Ahaaaaa Rami n Crazy .... :lol:
not like that .... will be here soon with the next saga :-) pretty sooooooooooon :-)
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Ahaaaaa Rami n Crazy .... :lol:
not like that .... will be here soon with the next saga :-) pretty sooooooooooon :-)
nice story Bingleguy :)
ENNA AACHU ? --- will we be soon saying AHA NUANCE !
:lol: Prabhu ;-) getting carried away is something .... but getting accustomed s unexpected ..... vandhudum vandhudum :-) delay kku mannikkavum
HALFBACKS
Aswath breaks the silence .......
naan decide pannitten ........................................
a wave of uncertainity ran past Sharmi.... she could not control her hands .... they were in dire need to be folded together and closing her eyes she wishes to pray ......
Please .... Please .... Please ....
but then reality made her to just clasp her hands behind her .....
Shree looked at Sharmi and felt her emotions..... but quickly before sharmi could sense that ... looked on to Aswath's eyes ... but couldnt talk....
enna, rendu perum ennamo pei ya paatha maadiri muzhikkireenga ... hello ..... said Aswath waving his hand in front of Sharmi's eyes .... enna ? anh.... and he gave a gentle giggle .... naan sonnadhu kettudhaa ....
anh ....... hmn ...
enna sonnen ......
decid ... decide pann ... itten nnu ssssonna .....
good .... enna decide pannirukken nnu therinjukka vendaamaa ?
amh.... h ....... hmn.....
while Shree broke the conversation between Aswath n Sharmi ...
hey ... Ashwa ... edhukku ippadi forcible aa pesara ...
cha cha ... appadiyellam onnum illa .... naan paatukku solli kittu irukken, neenga rendu perum ennamo Evil Dead padatha raathri pannandu manikku paatha maadiri muzhikireenga .... adhaan sonnen.......... and so saying Ashwath held his both hands into his pockets....
seri ... seri ... enna solla vandhiyo adha sollu ....
Aswath turned towards the entrance and looked at the top portion of the tiles.....
Shree clasped her hands and folded them ... then with on hand she quickly hit on the hand of Sharmi which had the nails well placed between her teeth ....
realizing the gesture of Shree, Sharmi removed her hands from her mouth and then looked at Shree sideways and the looked at Aswath......
He then turned and said........... i ve decided to move on ..................
Move ON .... adhu enna move ON ? quickly asked sharmi unable to control her emotions .......
pthhch.... sounded Shree looking at Sharmi .... avana konjam pesa vidariyaa ......
ok ok .... chill..... i ve decided....for once ...... i have to make a choice
enakku nyaabagam irukku .... he removed his hands from the pocket and folded them towards his chest ..... i ve been so lonely during my childhood ....
i ve always longed for company .... enakku brother sister yaarum kidayaadhu .... naan rendaavadhu padikku podhu engappa Dubai ponaar .... i was alone with my mom ...
we have a big bungalow at Calicut .... koopta kuralukku aalunga, enga poganum naalum car, appa rendu varushathukku oru thadavai varuvaanga ... Gifts ....... nirayaa vaangittu varuvaaru ....
but he doesnt stay for long ..... vandha vegathulaye parandhuduvaaru ............
mom ...... though she was busy .. she used to be very kind to me .... dad solluvaanga, naan engamma madiyila mattum dhaan thoonguvenaan .... hehe ... adhuvum katta viral amamyumyum ...
and they all laughed together ....
naanum dhaan........ giggled n said Shree ...........
everybody for a second forgot everything and laughed ......
ippadiye siricha maadiri irundha ennoda life ....azhugai nna enna nu theriyaadha life......... thideernnu change aachu ..... naan school la lunch time la mom kkaaga wait panni kittu irundhen ... varala .... gate kkum classukkum nadandhu nadandhu kovamaa vandhuchu .......... evening veetukku poi nanna thittanum ....
i will teach her a lesson ........... appadinnu enga gundu chechi teacher solra dialogue a solli kittu classukku poitten .....
Maths class aarambichadhu ......... i just then turned around the gate to see.........
