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Originally Posted by Querida

Hey NM let me see what the poetry society deemed (no matter what you say :P ) worthy enough to be published...please? :D

your avatar by any chance isn't a bouquet?...reminds of the one my mom had for her thrice-knot-tying :wink: :)

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u are absolutely right, queri and that's me holding it... :lol:

hmm...my poor poem......let me rescue it from my drawer somewhere at home...Ok?

Querida ..i love this thread really ...

there are some people who's posts i search and read ....

u are one of them !!

Hey Pooja thanx gurl...how about you? Write any poetry?

I love your signature: GIVE ME A SANE MAN AND I WILL CURE HIM FOR YOU :lol:

*added later

you know Pooja I was just thinking...these ARE my confessions...every single on of them say something about me that I cannot express in straight forward ways yet rather struggle to capture the immensity of the feelings which pursue each thought and written word

Hi Q...

eppadi irukeenga
sowkiyamaa..
unga padippelaam
eppadi pOgudhu
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em...
-bharaniidharaa

Hi XlntB! :D

yes studies are going well...I'm very happy with the courses I have now...neengal sowkiyamaa? Hoping to write after a change of scene but will see :)

Queri...here's my very simple poem....

LOVE

'Will I ever find it again?"
"Who will that be now?"
"When will it be?"
Questions of Love
Poured in and out of my mind
Day in and Day out
Months went by but Love never came
Nevr entered my life
Years flew by and I finally realized
I will never find Love again
Till I met You
The Love of my Life
You swept me off my feet
You make my heart flutter
You make me blush
You make me do things I've never done before
My Dear Lover
Thanks to YOU
I have finally found LOVE

:oops: :oops:

oh NM how so very sweet :D ....it's simple but truth is best in simplicity no?

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I await a realization...
one that has been a long time coming
a long time waiting
to be seen for real.

I await a realization...
to slacken surprised mouths
to crease optimistic brows
and quiet delighted eyes
and see the dreams of wonder mist out.

I await a realization...
one where encounters prove as stories
and fame all-told seeks to be untold
to be re-told
as nothing shy of true simple imperfect realization.

Queri.....how kind you are... :D
but nothing can beat your poems ..every single one is different...and nice.....

the only way that you could know more than
all that i have captured from fleeting visions
from memories that do not belong to me
is to catch me falling within the ticking reality
and make them flawfully fated

even though deja vus warned of familiarity
to keep you away
from staying and letting conscious control leave
only after lived and seen through unmisted eyes
themselves dreamy bittersweet blinks
that no one must know
but you and i and our moments

Hello to those who care to read this thread...i for awhile strayed from this thread thinking after having the opportunity to travel that i would be able to come back with something new...little did i know that though feeling rejuvenated...my poetry seems cyclical...to the point i ignored the lines that formed in my mind....and now i think it is only after i write them out that i will be (hopefully) to also rejuvenate and even guide my poetry to new and different directions. I deeply all who have posted their comments (probably cause most of you have been so supportive) but just as before I welcome criticism as well...it will only help me grow.