A place to discuss kavithaikaL produced at kavikku kavi

Topic started by Kajan (@ wc09.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on Sun Nov 30 03:03:16 EST 2003.




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«¾ý ÍðÊ :
http://forumhub.com/poems/15261.05.50.57.html
þîÍðÊ¢ø ¯ûÇ ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ÀüȢ ¸Õòиû , Ţɡì¸û, Å¢¨¼¸û ÁüÚõ À¡Ã¡ðÎû ¡×õ þíÌ þ¼Ä¡§Á .

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Dear friends,
this is a place to discuss poems produced at kavikku kavi. discussion and comments may disturb the series of that thread . So I kindly request to u all to use this thread to discuss those poems.

regards
Kajan

Old responses

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À¢ÃÅ¡¸¦ÁÎ츢ÈÐ ±ý ¬Åø. ////

¦Ã¡õÀ ¿øÄ þÕìÌ! ¸üÀ¨É ÅÇõ źôÀθ¢ÈÐ.

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Shylaja, konnutteenga!! college-kku cut adichittu, veppa maraththadi-yil utkarndhu ezuthiyirukkeenga.. nalla oxygenated poem. paarattukkal.

pp madam

ÀÊôÀÊ¡ö ¸Å¢¨¾, Áɨ¾ ´§ÃÂÊ¡ö ¦ÅýÚ Å¢ð¼Ð.

Á¢¸ «÷ò¾õ ¦À¡ó¾¢ó¾ ¸Å¢¨¾

Thanks, Shakthi!

Shy,

"¸¼óÐ §À¡Ìõ ¸¡ò¾¢ÕôÒ¸û..."---very nice Shy...

PP,

//Òò¾¢§Â¡Îõ Ôì¾¢§Â¡Îõ
¸½ìÌô §À¡Î ¸îº¢¾Á¡ö!//---aiooo, ithu enaa enagaiyum '¸½ìÌ'-¾¡É¡ ¿£í¸?? :)) :))

SHAKTHIIIIII,

WHERE R UUUU??..u r disappearing too often.. :)

"ÜðÊ즸¡ñ§¼¡õ"--nala iruku..

:-)

Shakthi / PP

orae kaNakku vazhakka irukkae... enna vishayam :-))
ella vishayathilaeyum kaNakku paarkkaatheenga...

:-)

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„ì¾¢ ¸Å¢¨¾ ¿ýÈ¡¸ þÕó¾¡Öõ ¬Æõ þø¨Ä

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¸½ìÌ ÅÆì̸¨ÇÔõ Á£È¢ÂÐ Å¡ú¨¸.>> ÅÆ쨸 Å¢ðÎŢΧšõ, ¸½ìÌô §À¡ðÎ ¸ðÊ «Š¾¢Å¡Ãò¾¢ø ¸ðʼõ ¯Ú¾¢Â¡¸ ¿¢üÌõ.«ýÈ¡¼õ ¸½ìÌô §À¡ðÎ (=§Â¡º¢òÐ, º£÷à츢 ÓʦÅÎòÐ)¸¡Ã¢Âí¸¨Ç ¿¢¨È§ÅüȢɡø ÌÆôÀí¸û ̨ÈÔõ Å¡öôÒ «¾¢¸õ.

þÕ ¦¿Õí¸¢Â ¦º¡ó¾í¸Ç¢¨¼ ¸½ìÌ ÅÆìÌ Åó¾¡ø «Ð ¯ÈÅøÄ...>>"¾¡Ôõ §ºÔÁ¡É¡Öõ Å¡Ôõ Å¢Úõ §ÅÚ"!!!"ÅÕÓý ¸¡ôÀÐ Òò¾¢º¡Ä¢ò¾Éõ"(§À¾í¸¨Ç!)

"¸½ìÌ ÀñÏÅÐ" ´Õ «¸òÐ¨È ¦º¡ÄŨ¼ ¬¸¢Å¢ð¼Ð ¾¢¨ÃôÀ¼ ¯ÀÂò¾¡ø. ±ý§É §º¨Å - ¦Á¡Æ¢ìÌõ, þÄ츢ÂòÐìÌõ!