Saga 25 : HALFBACKS is the anagram of FLASH BACK which counter s the say wat happenned earlier .... Wher somebody tries to Hook ... just done say Oh, OK :-)
ozhunga kadakadanu story-ai mudikkura vazhiyai paarunga :) enga ellaryum ippadi expectation Oda thavikka vaikaatheenga :)
Vasanth ... En ippadi oru pointla thodarum podareenga !! :confused2:
Ellam Naga sir kathu ... :argh:
Aana enakku next enna nadakkumnu theriyume :poke:
BG idhellam sariyilla.................... :evil:
anou akka, sonna madhiri kathiya mudikkira vazhiya paarunga :wink: :)
Hmmm
It is geting quick. Aswath explaining seemed a little ordinary. Only in movies do people typify their lives like that, in life people tend to believe their experiences are unique and resist putting them in boxes (koopta kuralukku aalunga, enga poganum naalum car....Gifts ....... nirayaa vaangittu varuvaaru....azhugai nna enna nu theriyaadha life ). But I guess this can be understood as someone trying to consciously rationalize why-he-feels-what-he-feels. Or to hazard a guess: why-he-does-what-he-does.
And of course it is too early for me to jump to any conclusion because you have ended with a signature hook.
It seems a bit strange and abrupt when Aswath refers to his parents as Dad and Mom even in third person. "Dad solluvaanga". Of course Aswath could be someone who speaks that way, so no issues. But you he says "engamma madiyila" and then says "mom kkaaga wait panni kittu". That seemed a bit jarring.
:) These details are your forte. I have been in this precise situation (at the receiving end) several times. And it is perhaps things several others have noticed but just left it there. To think of it and tacitly insert it in the appropriate place is clever and stylish.Quote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
Eagerly await the next episode.
Well, to reiterate he is from a rich background, and also is earning in dubai ... so something beyond rich.... as such Aswath has not opened this to anybody earlier ... n i wish i had shown the hesitation in a stronger way :-) which would have helped .....Quote:
Originally Posted by Prabhu Ram
actually he has been growing with his parents as a third person only :-) anyways that was not the intention ... some ppl have the habit of referring them explictly ..... one more answer to this comes in the next saga ;-)Quote:
It seems a bit strange and abrupt when Aswath refers to his parents as Dad and Mom even in third person. "Dad solluvaanga". Of course Aswath could be someone who speaks that way, so no issues. But you he says "engamma madiyila" and then says "mom kkaaga wait panni kittu". That seemed a bit jarring.
:) These details are your forte. I have been in this precise situation (at the receiving end) several times. And it is perhaps things several others have noticed but just left it there. To think of it and tacitly insert it in the appropriate place is clever and stylish.Quote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
:notworthy:Quote:
Eagerly await the next episode.
Well, to reiterate he is from a rich background, and also is earning in dubai ... so something beyond rich.... as such Aswath has not opened this to anybody earlier ... n i wish i had shown the hesitation in a stronger way :-) which would have helped .....Quote:
Originally Posted by Prabhu Ram
actually he has been growing with his parents as a third person only :-) anyways that was not the intention ... some ppl have the habit of referring them explictly ..... one more answer to this comes in the next saga ;-)Quote:
It seems a bit strange and abrupt when Aswath refers to his parents as Dad and Mom even in third person. "Dad solluvaanga". Of course Aswath could be someone who speaks that way, so no issues. But you he says "engamma madiyila" and then says "mom kkaaga wait panni kittu". That seemed a bit jarring.
:) These details are your forte. I have been in this precise situation (at the receiving end) several times. And it is perhaps things several others have noticed but just left it there. To think of it and tacitly insert it in the appropriate place is clever and stylish.Quote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
Eagerly await the next episode.[/quote]
:notworthy:
To quote PR
Eagerly waiting for the next episode BG :)
Vasanth-ku appa appa kathai ezhuthurathE maranthuduthunu ninaikuren... :) next episode enge... enge... enge?
:lol: :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Anoushka
Eagerly waiting for the next episode...pls post soooon....!!:)
Mannikka vendum makkalae ... :-)
Soooooooooooooon will update the next saga :-)
Vanakkam Daffodil :-) seems to be a newbie ... hope u ve read the earlier sagas :-) expecting your feedback on the same :-) u can PM me !
