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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Topic started by Malligai (@ 0-2pool67-111.nas29.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on Tue Oct 14 22:04:49 .


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«ôÀÊÔõ þÕì̧Á¡, þÕó¾¡ø?
±ý ÀÂò¨¾ ¯ÉìÌ Á¼Ä¢ø Å¢Ç츢§Éý
¯ý À¾¢ø ÅçÅ¢ø¨Ä
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þôÀÊ
¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ?



Engey Nee
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Kanavil anru nee sonathai ketu
sirippu vanthathu enaku
vilithathum unnidam sola thirumbinen
unnai kaanavillai
Engey nee?

Kovilil anru yaaro
'indha pudavaiyil nee alaga-irukey' enrathum
kanggal kalankiyathu enaku
paarka nee ilai
Engey nee?

Aluvalakathil anru orey viyapu
enathu aaivuku vetriyaa?
unidamthaan mudhalil sola thonriyathu
tholaipesiyil un kural
ketkavey ilai
Engey nee?

Maruthuvar anru sonathai ketu thidukiten
apadiyum irukumo, irundhaal?
en bayathai unaku madalil vilakinen
un badhil varavey ilai
Engey nee?

Ipadi
naan vendum poluthukalil
enrumey en arukil ilaatha unnai
En thedukirathu en manam
Inrum?


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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ÁøÄ¢¨¸Â¡ þÐ? ¯í¸û Á½õ ±í§¸?

¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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ÁøÄ¢¨¸.. TT's review is apparently based on technicality. For me, the concept is nice and the poem is well laid out. ¸Å¢¨¾ ¿Âõ ºüÚ Üξġ¸ þÕó¾¢Õì¸Ä¡õ ±ýÀ¨¾ò ¾Å¢Ã þÐ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ.. ¿£í¸ §ÅñõÉ¡ À¡Õí¸.. people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do.


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Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
.. of course, my comments are with due respects to the learned views of Mr. TT.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
enna mallighai ...
unggalathu ehkkap perumoocchughal..
neenggal enggeyo
ekka chakkama maaddikideengga maathiri thonuthu...
idayil marutthuvar vehru varughiraar.....
bayam vehru...enna sanggathi!!!!!
elimaiyaagha irunthathu kavithai.
anbudan Anand

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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surathi!!!.....

hmm...."people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.

"þôÀÊ
¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ? ">>>>>

hmm.....Ò⡾ Òâ÷¸û :)) lol...

keep writing malligai. U sure have lots of fans for u. (including me)

;)



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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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«ôÒÈõ ÁøÄ¢¨¸Â¢ý Á½õ ±í§¸ýÛ §¾ÊÉÅ÷, ²ý Á¾¢ô¦Àñ ¾ÃÅ¢ø¨Ä?


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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haaa! :O

i dont know how surathi's lines got cut...and total post is a mess....here it goes...

surathi!!!.....

hmm...."people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.

"þôÀÊ
¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ? ">>>>>

hmm.....Ò⡾ Òâ÷¸û :)) lol...

keep writing malligai. U sure have lots of fans for u. (including me)

;)



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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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oh god! something wrong wait....

surathi!!!.....

hmm...."people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.

"þôÀÊ
¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ? ">>>>>

hmm.....Ò⡾ Òâ÷¸û :)) lol...

keep writing malligai. U sure have lots of fans for u. (including me)

;)



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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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surathi!!!.....

hmm...."people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.



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Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
:(((((

sorry for posting 100 times....something wrong...still my post is not right....some lines are misisng...i shall try after some hours...

sorry

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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surathi!!!.....

hmm...."people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.

...that was the first half...sorry


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Confident surathi?
how sure are u? ...:)
Am i thaaaaat predictable??.... lol...

malligai,

first the cons....

1. not much nayam in ur kavithai...as ur previous ones.... (but that does not stop others from enjoying it) ( can curb the words..to make it more crisp)

now for the pros...

1. kavithai karu nalla irukku
2. eLimai
3. half baked info..which makes the reader more curious

i basically feel, a poem should THROW LIGHT ON ALSO things which are unsaid in the poem....

