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Originally Posted by NOV
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:confused2:Quote:
Originally Posted by NOV
I think thats a movie title.
forget that, pls continue. :D
Did you mean to say "My Brother...Nikhil"?Quote:
Originally Posted by NOV
Anyway, I'll continue... where was I? :confused2:
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“Rishi,” I called out. He looked up. “Who is Nikhil?”
“He…he’s my friend.
Friend? He doesn’t have many friends. There were some young boys his age around the neighborhood and some at the Montessori he attends. Probably one of them is named Nikhil.
“Where does this Nikhil stays, sweetie?” I asked.
“Ingethan, pa. He stays with his family at the corner house,” he replied. The corner house? I thought no one stays there. Gosh, I should be more observant about my surroundings. Fancy not knowing your own neighbors.
“Ok, fine. So what did this Nikhil guy tell you about amma?”
“He knows things, pa. A lot of things…he sees everything,” Rishi says.
“Everything?”
“Everything that happens here…when you’re not around,” came the reply.
I wished the ground would just open up and swallow me now.
Absolutely terrific!!!
Is Chitra BAD? :argh: :rant: :curse: :angry2: :angry2:
Or is Rishi possessed? :shock: :shaking: :frightened:
ah... so is it spooky? adulteration?
I am waiting :)
you ARE A GOOD story teller!
I'll post the rest tomorrow...til' then, keep guessing :yessir:
I suspect that Rishi has been abused and that he is fantasizing about having a friend Nikhil.
Classic case.
You just made my day! :cheer:Quote:
Originally Posted by Shakthiprabha
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Maybe...maybe not :mrgreen: Nevertheless, your remarks seems to have given me second thoughts about changing the climax! Should I? Should I not? :think:Quote:
Originally Posted by NOV