From weekly to fortnightly to monthly to..... bi-monthly ? :-(
NEVER FOREGO
Maths class aarambichadhu ......... i just then turned around the gate to see.........
my mom and dad getting down from my dad's favourite Merc .... a wave of absolute happiness came on my face and anybody could see all my 31 tooth .... i immediately got up from my bench and ran out of the class, while the teacher is still unaware that i am flying heights ... poor she.... didnt even notice me running out when she is busy talking towards the board .....
i just ran on the corridor to reach the steps and then ran on the school ground and jumped on my
dad, which made him almost fall .... He hugged me tightly and kissed me on my cheeks while my mom
was just folding her hands and enjoying our reunion
acha.......
eda kutta so sayin daddy hugged me again .... enda kuttan engana undu ?
ummm ... by the time, my mom took my hands and then left it again.
My dad took my hands and kissed on the forehand and put his hands into the pocket and turned back to my mom. Then he left me down, but i cligned on to him saying naan ningale vittu evideyum povilla.... achan enakku venum ..... daddy ende kooda thanne undaganam.. eppavum ..... i clinged on him almost tightening his neck...
Dad looked at mom n said something .... which i was least bothered to listen.... Then my dad slowly made me stand .... then he knelt down to my level and looked at my face calmly.... There was absolute silence ......
achan vegam iranganu... good boy alle. karayanda .... kissed me on my forehead and then got up. He took hold of my hands and then started walking back.... While entering the car, he said "Ashwa, a time will come when i will need u"
Sharmi moved back a little, and hitting on the wooden table, the tumbler fell and water splashed over the floor....
naan enna Frankenstein kadhai yaa solren ....With a look on the frigtened face of Sharmi .... Ashwath smiled
My dad told me that he may need me... now ... I am taking him with me to the States .... for his treatment .... veetula ellarumae ... He wanted me to do higher studies abroad ... and now i am fulfilling his wish, adhu avar irukkum podhe pannanum nnu aasa padaren ....
Ashwath folded his hands and turned his back, the time has come ..... adhoda .... naan inimae yaar naduvula vara maaten.... am gonna try giving a reason to my life .....
enakku theriyum, ennala inga nirayaa kuzhappam .... Ashwath moved away from them and slipped his hands in to the pocket .... and turned back to Shree
Shree ..... nee poi nnu ninaichadhu unmai ....
Sharmi ..... nee nijam nnu ninaichu poi .....
Sharmi wanted to ask something, but stopped ......
ennaala endha prachanai yum vara koodaadhu ..... idhu varaikkum naan nirayaa problems kku kaaranamaa irundhirukken .... well ... therinjum... theriyaamalum ..........
Sharmi could not control any longer, she bursted out with tears and couldnt control the emotions ran away from the place towards the room ....
Ashwath tried to stop her and go behind, but Shree stretched his hands and stopped him ... [i]avo ennoda poruppu .... Ashwath, tried seeing her face to face, but faced down ... and then looked up at Shree smilingly said ... Thanks Shree .....
naan poren ..... inimae naduvula nichiyamaa vara maaten .... i ve caused a lot of problems for u ... Sorry nnu sonna seriya poidaadhu .... but nichiyama adha thavira vera edhuvum ennala solla mudiyala .... sollavum .... theriyala ...... am gonna continue my further studies .... goin to States .... forever ......
He walked fast towards the door but slowed down when he slowly turned back to see Shree watching him.... he could see a drop n the corner of her eyes ..... Ashwath smiled...... She tried to manipulate that by turning to the other side .... and when she turned back again to see him ..... he is gone..............
Saga 26 : NEVER FOREGO is the Anagram for GONE FOREVER !
:omg: where is story going..................
i almost forgot the last episode :)
BG :clap: :thumbsup:
HI BG. Nice to read after a long time. Like crazy said, its so long that I almost forgot the last episode. I went back and read the last 2 episodes to come here.
Just a few chapters ago we saw Ashwath sounding sinister (in his remarks to Narasimhan etc.). I know that is long back for us readers but in the timeline of the story it is just days behind the current scene.
Considering there has been no great intervening incident except Shree's swooning, Ashwath's changeover seems a little sudden (unless you have something up your sleeve).
The plastererd hand,deja vu and the long lost Sathi Mathi still in the box we wait with bated breath.
