Originally Posted by Querida
Hey Chevy...uh yeah remember how i said don't say your stories are worthless...well now what are you going to say when you have made me read non-stop from chapter 1 to 11...and enjoying every single bit of it...the best part is that you bring up one really interesting bit and replace it with other stuff so that you wait and wait until you will talk about the one part that you mentioned earlier yet you relish the new parts we get each time....I was hoping throughout that my breaktime doesn't run out cause i wanted to know everything! Your structure though is haphazard that itself is an artform....i know you said it was fictional but you have just enough skill to show it as relatable (uhhh new word sure but i'm sure anyone who read this here could sooooo relate to something in your story) and highly amused at your take on it...ok now i seriously have to get to class....i won't be able to read your other stories until i get time again :cry: especially since it's crunch time here.....oh well so much for needing to stack up on holiday reading....you've earned a fan alright!
