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Originally Posted by Arthi
:roll: yaar pakkam ???? kadhaiyin mudivu pakkamaa ;-) :twisted:Quote:
Originally Posted by crazy
yes :PQuote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
i thought she meant the hub. meaning, u've come to the hub after a long time?
and yes, i'm still around. have been reading. but since i've lost the flow of the story, i'm unable to comment. i have to re-read everything. absolutely no time for that now.
hi fire :P
seeya after a very long time.
how r u? :)
:( :( my bad !!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire111999
hey crazy! i'm good. exams!!! so totally busy.
vasanth, the story is wonderfully narrated.. but could have faster updates :D
Fire, Good luck :thumbsup:
well Fire :notworthy: but i am trying hard to complete it on time ... m not able to write more than a saga at one point of time .... romba tight aa irukku ..... think i have to shorten the story and complete it asap .... :roll:Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire111999
thanks, crazy!
vasanth, no no! don't cut it down. just go with the flow. while we are eager for the next saga to come out, we like the way the story is going. u should become a full time writer to satisfy us :P
:lol: may be .... ;-) ys ....Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire111999
my next venture ;-) i would write it first n release it on time basis ;-)
:lol: i ve come up with the synopsis as of now .... ;-)
hi bg........absolutely enjoyed so far......hope u wont make us wait longer........good luck......& thank u for taking the time to write more........:-) suvai
hi bg
just got to read ur latest saga, dt feb, good. but i also read about ur shoban babu..may his soul rest in peace!??/ he has been cremated only yesterday at chennai,India. Deja vu?
Suvai :-) this is wat i would prefer too ;-) but time is sometimes not tamed ;-) .... i shall try my best to reduce the time gap ..... Again ... thanks for reading :-) your comments/compliments have driven me to a good shape !!!Quote:
Originally Posted by suvai
Thanks BTR ... i ve replied by PM to you .... on SBQuote:
Originally Posted by btr
Saga 35 : A Clue Phony...
ok sir ...no problem .... so saying the lady comes near the table and looks at Arun to say naan ukkaralaamaa ......
for a moment Arun is pretty much dumbstruck n perplexed ... he didnt have a word to say ...... well..... when he was about to talk ...... he could see Mathi emerging from behind her ..... with his right hand on her shoulder, looks at Arun and says oh already meet panniteengalA ? kool ..... when Sathi looks at him with a smile and said ... ys ... unga boring intro section ai skip panninan.... so saying they both giggled and looks at the still perplexed Arun .....
enna Arun ..... come back to this damn surface doc so saying gives a little jerk to him on his shoulders ....
Lost Arun ..... regains his senses and then smiles at the happy couple and shows his hand towards the seat and requests them to be comfortable... meanwhile the server comes back again sir ..... Mathi takes over almost immediately ...... and says
vaNakkam .........
vaNakkam sir ..... nalla irukkeengaLA ? romba natkaL aagivittadhu pola thonichu ....
ys ys prabha.... eppadi sugam ..... ?
sugathukku enna sir korachal .... neengal irukkureengO ... akka irukkirangO ... enga mudalali irukkirAru ... kadavul irukkirAru .... idhu aaru sir unga
kooda, unga nanbarA ?
omam Prabha .... enda friend dhaan .... peru enna theriyumA .... Arun ....
oh ... unga peru dhaanO .... vanakkam Arun sir .....
when Arun smiles at Prabakaran, a short and little stout man of the soil, his forehead reveals the thiruneer more prominently on his dark skin... with a white towel on his collars - resembles a typical bearer ....
enna sir sApudureenga ..... eppavum pola vaa ?
Ama prabha ....
sir kku ....
innikki namma special saapiduvAru sir ..... so saying Mathi winked at Sathi .... and they both looked at Arun ....
so wat brings you here .... Mr.Handsome ..... asks Sathi with a twinkle in her eyes .....
did u call me sweet heart says Arun, tilting his head slightly towards her and eyes towards Arun and winks again .... Sathi looks back at him, ungala aarAvadhu appadi koopiduvAngala ....
en ... enakku enna korachal ...
korachal onnum illai ... konjam jAsthi dhaan .... kozuppu[ so sayin she giggles at Arun, when hes left speechless .... they giggle continued with everybody for a brief moment ... when prabha comes back to keep the hot plates with steaming idly... served with a cup of typical sambhar, prepared with onion, murungakkai... and thengai chutney ... with a pinch of milagai podi with a drop of oil on its head .....
Arun waits for everybody to concentrate on the idly, while Mathi is so very excited about the steaming idly .....
wow .... hot hot ..... and looks at Arun amidst the vapours looking at Sathi .....
Arun ..... the word wakes him up from the concentration with a jerk ..... [indha ponnu azhagai pArthu mayangidAdheenga .... oruthan already andha mistake ai pannitEn so saying looks Sathi ... who with a baby face, pats him on his arm saying che... when Arun realized that he has been watching her with a pause .... says sorry .... i didnt mean it ....
dont be ... ivaru ippadi thaan, edhaavadhu joke adikkiren nnu kadichiduvAr .... ungala pathi sollave illaye Arun ....
well .... enna pathi solla onnum perusa illa..... just another practioner ....[so saying he takes the spoon to cut the idly, when he notices Mathi using his fingers to fondle the idly..... he keeps his spoon down to take the idly by his fingers ... when Mathi umn.... neenga spoon la sApidunga.... when Arun its ok ... i would also love to take it this way hearing which both smile ....
Arun... well, i better call him Mathi, just to avoid confusion..... Mathi sonnaru neenga ... um... some vu something .... ya reja vu la research panradhA .....wats that ?
well ys ..... tats deja vu, sorry to correct you..... deja vu ... tats a big encyclopedia by itself ... simple aa sollanum nna ..... a feeling which makes you think tat u ve already felt it ......
oh ... interesting ... so saying she came leaning to the table to listen to him more attentively .... when Arun backs and makes sure they have enuf distance for a conversation..... he takes the little tissue and wipes his lips ..... and takes a sip of water between his lips and folds his hands on the table .....
wont u let him eat sathi .....
oh tats perfectly alrite Mathi ..... well, Sathi .... this is not just a field of study ... its a piece of feeling which we all would have felt sometime or other in our life .... in reality, in dreams........and experience is at times related to dreams, although sometimes we feel that it really happened in the past.... kitta thatta ezhuvadhu percent say they have experienced it once .....
oh....
ys ... tats true ... enakku, ungalukku... en Mathi kku kooda irundhirukkalaam ....
ya ... correct added Mathi with a very serious tone ..... indha idly kooda ide maadiri dhaan soooda pona thadavai inga vandha podhu saapten ..... by the time he could finish ... everybody bursted giggling .....
oh cmon Mathi ....
ok ok ..... continue sir .....
well .... this is true .... many of us have felt the same ..... en ippo, innikki naama ukkandhu pesaradhai ... sometimes later in our dream or probably the next time when u come here with me ... talking about the same topic .... would make us feel the same ..... well, adhu ninaivugalA irukkum ... sila neragal la nijamaagavum irukkum ......
huh .... enakku marma novel kekkara pola irukku ....
um... idhuvum oru vidhamAna marmam dhaan ..... well, this is just scientific ... nothing beyond .... idhula pala vidhangaL irukku ...... erkanave paathadhu ... erkanave unarndhadhu ... erkanave vazhndhadhu ...
adhu enna erkanave vaazhndhadhu ..... marupiravi nnu solrAngalE... andha mAdiriyA ...
sometimes ppl confuse this with marupiravi.. rebirth ... etc ... infact idhu scientifically felt avvalavu dhaan .... sila samayangal la, sila vishyangal, sila facts romba clear aa gyabagathukku varum ... when Mathi suddenly brings his hand towards the water jug, hitting the tumbler with water splahing on the table .... oh boy ... i am sorry guys .... when he realized that he had water flowing towards his pants .... he moves a bit and says i ll be just back ..... n he moves towards the rest room ....
