mannan aachiyil makkal thirrpu

[kavithaipen]

kodunggkol aadchi puriyum
oru mannan
viithiyil sendraan
oru naal.

kuthirai miithu vanthavan
oru manggaiyai
kandu mayangginaan
kaathalaanan.

kalavaadi ponavalai
therinthu kolla
aasai paddu
irangginan kuthiraiyilirunthu.

aval pinne sendru
alagai rasitthu
oor adainthu
seyal ilanthaan.

kodunggkol mannanukku
atirchi kodukka
oore koodi irukka
angge oru tooku medai!!!

[crazy]

seriya puriyala :?

[kavithaipen]

selfish king/person leading life in his/her own way,
one day will walk himself foolishly into a trap which will end his life.
word would suit itself to us..we hv to suit ourselves to it

i dunno if this way of writing is effective , i m sorri.. just a method i tried.
i guess its a failure thn
:)

[crazy]

no ..not a failure...at all :) just took time to understand


thank you for ur explanation :)
keep writing :P

[kavithaipen]

thank u veri much for ur support
ths is good for me as i expose myself to many tamilians..
any mistakes pls do tell
let me learn frm the mistakes

[sundararaj]

Nalla muyarcchi...kavithaipen. :D

[kavithaipen]

anaivarukkum nandri