'paLaar' nnu aRAincha maathiri, puriyanam...sonnathum..sollathathu, ellaamE..antha vishayam padi, ur kavithai is good.


as usual some lines...which i enjoyed.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Íþ¢,

>>>people like Shakti will surely like it, as I do. ">>

wow! :( Ekkam amaithiyaai velipadugirathu. ¾¡÷ò¾õ.

"þôÀÊ
¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ? ">>>>>

hmm.....Ò⡾ Òâ÷¸û :)) lol...

keep writing malligai. U sure have lots of fans for u. (including me)

;)



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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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as usual some lines which i enjoyed,

"§¸¡Â¢Ä¢ø «ýÚ Â¡§Ã¡
'þó¾ô Ò¼¨Å¢ø ¿£ «Æ¸¡Â¢Õ째' ±ýÈÐõ
¸ñ¸û ¸Äí¸¢ÂÐ ±ÉìÌ
À¡÷ì¸ ¿£Â¢ø¨Ä
±í§¸ ¿£?
"<<<

wow! .... Ekkam kalantha velippadu. yathaartham.

(p.s. surathi, what i wanted to tell u was in one of the posts....malligai totally 2 stanzas whichi quoted..)

I AM MISERABLY SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY...EVEN IF THIS POST IS NOT RIGHT..I WONT POST AGAIN..

sorry :(( :(( :((


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
First, ANAND: kavignargalukkum kavidhaigalukkum eppodhum sambandam illai. ungalaiyum ennaiyum pondra nalla vimarsagargal ninaivil vaikka vendiyathu. (Am I stepping over my lines?..)

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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SHAKTI : " Confident? how sure are u? Am i thaaaaat predictable??.." (OMG.. i am in deep trouble now.) when i read your reviews, my prediction seems near accurate..

enakku mighavum pidithathu, azagana intha varigal:

"¿¡ý §ÅñÎõ ¦À¡ØиǢø
±ýÚ§Á ±ý «Õ¸¢ø þøÄ¡¾ ¯ý¨É
²ý §¾Î¸¢ÈÐ ±ý ÁÉõ
þýÚõ?"

þÂÄ¡¨Á ¸Äó¾ ²ì¸ò¾¢¨É «Æ¸¡öî ¦º¡øÖ¸¢ÈÐ þù Åâ¸û.


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
anbirku iniya Mallighai,
Unggalin kavithai padaiphin yatharthaithan naan konjam nagaichuvaiyaagha solli karutthu parimaadram seithen...naiyaandi seiyavillai...
nya yappadutthavum illai.
Kavinyarghalukkum kavithaikkum arave..oddumotthamaagha sambantham illai endru solvathil yenakku udanbaadhum illai, endraalum...unggalathu kavithaiyil neenggal konduvantha visayatthirkum unggalukkum
sambantham illai enbathu enakku
nandraagave therighirathu...purighirathu.
Manathai noghaditthirunthaal...
Malligaiye....mannikkavum.
Anbudan Anand

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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TIRU,

Á½õ ¾¡ý þø¨Ä..Á¾¢ô¦ÀñÛõ þø¨Ä¡?? :)


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Surathi?

"¸Å¢¨¾ ¿Âõ ºüÚ Üξġ¸ þÕó¾¢Õì¸Ä¡õ ±ýÀ¨¾ò ¾Å¢Ã þÐ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ.. "

¸Å¢¨¾ ¿ÂÁ¡??...³§Â¡µµ´...the first thing i am excited about is that i can write so much in tamil without eluthu pilais...secondly that i can put it in the standard kavithai format...
þÐÄ ¸Å¢¨¾ ¿Âõ «ôÀÊ þôÀÊýÛ ¦º¡øÄ¢ ÀÂôÀÊò¾¢É¡ ±ôÀÊ?? :)

And i also know that u r being 'way toooo subtle' and a 'little biased' :))

thankssssss.....