see.... indha maadiri ... say we getting together and talking abt this topic might happen again ... but not necessarily the tumbler should fall splashing water ... but appadi aachu nna ... then its kinda repeating itself .... something triggers our mind at that time .... tats wat am talking about .....
hmn ..... is this normal ... i mean, this kind of feeling ...
well... normal nnu solla mudiyAdhu ... this is kind of a disorder ... not major ... just minor memory disorder ....
oh .....
well... Sathi looks back at the rest room to see if Mathi is coming out ....
I am sorry to actually say this to you ...... tat too unga la meet pannina udaneye ...... i need your help......... when Arun rolls his eyes towards the rest room entrance to see Mathi over .....
Saga 35 : A Clue Phony is an anagram of CAN YOU HELP
STATUE OF LIBERTY is BUILT TO STAY FREE
wow !
normal-nu solla mudiyadhu :froggrin:
idhudhAn sooper vishayam :clap:
BTW... anagram-la oru "e" kuRaiyudhE !
paRandhu pOyiduchA ? :P
hehe.... thanks for pointing out :-) my bad :-) naan oru e extra pottuten :P ;-)Quote:
Originally Posted by madhu
thanks for your reading :-)
shapaaadi....evolo naalluku apuram dejavu..;-)
baley baley!!....kanaama pogaama ezhuthunga :-)
same here .... :oops:Quote:
Originally Posted by Fire111999
hi bb,
netruthan ninaythen, enru vandadhu un saga,
enna edhuvum deja vuva? :roll:
onru nalla puriyuthu, indha explanationiy padithu padithu, nan confuse anadhu nijam. :D
hello bb enbadhuku padhila, kuzhapiya mannan enru sollalama?///
kidding kee it up. I thought u had gone after ripvan winkle BUT :lol: gald you woke up in time.
btr.
hi bb
i have replied but i guess it is gone elsewhere.
good keep it up . but just do not compete with Rip wan winkle!
eppadi ethani thadavai solluvadhu? oh! edhuvum nadakum enre en ESP enro sonnadhu! ellama nijam than!
btr.
:) romba wait paNNa vaikaama next update quick please :)
:notworthy: and :oops: !!!!!
well .... naanum seekiram ezhudhanum nnu dhaan paakaren ... enna panradhu ... sila nerangalil neram othu varanume .....
at last ....story marandhu porathukkulla...next saga'va post pannunga :)
I am too blank to write more, cause, THIS PARTICULAR episode has made me ... kinda blank.
u know...Ive read this kinda feeling...this same thing...written by may be someone signed bingle guy......just those words flashing in my mind...and then a horse.... a shiny horse all white and glimmering...emiting fire....somewhre....or was it a book...or may be my life....not sure if its a feeling...or may be...Ive seen something like this... u know....the glass falling...hey... I KNOW IT...Ive felt it....the name....prabha....is it my name?.... ...sounds familiar....
oh bg...whats wrong with me :shock:
Whats happening! :shock:
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:wink: way to go buddy! :clap: rocking! :clap:
I took long time, cause I kinda forgot the recent episodes. I had to go back to the prev and then previous to previous ones :oops: to recollect the story. I almost had to hear shree shriek with labour pain....and then I remembered. Transported me to a diff world. :clap:
Saga 36 : Hi from Her !!!
I am sorry to actually say this to you ...... tat too unga la meet pannina udaneye ...... i need your help......... when Arun rolls his eyes towards the rest room entrance to see Mathi over .....
there was silence amongst them both, when sathi sipped a bit and kept her hands together with her fingers on her lips ... she rolled her eyes to her left and back staring straight at Arun ...
Mathi walks back to the place.. seeing them sitting silent ... says indha time ai utilize pannirukka vendAmO ... when both look at him with a perplexed face .... he chuckles and says ada... table thanni ... waiter ai kooptu clean pannirukka sollirukkalaame nnu solla vandhen ...
Arun replies saying .. oh well, its my bad ... nAn ... phone ... when Sathi sees Arun stammering sathi bows her head a bit and pushes the hair falling onto her eyes behind her ears and says Sorry .... i was asking about his phone .... he has an apple iphone u see ... adaan paakanum nnu ketten .... so saying looks at Arun with fixed eyes ... ok ok .... lets continue says Mathi - sitting at the table ....
Arun and Sathi giggled.... so unga deja vu matter continue pannunga .... what more tats all so saying Arun leans back to his chair and takes his hands back to his clasped them around his neck...
The waiter walks in with the order and serves their plates and leaves the place smiling ...
Arun could not keep his eyes on the Straits Times ... he keeps the paper down and lies down on his bed facing the cieling ... he sees her eyes everywhere ... removing his glasses, he turns back to see the pillow ... the lips embroidery on the pillows reminds him of her smiling lips ... he gets up and walks towards the mirror and keeps his hands on the dressing table and sees over the mirror to see her hands on his hair .... while he removes his hands from his hair to feel that reflection .... am i getting mad on her ... an agonising question on his mind makes him see her in everything ... Unable to control his feelings he takes the cover magazine and gets into the washroom ...
the sound of water gushing from the shower is being heard from ouside the washroom ... when there was much a silence near the bed ... the momentary mildness was disturbed by the buzzing mobile next to the glasses ... the buzz was just on for a couple of seconds and there was silence again ...
the bigger hand moves vehimently towards the number six ...when Arun opens the wash room door ... walking out with the white turkey towel on his head and his body bare ... seeing which Sathi looks down and clears her throat and a smile behind ...
Arun, taken back with her presence ... runs his hands below and turns back ... with a rush realizes he is still standing out - tries to run inside the bath .... when Sathi coming closer to Arun, hugs him tightly ...
Arun, who sees her reflection everywhere, couldnt resist her in his arms ... he slowly takes his hands and lifts her face up and sees her smiling with her eyes wide open ... they walk together inside the wash and she stands in front of the mirror ...
Arun walks behind her with every part of his touching every part of hers .... she picks up that signal and reaches for her buttons ... with her unbuttoning one by one down her white shirt ...
Arun keeps staring at her reflection on the mirror ... he takes control from the last button and turned her towards him in a flip ... lifting his head from from her heart ... he reaches for her cheeks and tries to rest on the lips ... when she moved her face with a grin on her face and her eyes closed ....
he reached for her thighs pulling them over and makes her sit on the floor ... she leans back when he follows her and bends .... he reaches for the light switch when suddenly she picks up the shower nozzle and throws at his leg .... hard ...
Saga 36 : Hi from Her is the anagram of Him for Her ..
hes an Admirer, he must be Married
Interesting. Please continue :)
Hi BG, been reading your stories before becoming a member in the hub. Great going...but please do continue the story...Pleaseeeee!!
:redjump: :bluejump: :redjump: :bluejump: :redjump: :bluejump:
I opted to drop my plan of waiting until the whole thing is done to read it continually :oops: ..the bane of the serial waiting continues..but not without its worth. Will there be more soon? :huh: :)
Any chances of him having a mental block??? :think:
Marriage has made him a busy man? :roll:
:lol: tooo cute...Quote:
Originally Posted by pavalamani pragasam
ahaaaa .... cmon folks :) no mental blocks n no marriage thadukkals :P just that i am not finding some time to spend on the plot :) idhukku nadula vera oru kadhai vera :P
thodarum viraivil ;-)
:happydance: :happydance: :happydance:Quote:
Originally Posted by bingleguy
Induces Shes Of
he reached for her thighs pulling them over and makes her sit on the floor ... she leans back when he follows her and bends .... he reaches for the light switch when suddenly she picks up the shower nozzle and throws at his leg .... hard ...
