I liked the "storm" poem too. Nice poem, replete with visual and aural imagery. Is this is what is called as painting with words? :D :thumbsup: You have good felicity of words.... keep it up :2thumbsup:
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darkening shadow
sits high on misting pane
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pitted sands,
petals, dewy-sliced
lay pierced remains
of the thieving drunk
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his beckoning words thrumming on taut string
the tapping syllables within the tin can tring