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Shakthi,

thanks for all encouragement..

"EVEN IF THIS POST IS NOT RIGHT..I WONT POST AGAIN.. "

---i really admire ur 'Å¢¼¡ÓÂüº¢'...so plss keep trying

:))


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Anand,

"idayil marutthuvar vehru varughiraar.....
bayam vehru.."

---after reading this i read what i wrote, and laughed a lot...it is like the police coming at the end of the movie to finish everything... :))

thanks for seeing the lighter side of it..

"Malligaiye....mannikkavum."

---Anand, i welcome ur frank comments..

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Surathi,

"þÂÄ¡¨Á ¸Äó¾ ²ì¸ò¾¢¨É «Æ¸¡öî ¦º¡øÖ¸¢ÈÐ þù Åâ¸û."

--ipadi elam solitu, naalaiku i dint like it that much-apadeenu sola koodathu, ok? :))


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Malligai : There is a consistency in your poems.. always, there is a central concept and always, the finishing touch is fine. You need not try to improve anything.. you are evolving naturally and beautifully.. just keep going.

Shakti: If u pass by this place, could u once again publish here the hyperlink to your short-story, plz?

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
hi surathi.....my story link is..

http://www.forumhub.com/stories/15429.13.42.38.html (http://www.forumhub.com/stories/15429.13.42.38.html
)


plz feel free to say ur comments.

regards..

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Shakti, nalla interesting n sensitive subject.. you have handled it with great nicety n maturity. My comments r there. Yet, I will be coming to u with more views.. soon. Thanks.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Malligai, your poem has caused this reflection - obviously, it's the other side of the coin.

²ý «ÅÙ¨¼Â¾¡ö?
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«Åû ÒÐô Ò¼¨Å¢ý
¦À¡Ä¢× ÀüÈ¢
Ó¾ø Å¡÷ò¨¾ ±ýÉ¢¼Á¢ÕóÐ..

«ùû ÒÐì ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý
«ÆÌ ÀüÈ¢
Ó¾ø Å¢Á÷ºÉõ ±ýÉ¢¼Á¢ÕóÐ..

«Åû ŢƢò¦¾ØóÐ §¿¡ìÌõ
Ţʸ¡¨Ä¢ý Ó¾ø Ó¸õ
±ô§À¡Ðõ ±ýÛ¨¼Â¾¡ö

Òò¾¡ñÎô À¢ÈôÀ¢ø
þÉ¢¨ÁÔ¼ý Ó¾ø Å¡úòÐ
¿Î ¿¢º¢Â¢ø ±ý ¸¢Í ¸¢ÍôÀ¡ö..

«Åû «îºÓüÈ ¸½í¸Ç¢ø
±ýÚõ Ó¾ø ¬Ú¾ø
±ý þ¾Á¡É Å¡ò¨¾¸Ç¡ö..

«Æò §¾¡ýÚõ§À¡¦¾øÄ¡õ
«Åû º¡öóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ
±ý þÕ §¾¡û¸û..

«ÅÇÐ ´ù¦Å¡Õ ¦ÅüȢ¢Öõ
À¡Ã¡ðÊ Á¸¢úçð¼
±ý Ó¾ø ¨¸ÌÖì¸ø..

«ÅÇÐ ´ù¦Å¡Õ §¾¡øŢ¢Öõ
ŢƢ ¿£¨Ãî ÍñÊ Å¢¼
±ý Ó¾ø Å¢Ãø¸û..

À¢Ã¢¨¸Â¢ø ÁðÎõ
Ó¾ø ¨¸ «¨ºôÒ
²ý «ÅÙ¨¼Â¾¡ö?


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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Surathi,

the momemt i read this kavithai, the first thing that struck me was that NATURAL FLOW all ur works exhibit...like water that flows down the hill, so naturally, without any hindrance...