:-)

PP

nalla kavithai.

aakkamum azhiththalum
aaNdavan seyal...
kaathalin seyalum athuvO...?
athanaalthaan
anbae kadavuL
enru aanathO... ?

good thought...

:-)

¸¾¢÷,

¸Å¢¨¾ Áɨ¾ ¦¾¡Îõ ¿¢ƒõ

:-)

kathir

abaaram. uNmaiyaana thaedal.

:-)

"«ÅºÃõ" «Æ¸¢Â ¿¢¾÷ºÉõ!

:-)

PP

«Æ¸¡É ÌÆó¨¾
«Æ¸¡É §º¨Ä
«Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾

:-)

Thanks,Suresh!

>„ì¾¢ ¸Å¢¨¾ ¿ýÈ¡¸ þÕó¾¡Öõ ¬Æõ þø¨Ä <

ÜðÎÅÐ ¦ÀÕìÌÅÐ , ¸Æ¢ôÀÐ , ÅÌôÀÐ - ¸½¢¾õ
ÜðÎÅÐ ¦ÀÕìÌÅÐ , ¸Æ¢ôÀÐ - Íò¾õ ¦ºö¾ø

þ¨Å ±øÄ¡ÅüêìÌõ §ÁÄ¡¸

«ýÀ¡ø ´ýÈ¡¸¢ ÌÎõÀÁ¡¸ þÕì¸ ±ñϨ¸Â¢ø Å¢¾¢Â¡ø À¢Ã¢óÐŢ𧼡õ.

þùÅ¡Ú ¿¡ýÅ¢Çí¸¢ì ¦¸¡ñ¼Ð À¢¨Æ§Â¡ ³Â¡ ?

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þÕ ¸¡¾Ä÷¸û ÜðÊ즸¡û§Å¡õ (¾¢ÕÁ½õ ¦ºöÐ ) ±ýÚ ¿¢¨É츢ýÈÉ÷
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AIOOO SORRY AGAIN FOR POSTING COMMENTS THERE!!!
:( :(

Kathir,

//¦¾¡¼ÕÁ¡ §¾¼ø
ÁÚÓ¨È Å¡ú¨Å
Áýò¾¢ý ÁÊ¢Öõ?// --aioo, ithu ena, engalai elaam soga paduthanumnu mudivu paniteengala?? :)

Ponathu elaam pogatum vidunga...anything that is lost doesnt belong to us...today is all we have...
þýÚ þó¾ ÁýÈõ þÕìÌ, ¿ðÒ þÕìÌ, ¿ñÀ÷¸û þÕ측í¸, ¿õÁ ¸Å¢¨¾¸û þÕìÌ...þÐ §À¡Ðõ...

CHEER UP!!! :)

§º¨Ä «ÆÌ : Íʾ¡÷ ź¾¢

þôÀÊìÌ
¦Àñ º§¸¡¾Ãí¸Ù¼ý À¢Èó¾Åý

«ôÀ¡ ´Õ ÅƢ¡ ÀðÊÁýÈõ ÓÊïÍÐ.

:)

ÁøÄ¢¨¸ ¸Å¢¨¾ ú¢ìÌõÀÊ¡ö þÕó¾Ð

«¼¼¡! „ì¾¢!ÀðÊÁýÈõ ±ô§À¡Ð ÐÅí¸¢ÂÐ?§º¨Äì ¸ÕòÐì¸ÙìÌ ´Ðí¸¢ ¸¡ò¾¢Õó¾Ð.º¡ìÃËŠ ¦º¡ýɨ¾ ÅõÒìÌ þØò¾¢Õó§¾ý!

ÀðÊ ÁýÈÁ¡ À¡ðÊ ÁýÈÁ¡ ?? ( ºÃ¢Â¡ ÀÊì¸¨Ä «ÐìÌ ¾¡ý §¸ð§¼ý †¢ †¢ (Á¡Á¢ì¸¡ ... ôