Trying out a new writing style - Chapter The First

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28th July 2005, 09:31 AM
a.ratchasi

3 months pirragu than revised first chapter re post panrikerinngale, athe thaan mean pannen!
28th July 2005, 09:32 AM
Badri

Not just revised...also completed...

By the way, comments onnum kanoom? :roll:
28th July 2005, 09:53 AM
a.ratchasi

Badri, no worries, I will revert asap once finish reading. :)
1st August 2005, 03:08 PM
a.ratchasi

badri, you have progressed well since your first entry. I like the way you handled the history of Yati; especially on Hothrim Supa.

Hope to see more of it soon. :D
2nd August 2005, 07:58 AM
Badri

Thanks, AR!!

Will try to squeeze in time to do some serious writing!!
3rd August 2005, 11:56 AM
scorpio

Badri,

At last, I have finished reading it..Sorry, I know i'm quite late.

U left us on a cliff..Initial pages were a bit of a drag but once Valthor convinced Nambi that the eye works in reality, the going was very gripping.. You can pat yourself on yr back for keeping me hooked from the 12th page onwards till the end of first chapter, given the fact that I also had a minimized window with 'my fav. book' :wink: open and didnt feel the urge to do an Alt+tab... :)

If you really want to hear criticism, it is to do with yr long sentences that demand the full attention of the reader, who, may not catch the subtle satire beneath if we choose to read fast & skip lines.. Thankfully, your punctuation was perfect that eased up the effort required to read lengthy descriptions.

Liked the way you invented names, especially Roomurr Myll :lol:

Give us more, Badri..Good work!!!!
3rd August 2005, 12:08 PM
dev

Badri,

Inga enna kathai vittitu irukinga???... :wink: Ok...let me read thru the previous posts first & get back...:)
3rd August 2005, 03:31 PM
dev

Hey Badri,

I just read the 1st post... really loved it... Felt like I went for a ride in the time machine to the purana ages...Extremely interesting... Will read thru the revised 1st chapter soon...
5th August 2005, 05:27 AM
Badri

Quote:

Originally Posted by scorpio

You can pat yourself on yr back for keeping me hooked from the 12th page onwards till the end of first chapter, given the fact that I also had a minimized window with 'my fav. book' :wink: open and didnt feel the urge to do an Alt+tab... :)

WOW!! Now, that is some achievement!!!

Thanks a ton, Akka!! Will try to work on it more and get out more chapters

Thanks, Dev..looking fwd to your comments after reading the revised and completed chapter!
5th August 2005, 07:00 AM
Surya

Badri Ji,
Very Nice!!!! 8) Obviously even better than the first chaps/posts. The wait was worth it! Luv the names BTW! :thumbsup:

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