º¢È¢Â Åâ¸û, ±Æ¢¨ÁÂ¡É ¿¨¼, ¬úó¾ ¸ÕòÐ...´Õ ¿øÄ ¸Å¢¨¾ìÌ §ÅÚ ±ýÉ §ÅñÎõ?..±ÉìÌõ ¯í¸¨Ç Á¡¾¢Ã¢§Â ±Ø¾ÛõÛ ¬¨º...¦ÅÚõ ¬¨ºÂ¡Â¢Õó¾ ÓÂüº¢ ¦ºöÐ þÕì¸Ä¡õ...¬É ±ý§É¡¼Ð §Àᨺ ¬î§º!! :)

I just thought that if u had used SECOND PERSON like NEE, UNUDAIYA etc, the kavithai would be more 'lively' than using THIRD PERSON like AVAL, AVALLUDAIYA....this is just a suggestion, i dont know what u think about it :)

There is something that i wanted to tell u:

--indha maathiri oru alagana kavithaiyai sequel-a podarathaala many people miss reading it...and i strongly think that everyone must read all ur works..like the 'LEAF' in ur Kala Iyandhiram thread..i wonder how many people read it!!



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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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ÁøÄ¢¨¸,

Thanks.. ¯í¸û ú¨ÉìÌ ÁðÎÁøÄ.. ¦ÀÕó¾ý¨ÁìÌõ §º÷ò§¾.

þó¾ Á¡¾¢Ã¢ sequel.. rather we could call it 'reflective' ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ¿¢Ä×

§À¡Äò¾¡ý.. ÝâÂý ±ýɧš «ó¾ ãÄì ¸Å¢¨¾§Â. «¨¾ À¢Ã¢òÐ

¾É¢§Â ±ÎòРŢð¼¡ø «¾üÌ ´Ç¢Ôõ þÕ측Ð. ¬òÁ¡×õ þÕ측Ð.

It's my feeling..

þó¾ Á¡¾¢Ã¢ reciprocals Ó¾ý ӾĢø ¾£À¡ «Å÷¸Ç¢ý '¯ý

¿¢¨É׸§Ç¡Î..' ¾¢Ã¢Â¢ø Á¡ò¾¢Ã§Á ±Ø¾¢Â¢Õó§¾ý.. Á¢ì¸ ¦À¡ÚôÒ½÷×õ,

¸ñ½¢ÂÓõ, ¿¢¨È Òâ¾Öõ §¾¨ÅôÀÎõ tight-rope-walking §À¡ýÈ þó¾

ÓÂüº¢¨Â «òüÌô À¢ÈÌ ¦¾¡¼Ã ¿¡ý «ô§À¡Ð ¿¢¨Éò§¾ þø¨Ä.

Somehow, it came to be that this is my third reciprocal to Malligai's poems.

These reciprocals are born that way and may it die that way.. please.

"¯í¸¨Ç Á¡¾¢Ã¢§Â ±Ø¾ÛõÛ ¬¨º.." - Please wait.. þýÛõ ¦¸¡ïº

¿¡û-§Ä "¯í¸¨Ç Á¡¾¢Ã¢§Â ±Ø¾ÏõÛ ¬¨º.." - ýÛ ¯í¸ÙìÌ

¿¢¨È §À÷ ±Ø¾ô §À¡È¡í¸! Remember me that day!

And finally.. as, in all probability, there may not be any more reciprocal poems

of Surathi anywhere.. here it is again in a different form, as you suggested.

²ý ¯ýÛ¨¼Â¾¡ö?
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¯ý ÒÐô Ò¼¨Å¢ý
¦À¡Ä¢× ÀüÈ¢
Ó¾ø Å¡÷ò¨¾ ±ýÉ¢¼Á¢ÕóÐ..

¯ý ÒÐì ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý
«ÆÌ ÀüÈ¢
Ó¾ø Å¢Á÷ºÉõ ±ýÉ¢¼Á¢ÕóÐ..

¿£ ŢƢò¦¾ØóÐ §¿¡ìÌõ
Ţʸ¡¨Ä¢ý Ó¾ø Ó¸õ
±ô§À¡Ðõ ±ýÛ¨¼Â¾¡ö

Òò¾¡ñÎô À¢ÈôÀ¢ø
þÉ¢¨ÁÔ¼ý Ó¾ø Å¡úòÐ
¿Î ¿¢º¢Â¢ø ±ý ¸¢Í ¸¢ÍôÀ¡ö..

¿£ «îºÓüÈ ¸½í¸Ç¢ø
±ýÚõ Ó¾ø ¬Ú¾ø
±ý þ¾Á¡É Å¡ò¨¾¸Ç¡ö..

«Æò §¾¡ýÚõ§À¡¦¾øÄ¡õ
¿£ º¡öóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ
±ý þÕ §¾¡û¸û..

¯ÉÐ ´ù¦Å¡Õ ¦ÅüȢ¢Öõ
À¡Ã¡ðÊ Á¸¢úçð¼
±ý Ó¾ø ¨¸ÌÖì¸ø..

¯ÉÐ ´ù¦Å¡Õ §¾¡øŢ¢Öõ
ŢƢ ¿£¨Ãî ÍñÊ Å¢¼
±ý Ó¾ø Å¢Ãø¸û..

À¢Ã¢¨¸Â¢ø ÁðÎõ
Ó¾ø ¨¸ «¨ºôÒ
²ý ¯ýÛ¨¼Â¾¡ö?


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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surathi ungal kavithaiyai vazhimozhindhu, ennudaya sila vaarththaigalum ingu.........

ÒÐ Ò¼¨Å¢ý ¦À¡Ä¢×
ÀüÈ¢ ¯ý Ҹبà Ҿ¢¾øÄ ±ÉìÌ,
«Ð ¯É측ÉÐ ±ýÀ¡§Â - ÀÃźõ.....

Òиި¾Â¢ý «ÆÌ ÀüȢ Ӿø
Å¢Á÷ºÉõ ÁðÎÁøÄ -
¯ýÉ¡ø ÁðÎõ ±ýÀ¡§Â - «Ð×õ......

ŢƢò¦¾Øõ §À¡Ð ÁðÎÁøÄ
ŢƢãÊ ¸ñÏÈí¸ ÐÅíÌõ «ó¾
¸¨¼º¢ ¦¿¡Ê¸Ùõ ¯ý Ó¸§Á -
þ¨ÁìÌû.......

Òò¾¡ñÎ À¢ÈôÀ¢ø ÁðÎÁøÄ
´ù¦Å¡Õ Å¢ÊÂÄ¢Öõ ¯ý Å¡úòÐ
Å¡÷ò¨¾¸Ç¢É¡ø ÁðÎÁøÄ -
Óò¾ò¾¢É¡Öõ ¾¡ý.......

«îºÓüÈ ¸½í¸Ç¢ø ÁðÎÁøÄ
ºó§¾¡„ ¬ÃÅ¡Ãí¸Ç¢Öõ «Õ¸¢ø
þÕôÀ¡§Â - ¬Éó¾Á¡ö, «Ð×õ

«Æò §¾¡ýÚõ §À¡Ð º¡öóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ
þÕ §¾¡û¸û ÁðÎÁøÄ ¯ýÉ¢Õ
¸Ãí¸Ùõ §ÅñΦÁÉìÌ - Ó¸õ Ò¨¾òÐì ¦¸¡ûÇ......

§¾¡øŢ¢Öõ ¦ÅüȢ¢Öõ ¯ý Ó¾ø Àí¸Ç¢ôÒ
±ô§À¡Ðõ §ÅñΦÁÉìÌ........

¯Â¢÷ À¢Ã¢Ôõ «ó¾ ´Õ ¿¢¸ú¨Å
¾Å¢Ã ±ô§À¡Ðõ À¢Ã¢Â Áɾ¢ø¨Ä ¯Â¢§Ã......


