Enai Kolathae

[Parthee]

Enai kolathae,
thudipathu un ithayam...
Kolvathu endral,
un ithayathai thirupi petru kol....
pavam ne!
pinathai than pinamaka vendum

[gragavan]

Hi Parthee. Good try. Please try to post in tamil. That will encourage people more to read your poems. Also post all your poems in the same thread. That will be helpful for tracking and providing feedback.

wishes,
Ragavan

[Amsa]

Kadhal valithalum sugamanadhu
Kadhal kondralum jeevan ulladhu
Idhayathai thirudhi kondral than swarisiyam
Idhaiyathai thirupi konthal than pinnam!!!
Edduthu konda idhaiyathai thirupi kodduka vendamey!
Vazhum idhayathai thirupi kodduthu yen pinnamaka vendhum!