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Best regards for all!!

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A quick closeup of your lines in venba format! Enjoy your murukku and coffee!!

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Wow you are very fast madam! you are a born poet....I do not think rules and grammar can contain you for long....you will burst through them..!

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At your speed I might trip if not careful. Very good try. Have a nice rest and let's meet with your venba tomorrow...

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PP Madam, your compositions are becoming simpler to transform into venba format just within a try of 4 o5 stanzas in a matter of 2 or 3 hours the most. This is a real indication that your thoughts are falling into the mould of venba verse and as I proceeded to transform them, less and less changes were actually required or necessitated. You were able to speed too. My assessment is that you will require less learning time than many other normal students. Rhymes and alliterations were also easy. I am commending you for the merit in your thoughts and your natural poetical skills. So do not be confused. Have a nice rest. Bbye!!...

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