Yes Bingle, me too almost forgot the last episode, while reading this current episode & that too in Malayalam also,
first I was thinking wat is going on???
Took a bit time to rewind the last episode :)
Author has gone to States, so the story too ;)
Keep going :) :clap:
DINT SHE SEE
He walked fast towards the door but slowed down when he slowly turned back to see Shree watching him.... he could see a drop n the corner of her eyes ..... Ashwath smiled...... She tried to manipulate that by turning to the other side .... and when she turned back again to see him ..... he is gone..............
Shree slowly moves forward with those sparkling droplets still on her face … she takes her right hand to wipe them off… she walks on the corridor to reach the center window….
Meanwhile Ashwa walks down the stairs to take the steps for to the road… Ashwa walks down to the mud road and halts for a second … He slowly lifts his head up to the left ………..
An Ambassador car speeds away on the road creating a cloud of dust …. and when they settle down, Ashwas could see Sharmi sitting on the front porch … she is sitting with her legs cuddled with her knees brought together … and her arms and face were resting on her knees …. She slowly lifts her chin up…. Looking at the car and then slowly turning towards her right…. Seeing Ashwa ….
Ashwa looks at Sharmi’s face from a distance, but could feel the heat of her tears near him… he then slowly turns back and looks at the window to see Shree ….giving him a stagnant look… he then shifted his face towards Sharmi…..
He takes both his hands and clasps both his palms and takes them towards his chin and then closes his eyes and gave a sound of sigh…. He then removed his hands and takes the key out of his pocket and removes the bike stand ….. where he slips for a second losing the balance of his bike ….
Ayyo …. A brief sound from Shree on top …. But he manages to get the balance and then mounts on his bike …. He starts the bike and uses his right leg to change the gear and accelerates forward ….. when he looks up again seeing Shree….. she gets up from the kneeling position and takes a sharp turn when she tipped off the table and spilt the tumbler … where the coffee was spilt on the floor …. Leaving a couple of sprinkled milk on her face ….
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Shree slowly moves forward with those sparkling droplets still on her face … she takes her right hand to wipe them off… she walks on the corridor to reach the center window….
Meanwhile Ashwa walks down the stairs to take the steps for to the road… Ashwa walks down to the mud road and halts for a second … He slowly lifts his head up to the left ………..
An Ambassador car speeds away on the road creating a cloud of dust …. and when they settle down, Ashwas could see Sharmi sitting on the front porch … she is sitting with her legs cuddled with her knees brought together … and her arms and face were resting on her knees …. She slowly lifts her chin up…. Looking at the car and then slowly turning towards her right…. Seeing Ashwa ….
Ashwa looks at Sharmi’s face from a distance, but could feel the heat of her tears near him… he then slowly turns back and looks at the window to see Shree ….giving him a stagnant look… he then shifted his face towards Sharmi…..
He takes both his hands and clasps both his palms and takes them towards his chin and then closes his eyes and gave a sound of sigh…. He then removed his hands and takes the key out of his pocket and removes the bike stand ….. where he slips for a second losing the balance of his bike ….
Ayyo …. A brief sound from Shree on top …. But he manages to get the balance and then mounts on his bike …. He starts the bike and uses his right leg to change the gear and accelerates forward ….. when he looks up again seeing Shree….. she gets up from the kneeling position and she tipped off the table and the tumbler with coffee spilt on the floor . Leaving a couple of sprinkled coffee on her face ….
Shree… ennadi idhu … innum china kozhandhai yaattum kaapi tumbler ai thatti vittundu irukka ….. nanna irukku po… ippo dhaan perukki thodachirukka … adhukkulla azhukkaakiyaachu …. Says Kamalam, Shree’s mom who has been walking up to her ….
Ennadi idhu …. Indha maadiri nerathula jaakardhayaa irukkanum nnu sollirukkenolyo …. Dho paaru … evvalavu thalli irukku table … indha nerathula enna exercise vendi kidakku ….
Seri seri … naan thodaikkaren, paaru … saayandharam mani aaru aagaporadhu …. Vilakkethu vaa ….
Dee, appuram nee ungaaathukkaarar oda chat pannum podhu, nekku pavazham vangindu varradha pathi sitha nyaabaga paduthidu ….. anga dhaan cheap aa kidaikkumaamae … ungappa vukku theriya vendam …. Enna, purinjudhaa … appuram idellam ennathukku nnu dhaam dhoom nnu paranukkum tharaikkumaa kudhippar …..
Ennadi idhu… masa masa nnu ninnudu irukka, seekiram ezhundhiru …. Vilakkethanum …. Appuram Vishnu sahasranaamam marakkaama sollidu …. So saying Shree’s mother was moving with the wet cloth towards the stairs ….
Shree was still looking perplexed at her mom, who was walking down the stairs and still she can hear her words ….. dee, vilakkethu ….. vaasa light podu ……….. ippove ivo ippadi yosichinde nikkaraale … ivo kai kozhandhai yoda enna panna pora …. Hmn … Narayana … ivale innum kozhandha maadiri dhaan irukkaa ....
Shree manages to walk but feels a kind of pain, like that of carrying a heavy load … and her right hand automatically goes to her hip where now she feels there is something odd on her body … she slowly looks down to find a life tht is bulging out from her belly ……
She slowly lifts the file in her hand to see the medical records with name Mrs. Shree Arun
I think i need to go back and read all the chapters again...Ore confusedA erruken!
I can't digest this SHREE got married? :cry:
I need to read one more time to give my comments :)
guys n gals .... u dont need to be confused about the whole story now ;-) just be confused about the way this one is presented .... can u find out something very very odd in this saga .....
Vasanth: enna vasanth ippadi conphis paNNureenga? :)
adhu dhaane indha story oda thaaraga mandiramae ;-)Quote:
Originally Posted by Anoushka
well, two things to be noted .....
>>>> a similar incident, in the SAME way happenning..... is it really happening ?
>>>> Arun ngra name engayo paatha maadiri illa ;-) ?
Hi BG anna, hru?
I just started to read your story. So far its going well. Very interesting story and the way of writing is really good. :victory: :thumbsup: Now i am in 2nd page. :oops: total pages 40!! :ashamed: :mrgreen: read panni mudichathukappuram matha comments poduren. :yes: :yessir:
Nice one BG ! I re-read the deja-vu paragraphs 2-3 times just to be sure. Finally you have joined the two lines of the story. Of course none of us is any position to guess what next. It is getting really interesting and a bit freaky too :-)
Carry on the good work.
Hope déjà vu has happend in this episode :redjump:
After shree split coffee ;) on floor, she might have thought of that she has ungerdone the experience of thinking that the same situation had occurred before
am I right bingle? ;)
One doubt i have... why u have mentioned Aswath name as Ashwa???
The other knot is Mrs Shree Arun... Entangling Sathi's Arun & Shree's Arun :wink: :wink:
As Prabhu rightly said , can't guess anything :huh: :shaking: :ashamed:
Hey Bingle payya kadhai :2thumbsup: :thumbsup:
what shree got married :shock:
when?
how?
where was I?
where is story going........... :roll:
Kadhaya nalla padinga Crazy :)
I am here just highlighting those area 4 u :)
Quote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
arthi: i dont get it! :(
pls do explain :)
Hey see the bold letter Mrs.Shree Arun
Neega ennOru murai saga padinga, puriyalai na naan sollaren :)
arthi i can see that shes married, but when and how?
aduEllam naama dhan purinjukkanum :roll:Quote:
Originally Posted by crazy
How & When-nuku ellam Author has to answer :D
sorry arthi for bothering u or for bothered u with my questions.Quote:
Originally Posted by Arthi
i did notice that mrs shree aruna, but i was just thinking when she got married :)
lets wait for authors answer :D
Kalyana foto-la neega enganu thedareengala? :roll: :roll:Quote:
Originally Posted by crazy
:lol: illai arthi, kalyaana veetila naan enga irundhennu thedurenQuote:
Originally Posted by Arthi
hi Crazy chellam, :DQuote:
Originally Posted by crazy
u dnt bother me, in one of ur posts, u asked when, How & all, so i thought u dnt come to know that she is married. :o :P
Bingle dnt explain abt the marriage. :) I think he wanted to stress the deja vu part :roll: :wink:
I can't guess the next episode, let the author come & disentangle the knot.