two creatures
tethered
stalk each other
one brutalizer
one brutaled
one beater
one beaten
one's monstrosity
spins in angrish violence
the other's
pitiying crime
believes its fate
deserved....
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two creatures
tethered
stalk each other
one brutalizer
one brutaled
one beater
one beaten
one's monstrosity
spins in angrish violence
the other's
pitiying crime
believes its fate
deserved....
:P
Hi Crazy :)
just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
*re-sound de sounds*
al-one-ways
di-vide-dee-di-vine
sub-mergeds in germed-suds
v-ainit-y aint vit v-anity
dul-drums um drul-dums
sin-sear-city, sin-scar-ity
found fou und fond
be-leave-ebbs-by-lies-be-sott-by-be-très-all
ad-ditch-shun...add-is-sham
al-one-ways
fyi
*und - and in deutsch
*très - very in francais
*re-sound de sounds*
Interesting, meaningful, poetic experiments! :clap:
nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Querida
Speechless!! That good!!Quote:
Originally Posted by crazy
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Originally Posted by chevy
:) wordless ..maybe
queri : :thumbsup: :2thumbsup:
I love the last three :D...different from the rest and it has something that wants you to read those again n again :)