Otrai adippaadhai...

[nasema]

Nee arimugamaana naalil irundhu
moodiyadhillai yen manakadhavai
thirandhirundhum yeno indru nee
varavillai?

Oru otraiadipaadhaye uruvaagi
irundhadhu yen manadhil, un
varugayaal.

Un vannathupoochi kangalai
kaanaamal thuvandu poyina
paadhayoram poothirundha
malar chedigal.

Nee azaikaadhadhaal azagizandhu
poyina paadhayoram irundha
yen peyar palagaigal.

Dhukam thalaikera paarkiren
unadhu pugai padathai yen
sattai paiyil irundhu eduthu.
adhil namatu siripu sirikiraay,
idhu mattumdhaan un sondham yena.
un ninaivugal innum ennodu
irupadhai koori thetrivitu
parakindrana megangal.

Ushnam yeriya moochu kaatraal
varandupogiradhu indha
otraiadi paadhai.

Maatarathan ninaikiren
indha nilayai ,aanaal meendum
meendum otraiadipaadhyai
pudhupikiradhu yen kanneer.......

[temporary sori-Observer]

Nasima Begum,

SOgaththai puzhinju putteeya !

[siddiqsa]

Dear Nasima..

Unga kavithai rombha nalla iruku.. aana onnumay puriyalai.. etho solla vareengannu mattum puriyuthu..

Nalla try panni.. innum nalla eluthunga..

take care..

all the best

[kaathal_kavignan]

nasima.,

i dont know whether siddiq got it rightly, but ennaku nalla purinchuthu kavithai, nice one ya . which clearly explains the pain of one side love.

- kaathal kavignan

[xlntbarani]

naseema...

ungal unarchigalai... oru kuviyalaai... ezhudhi ulleergal...

idhe kavidhayai... meendum...meendum... oondri padithaal... ennaku... palveru siru kavidhaigal thondrugirathu... neengalum muyarchithu parungalean....

orea sittigayil uppin suvai therivathu pol... siru oosiyai seruginaal uyir vali therivathupol... siru kavithaigalaai ezhudhungalean...

idhu ennudaya advice illa.. just a opinion... like to try... do... or else... scold me in my thread...

Happy journey.

barani

[temporary sori-Observer]

Nazima Begum,

Barani sonnathu pOl uNarvugaLai oru 'kuviyalaaga' koduththu irukkiReerkaL. SiRu oosiyaal kuththinaalE, uyir pOgumaaRu 'uyir vali' ERpadukiRathu. NeengaLO, eettiyai paayththu vitteerkaLE !