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oops..read as:
Tiru,
//±ý ¦À¨Ãò ¾¢ÕΧÁ¡
±ýÈ ÀÂòмó¾¡ý.
À¨¼ôÀ¡Ç¢Â¡¸ §Â¡º¢ò¾¡ø
¯ý ÀÂõ ¦¸¡ïºõ Ò⸢ÈÐ! //-¯í¸ÙìÌõ ¯í¸ ¸üÀ¨ÉìÌõ þý§É¡Õ 'wow'...
//ÀÌò¾È¢× ÁÉ¢¾ÛìÌ ÁðÎõ.
ÀÌì¸ô §À¡É¡ø ±ò¾¨É
Å¢¾Å¢¾ô ÀÌôÒ? //---õõõ...¯ñ¨Á!!
:))
wow §À¡ð¼¾üÌ ¿ýÈ¢ ÁøÄ¢¨¸!
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TT
I am writting on your next poem in Kavithaiku kavithai.
Fearing an eloboration which might affect the continuity of the Kavithaiku kavithai, I am writing my comments here.
The Ontological domain in which you have positioned your self is a bit above the rest... Great efforts needed for this.
The challenges you have posted are basicaly dual pitched. one on the introspection and the second is on the effect of it on the world. ( Being in itself and Being For itself?). From a philosophical view point, you have succeeded tremendously in explictly bringing out them. Kudos for you on this!
But, there is a specificity which has blurred the generality of your observation. The poem mentioning the cloning has those lines very specific on that . That jarrs the flow of the challeng's generality. THis is just my observation on my dimension.
with regards
Srimangai
:-)
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Hi thiru sir,
For last three more days i am trying to upload my verse..but it gives one error named "foul play". What happens?..anything firewall problem?...yennaal kavithai upload panna mudiyaathaa???
Please try to rectify this problem.
Gautham
if the post is too long then it won't allow.
Gautham,
I am not knowledgible in this regard. Geno,Sudhakar,Cygnus or someone should be able to help.There is no firewall anyway.kittaththatta ellaarum ippadiththaan aarambiththOm.Edhaavadhu pirassanai irundhadhu.indha foul play samaasaaram naanum anubaviththathuthaan.
tiruttakkan
Hi Geno,Sudhakar,Cygnus,
Anybody help to rectify this foul play uploading problem...plz
Gautham, like Kajan said, if the post is too long a message comes up saying " we suspect foul play..."
Try posting a few lines first and break it into portions if need be.