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Sri,
The problem with net at home continues for the 5th day today. Thanks for your comments. Length of the poem - I had a close look at. I long to take a longer route(ha..ha..ha..).
grammar? We'll discuss every now and then.
Tiruttakkan
hmm.... Physics, Quantum and relativity theories make great subjects for poetry, don't they? (Malligai: grrrrr grrr...)
Thiru, ungaL rasanaiyai rasikkirEn!
Will chime in after a break!
Thanks Cygnus!
Tiruttakkan
Cygnus,
Caught uu!!!!....Sudhakar plss pass that 'Saatai' u were talking about quickkkk...or she'll escape!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Cygnus
:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Geno,
thanks! TT will take some time to come back and question. He is presently in Himachal! ( what a time to go there?! in this freezing month amidst avalanches...).
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