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[tscii:1be72eca22] naan kaathalika maaten endru therinthum
Yen ennai nee kaathilikiraai ?"

endru ennai kettAi

nee ennai kaathalika maatai enbathu ennaku theriyaathu
appadi therinthirunthaalum kooda unnai thaan kaathalithirupen

maranam varum endru therinthum
manithargal vaazha ninaipathillaiya enna .. ?


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[temporary sori-Observer]

Sariyaach chonneenga KK. Cancer varumnu therinjim beedi kudikkaRathillayaa, antha maathiri !

[kaathal_kavignan]

sorry 2 say . kevalaama iruku unga comparison

- kaathal kavignan

[temporary sori-Observer]

KKK,

kEvalam ellaam paaththaa kaadhalum paNNa mudiyaadhunga, kavithaiyum ezhutha mudiyaathunga :huh:

[xlntbarani]

Hi.. KK.. Kavidhai arumai

and Sorry 2 say - temp'observerudaya commentum nandraga thaan irukirathu...

Kavidhai vaarthaigalaal korkkapadukirathea oziya unarvugalaal mattumea purinthu kolla padugirathu....

tamizhil vaarthaigal 6 latcham yendroru paadal undu... namakku athanayum therivathillai.. comment yenbadhu... oru vizhayatha padikkum pozhudho, paarkum pozhudho manasula thonura oru spark.. athu ungala sirikka vaikkalam, sinunga vaikkum, muga sivappai yetrum, thoondum, thootrum.. anaithayum seyum... comment yenbadhu andha vinadiyil yennaku yenna thoonudho adhuthaan...

normala - naan comment panradhu kidayathu.. kaaranam... yennaku thonuradhellam vibrations thaan vaarthaikalaal naan idhu valliyum thitiyathum kidayathu... maximum paaratiyadhum kidayathu.. some times

manasula vaarthaia thonuratha yezhudhiduvean... yennakku unga kavithaya vida ippo indha comentukku-commentukku-comment yezudhanum thonichi... romba longavea.. irundhum yezudhirukkean...

Sorry boss... idhu yenudaya angle of observing avalavuthaan...

----
***
maranam varumnu
therinjum vaazha aasai padum manitha inam***

Iyarkkayin niyadhi - maranam -
manidhanin niyadhi - vazhvadhu -

*** idhay kavidhayil padaiththuleergal - nandru

idharkku temp'observerudaya comment ***

- cancer varumnu therinjum beedi pidikkarathu illaya -

See KK, unga kavidhaya padicha udanea avarudaya thought'la spark annadhuthaan comment - apadinna unga kavithai avarudaya sindhanaya kilarii irukku illaya - so you have succeded -
thitrathum oru vidha paarattu thaan -

aanna temp'observer thittala...

KK... temp'obs oda comparison wrong.. yeppadinna...

cancer - beedi kudikhaadhavanukkum varum, kudikkiravanukkum kandippa cancer varumnu solla mudiyadhu...

But.. thank him for commenting the impact at the stretch of when your words made it....


Sorry 2 say

KK.. ungaloda comparisanum idharkku sariyaga varavillai...

yeppadi endral...

***
maranam varumnu
therinjum vaazha aasai padum manitha inam
***
Iyarkkayin niyadhi - maranam -
manidhanin niyadhi - vazhvadhu -

illaya...

manidha manadhin niyadhi - kadhalippadhu
aanal kaadhalargal thoarpathu niyadhi illai suznilayin kaaranamea... ok va...

adhepol kaadhal tholvi maranathirkku opppanathendral ...
vaazvadhu vetrikku oppaagum ...

illaya ....

so... this is my concept... when you are comparing with an example see whether the example correctly conceptualize what you intended to tell... after telling a concept you do show a example only to make the viewer easier to understand .. not to confuse them... K

Hi .. kk .. this is my view... and Sorry for this long lecture...

Do more... if and even the example doesnt suits the fore written situation... i like both the matter nad the way of expression....

Do more with accuracy..

Convey my regards to your pen to move more long extending its limits...

xlntBarani :)

[kaathal_kavignan]

dear barani

first of all thankz for ur feedback .

Mr. temporary en kavithai paathutu udane ezhuthuna reply e paathu
udane ennaku thonunathu thaan ezhuthunen ... cos antha comparison ennaku pidikale . thats not a matter . no probs that u also supported his view.

And ur view about my poem was also nice and u told me where i went wrong.

Lemme tell u .. in which angle i wrote probably i have not communicated it properly .

kaadhali . kaathalanai paarthu ..,

"naan unnai kaathilaka maaten endru therinthum
yen ennai kaathalikiraai" endru ketaal evlo feeling na

kadavul manithanai paarthu

Yen vaazhgiraai ??

endru ketaal .. evlo feeling a irukumo appadi compare pannen

athaavuthu

aval ennai kandipaaga kaathalika maataal enbathu ennaku munbe theriyum.

manithanuku maranam nera povathu munbe theriyum

but she is so irresistible that i thought i'll love only her .. eventhough she is not goin 2 love me ..antha love panra feeling onnu pothum

similarly vaazhkai inimai yaanathu .. saavu nerapovathai ennamal
ellarum vaazhgirom .. appadi irukum pothu kadavul vanthu yen vaazhgiraai endru ketpathum .

ethanai naal kaathalitha kaathali enda enna love panre appadinu kettal
oru kashtama feeling varum .


appadi mean pannen ...

anyways . thanks 4 ur view .......... barani .

take care . bye

- Kaathal kavignan

[malligai]

[tscii:4eb0dd3102]hii KK,

epadi irukeenga?? :)

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and dont worry about Mr Sori's comments...i dont think he meant it in a negative way...

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