ammaaa .... sssssssshaaaaaaaaa ..... moments later he realizes that she has vanished with the hot water vapours and that he has missed the grip on the hand shower - that fell on his left leg... Feeling more stupid than before he gets out of the tub and walks to the foggy mirror ... clears the fog using his hand - where he vaguely sees his face .... he could sense that the feeling is just bad ... and he wanted to apologize to her ... but alas - he just felt the nerve of happiness ... he walks out of the room wiping his head with the white towel ... seeing which Sathi clears her throat and turned to hear back ....
Arun, taken back with her presence ... runs the towel below - before he could react - Sathi tries to walk out of the room ... oru nimisham continued Arun nAn change pannitu vandhidurEn, am sorry when he turns back n says to himself sh*t ... he couldnt react bad to her presence as he just dreamt of this same instance ...
ulla vAnga Sathi .... muttered Arun, quickly taking his hair back on his pyjamas n a tee...
I m ... i m so sorry .... i was tapping on the door - but found the door to be open ... i mean, neenga close panna marandhuteenga nnu ninaikiren ...... oru bayathula dhAn open panni ulla vandhen .... i ... i m terribly .... nAn thattitu .....
before she could complete - thats ok Sathi - i am very absent minded ... niraya thadavai nadandhirukku indha mAdiri ... please come... ukkArunga ....
thank you Arun .... n again terribly .....
adan solliteengale interrupted Arun .... and smiles at her ...
idu veedu illa ... so ennala edhuvum offer panna mudiyala ... should i order some drink?
illa, thats ok .... thank you
i.... ahem - clearing his throat asks Arun ... I didnt expect you here .... Mathi varalayA?
illa ... she vehemently answers in a sudden tone and realizes its too quick to put forth. illa, nAn mattum dhAn vandhEn .... nAn ... she slides up from the recliner and says .... nAn ... i guess i should not have disturbed you .... nAn varen .... and she moves across the wooden floor to reach the door ...
oru nimisham .... when she hears that and stops near the door and slowly turns back with her face seeing the floor ....
you wanted to tell me something ... neenga munnadi meet pannina podhe solla try pannineenga ... but, donno why you didnt want to say.... may be i thought u wanted some time to think over ... ippavum neengala dhaan thedi vandhirukkeenga, so i feel its important - edhuvaa irundhaalum dhairiyama sollunga ...
illa ... i should not have come without Mathi ...
adhAn vandhuteengalE giggled Arun ...
she looks up to him with a straight face .... when he realizes her seriousness ... ok ok, i was just kidding ... i didnt wanna force you ... sollanum nnu thonichunna solunga... illa, folding his hands with his lips tightened and looking at the door ....
that was rude .... so saying she turned back, opened the door and walked away
wat the he.... Arun could not control his anger - vandha ... trying to imitate her says "i m ... i m so sorry" ippo rude .... bullsh.... he sits on the recliner and lays back seeing the ceiling ....
Sathi walks down the steps decorated with carpet and desginer work ... walks over the reception swiftly without turning.... where in the reception area, a man who was reading a news paper gets up and walks slowly in her pathway .... Walking over the footpath, Sathi took her fingers upto her eyelashes to clear off the tiny drop... making sure nobody notices, she walks over the crossing ... making sure he does not catch her attention - he began watching her closely. He still had those papers in hand, just in case.
In the street busy with crowd preparing for friday evening, Sathi walks rapidly... he was trying to be much closer to her, but he could not make it through the very known streets.... he speds for a few yards and stops perplexed, the first thing that came to his mind ..... did she vanish in thin air???
Induces Shes Of is the anagram of She is confused !!!
You would LISTEN when you are SILENT !!!
An ace of an anagramist! :clap:
Very interesting, do continue :2thumbsup:
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seekiram thodarattum !!!