not of stick.
Although i try to get out.
No one hears me scream or shout.
One day these walls will have to fall.
Then i will see one and all.
They say it is nice out there,
Life and love everywhere.
But untill then i'm stuck here.
With all my hate and all my fear.
This room is dark and it is cold.
Will i be here till i grow old.
It feels like i will never be free.
But thats the way it is got to be..
I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
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11th March 2007 08:39 PM
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11th March 2007, 08:44 PM
#2
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11th March 2007, 09:01 PM
#3
reply to chevy- explanation..
first of all, thanks for reading it , and replying me.
I wrote tat poem to express my feelings during the most depressing moments in life..
I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
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11th March 2007, 09:35 PM
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Senior Member
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ronny!
Get out of your imaginary tomb. Your whole life with its bright promises, opportunities, experiences, relationships etc etc etc is there spread out before you! Please shake off all depressing thoughts!
Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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12th March 2007, 12:35 AM
#5
Senior Member
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well written, but dont feel depressed............... 
:P
Have a happy life!
Anbe Sivam
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12th March 2007, 08:58 AM
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exactly ron!!!!! .. do visit the hub more often ..hope to catch u in Coffee corner ...
http://forumhub.mayyam.com/hub/viewt...6901&start=375
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12th March 2007, 09:01 AM
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27th March 2007, 10:29 PM
#8
i read ur poem,it is indeed nice,somewhere it expresses my own feelings.but i enjoy my life a lot.i dont feel for what i didnt got,but i am happy with what i have in my present life.
so cheer up buddy.
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31st March 2007, 10:42 PM
#9
thanks for ur comments..
hey fellow hubbers.. thnx a lot for reading my poems.. i thought i could not write anything worth reading at the hub..
i hav gone thru some really depressing moments in my life.. but now i'm out of it..
I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
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1st April 2007, 05:43 AM
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Originally Posted by pavalamani pragasam
) there is no ceiling yaar..
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