kadavul than kathal...........puriyutha...
athma thirupthikkaga elutha venum..kandapadi elutha kudathu.....kadavul illavitthal ulagil anbu illamal poividum.........purinthu kollunggal.
Printable View
kadavul than kathal...........puriyutha...
athma thirupthikkaga elutha venum..kandapadi elutha kudathu.....kadavul illavitthal ulagil anbu illamal poividum.........purinthu kollunggal.
Indira,
thank you.
Chella,
"kadavul than kathal...........puriyutha... "<<<
Oh apdiya? Purindu kolla muyarchi seigiren.
"athma thirupthikkaga elutha venum.."<<<<
Arumaiyaana varigal. Nischayam kadai pidikka muyala vendum.
"kandapadi elutha kudathu....."<<<<
hmm..Ungalai pol kavidai therchi illaiye? enna seivadu. Muyandru paarkiren. Sila nalla kavignargalin kavidaigal enakku vazhikatti.
"kadavul illavitthal ulagil anbu illamal poividum.........purinthu kollunggal."<<<<<
Enakku kadavul patri ellam avalavaaga teriyadu. Anbu daan kadavul pola. Etru koLgiren. Nalla karuthu.
Kadavulai PURINDU kolludal, ennai pOndravarukku siridu kadinam. Eninum muyarchikkiren.
Tangalin melaaana vimarsanangalukku en nandri.
nice poem shakthi.
ungal kavithaiyai veroru konathil irundhu paarkka anumathi tharuveergalaa? :-)
thaniyaaga naan
******************
anaikkindra uravugal
Inikkindra vaazhvu
purigindra paadhai
vilangum aasaigal
urangum manasu
irunthum...
thaniyaaga naan...
mudivilaatha porumaiyudan
salikaatha vaazhvudan
enai thedum manithargal.
en peyar iraivano?
******************
detached attachment eh?
nalla theme!
ithai ippO thirumbavum puthusA muyarchi pannunga shakthi. You wud probably do better!
:=)
//illaaadha Iraivanudan
mudivilada porumaiyudan
salikaadu vaazhgiren //--i like that.. :)
//detached attachment eh? //
OMGGG...i thought only i talked such 'wise' terms...looks like there r lots of us around...
:))
thx malligai.
Would try geno. I personally feel I have
not improved much. Nevertheless i shall try
Shakti,
udalum ullamum nalama?
Kavithai nandru.
Salaikaamal pohraaduvathuthaan
ethirneechalin tharmam,
salikaatha inbamum angguthaan jananam!
Anbudan Anand
Anand,
nalamE.
NeengaL nalama? long time no c.
neengaL sonnathu pOl kavithaikku
'ethir neechal'
enRu peyar vaiththirukkalaam.
:)
__________
Old version
____________
«¨½ì¸¡¾ ¯È׸û
þɢ측¾ Å¡ú×
Ò⡾ À¡¨¾
Å¢Ç¡í¸¡¾ ¬¨º¸û
¯Èí¸¡¾ ÁÉÐ
þÕóÐõ...
þøÄ¡¾ þ¨ÈÅÛ¼ý
ÓÊÅ¢øÄ¡ ¦À¡Ú¨ÁÔ¼ý
ºÄ¢ì¸¡Ð Å¡ú¸¢§Èý.
_________
Just tried out the same, crux now. I hope it has not turned worse :)
New version
___________
Ò¾÷ ÁñÊ Ҿ¢Â À¡¨¾¸Ç¢ø
À⾡ÀÁ¡ö ¸¢Æ¢ì¸ôÀÎõ º¨¾¸û
¯È׸Ǣý ¯ÈíÌõ ¯½÷׸Ǣø
þÉ¢¨Áî º¡Â¨Ä §¾Êò ÐÆ¡Å¢
¸¢¨¼ò¾ ¸ºó¾ ¸Ã¢ºø¸û
µöÅ¢øÄ¡ þ¨ÈîºÄ¢¨¼
ÁÉõ ¯¾¢òÐ ¯¼ý ¸ÕÌõ
¦¾¡¼Õõ ¦º¡ôÀÉò¾¢ý
¦¾¡¼Ã¡¾ ¸¨¾¸û.
þÅüȢ맼 ¦¾¡¼÷¸¢ÈÐ
þýÛõ ÅÇ÷¸¢ÈÐ
þøÄ¡Ð þÕìÌõ ±øÄ¡ÅüÚ¼Ûõ
±ý ¦À¡Ú¨ÁÔõ.
_____________
puthar maNdiya puthiya pAthaikaLil
parithApamAy kizikkappadum sathaikaL
uRavukaLin uRangkum uNarvukaLil
inimais sAyalai thEdith thuzAvi
kidaiththa kasan-tha karisalkaL
OyvillA iRaissalidai
manam uthiththu udan karukum
thodarum soppanaththin
thodarAtha kathaikaL.
ivaRRinoodE thodarkiRathu
innum vaLarkiRathu
illAthu irukkum ellAvaRRudanum
en poRumaiyum.
_________