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Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
malli surathi dhipa.......8adi 16adi 32 adinnu aalaalukku yeritte poringale? paaraatta vaarthai illai...arumaiyo arumai,

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
DHEEPA, paarattuvathaa, magizvatha, negizvatha.. ethu enbathai en manasu mudhalil mudivu seyyattum.. adhan piraghu ezuthugiren.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Shy, thanks.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Surathi,

thanks for accepting my request!!...ipo ungaloda kavithaiyin alagu munai vida irandu madangu koodina maathiri iruku..nanri...

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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DEEPA,

WOW!!!...Surathi eludhiya kavithaiku ungaloda bathil kavithai is beautifullll...and very touching!!..manathai negila vaikirathu...THANKS TO U AND SURATHI FOR MAKING THIS THREAD A MEMORABLE ONE TO ME...

I like these lines very much:

«Æò §¾¡ýÚõ §À¡Ð º¡öóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ
þÕ §¾¡û¸û ÁðÎÁøÄ ¯ýÉ¢Õ
¸Ãí¸Ùõ §ÅñΦÁÉìÌ - Ó¸õ Ò¨¾òÐì ¦¸¡ûÇ......

¯Â¢÷ À¢Ã¢Ôõ «ó¾ ´Õ ¿¢¸ú¨Å
¾Å¢Ã ±ô§À¡Ðõ À¢Ã¢Â Áɾ¢ø¨Ä ¯Â¢§Ã......


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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Yarai thedukirir?

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Surathi,

WOWOW!!!

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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malligai,

avaLudaiyathai vida unnudaiyathai....gives a subtle touch to any poem. I agree with ur view..

surathi,

¯í¸ ¸Å¢¨¾ Àò¾¢ ¿¡ý ±ýÉ ¦º¡øÄ? Á£ñÎõ ¦¿¸¢ú.
ÀÊìÌõ ¦À¡ØÐ ´Õ þÂÄ¡¨Á........«¾¨É º¡÷ó¾ ¸Éõ Áɾ¢ø.....

Å¡úòÐì¸û

Deepa,

WOW! only a woman would understand and write these lines...

"«Æò §¾¡ýÚõ §À¡Ð º¡öóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ
þÕ §¾¡û¸û ÁðÎÁøÄ ¯ýÉ¢Õ
¸Ãí¸Ùõ §ÅñΦÁÉìÌ - Ó¸õ Ò¨¾òÐì ¦¸¡ûÇ...... "<<<<

pinna?? azum pothu §¾¡û ÁðÎõ ¦¸¡Îò¾¡, balance §À¡Â¢Îõ.

:))

vizaama irukka karangaL nichiyam vEndum....

fun apart, VERY MEANINGFUL KAVITHAI DEEPA, VAAZTHUKKAL

"¯Â¢÷ À¢Ã¢Ôõ «ó¾ ´Õ ¿¢¸ú¨Å
¾Å¢Ã ±ô§À¡Ðõ À¢Ã¢Â Áɾ¢ø¨Ä ¯Â¢§Ã...... "<<<

Eno antha varigaL mattum romba dramatic aaga irukku!

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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±ÉìÌõ À¢Êò¾¢Õ츢ÈÐ Íó¾÷. ¯í¸ÙìÌ À¢Êò¾ §À¡Ð ¾¡ý ±ý ¸Å¢¨¾¸Ùõ ±ÉìÌ Á¢¸ «¾¢¸Á¡ö. ±ýÉ ¦º¡øÄ Íó¾÷, Á¨ÄôÀ¡ö þÕ츢ÈÐ. ±ó¾ ¾¢Ã¢Â¢Öõ ±ôÀÊ ¯í¸Ç¡ø ÁðÎõ þôÀÊ ±Ø¾ º¡ò¾¢Âõ. Å¡úòÐì¸û.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Malligai!

ENGGEY NEE? :(

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
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º¢Ä Å¢ºÂí¸û, ¿¢¸ú׸û ¦Ã¡õÀ º£ì¸¢Ãõ ÁÈóÐÎõ.. º¢Ä Å¡ú쨸¢ø ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿¡û »¡À¸õ þÕìÌõ. º¢ÄÐ ÁÈ츧ŠÁÈ측Ð.

