Indigo

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Originally Posted by Querida

My Apologies to those who find profanity in poor taste...but I could not convince myself to change what wanted to be written.

Aloneso and Dolores met
on a Warm Sun Shiny Day.

It didn't last...

the weather i meant.

As the two were
thrown together
by a thundering Tornado

They realized that nothing
was too sacred to sacrifice
when you are scared shitless

And so they parted hereafter
knowing their love
was not worth
a Hurricane.

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Down-to-earth! :lol:

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Originally Posted by Querida

Im and Er
Were not appy, ealthy or even umourous two.

two did not eed own parents.
two did not eed own friends.
two only did wat was needful.
so now two learned eavily.
two own earts cannot be on eart.

but atleast two made it Happen.

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Splendid imagination! Great Q!

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Originally Posted by Querida

what happens now and then
cannot be as unusual
as the things you take for granted
not happening at all.
many may not be breathing
to see that very day,
when everything you've known
makes no sense nor does it obey
whatall you thought and taught.
so merely see how merry
things are as you have always
known them to be
thought what happens now and then
may alter it does not take away
what you or me and too few others
can depend on day through day.

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How true!

Thank you PP Maam for your encouraging and thoughtful comments...I actually re-read the last scribble and have decided to tweak some lines...hopefully it makes it flow more.

a challenge that has too long suffered me too great
to ignore the sheer uncivility in en masse manners
when attempting to reach a diaphanously destined place

how pitying that serenity is too fragile
uncouthness sharpened, annoyance shrilled
how then i realize what use is there in worship
when i am jostling with a haggle of disrespects
and every meditative thought has been rubbed raw
and strained beyond derisive irritation

and so avoidance loosens my grip on displays of venerated virtue

Oh Dearest Unattainable
how could you ever love
such ugly beings
all flawed
all feigning perfection
all undeserved
including this
cantankerous
complainer

A quite understable frustration and disappointment at one's young years! We grow old and cold!!!

new born twinkle
led astray
left alone
seeks selflessly
a glimmering path
it knows it should return
it knows itself too well
yet it knows of not much else
but it follows trusting
of nothing existant.

Now the seance began
upon the table, rapt tapping
an unsteady, paranormal rapping
voices boomed
and in tongues much was spoken
hands grasped tightly
and eyes shut tightly
but in their young hearts
all of it they took lightly
into their future they
were about to spy
of what all they saw
filled their mouths with
unscreamed cries
as one by one they
saw each player
die
until no one had a hand to even grasp tightly
till only darkness whether or not eyes were shut tightly
and no more could their dreadful fears be taken
even remotely lightly
and so with all their meagre, mental strengths
they struggled to end it all
NOW

THE SEANCE BEGAN...

Nice build-up of suspense though I got an inkling of doubt!!! :lol:

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Querida
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