§¿ºõ Á¢ì¸ ¸Å¢¨¾¨Âô À⺡¸ì ¦¸¡Îò¾ þɢ ¾£ô, ÒâóÐ ¦¸¡ûÙ¾ÖìÌô Ò¾¢Â ±ø¨Ä¸¨Ç ÅÌò¾ «ýÒ ÁøÄ¢¨¸, «ÃŨ½òÐ ¯üº¡¸ãðÎõ ¾¢Õ. TT «Å÷¸Ç¢ý Å¡÷ò¨¾¸Ùõ Á¾¢ôÀ£Îõ, Á¾¢ôÒìÌâ ¨„ Áüüõ „ì¾¢ §À¡ýÈÅ÷¸Ç¢ý À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸û - þÅüÈ¡Öõ þýÛõ ÀÄ ¸¡Ã½í¸Ç¡Öõ..

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Hi Malligai,

Unarvugalai urasuadhu pol ulladhu ungal kavindhai.

Eppodhum AVARUDAN erukka vendum enru ninaippadhu
pengalin iyalbhu. Adhai thelivaga vilakkiyadhu varigal.

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Hi Malligai,

Unarvugalai urasuadhu pol ulladhu ungal kavindhai.

Eppodhum AVARUDAN erukka vendum enru ninaippadhu
pengalin iyalbhu. Adhai thelivaga vilakkiyadhu varigal.

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
malligai - engE neengaL?!! :=))

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
malligai
en thedugirergal veliye?
avan(r) atho ungalul!

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
tamizh padika nandraga irukirathu

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Hi Malligai,
Kaathal tholviyinaal maddhum ullam valipathillai...
enggi ethirpaarkum neramum
ullathil valiyai undupannum.
Ullatthin unarvugal
ekkaperumoochughalin suvarghalai urasum bhothu
eghiri therittha sinthanai varighalaa ivai?
Anbudan Anand

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Alaiyatheer , avai adakkam
ellai neengal aaveer adakkam,

kanavil vanthavan
kavithai aanaan
kalangiya ullam
kanal annathu,

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Alaiyatheer , avai adakkam
ellai neengal aaveer adakkam,

kanavil vanthavan
kavithai aanaan
kalangiya ullam
kanal annathu,

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Kathalithapothu yen Kayodu nindrai.
Yennai veetu senrai .. yennaku Vethanai Thanthai
Manathil Vaithein baramanai
Viliyil vaithein , yen Kaneeranai
Maraka ninaithein... Mudiyavillai
Irrakaninaithein ... Thairiyamillai
Vitu Senraiyeh... Unnaku Yenn Mel Kathal Illai
Marunthu Vittayeh... Neeyo Manitharillai.

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Yen, ipdi ellam pirivum, sogamumai? Azagai irukku. TT sir adikkadi solra maadhiri, Tamil post panra method padichuttu, neenga ovvoru post-um english as well as tamil-il potteenganna nalla irukkum.

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
aiooooo, revive panna vera thread kidaikalaya??

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
konjam purity, konjam stupidity, konjam tamil, konjam kavidhai, konjam fun, konjam seriousness, konjam life, konjam dreams.. this thread brings in nostalgia. adhaney, revive panna vera thread kidaikalaya??

Oldposts
14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Konjam tamil??...rest elaam Aangilathilaya eludhi iruken??

:))

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
Konjum thamil-nu ezuthiyirukkanum. Spell error! :))

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
tamil and thamil are wrong. it should be thamizh. periya thamizh pulavarggal...ithu kudevaa theriyaathu...cheh..cheh

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
vaanga thayee, tamil, tamiz, thamil, thamizh ellamey acceptable. konjam nanainjavudan, kudaiyai madakki vachuttu muzuca nanainjudara maadhiri.. compromise-nnu vandhachu. aprom romba deep-a paarka koodathu. kutram paarkin kavidhai illai.. :)

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
reviving

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
aiooooooooooooo.........

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14th November 2004, 12:17 PM
nanraga ullathu
thodaravum
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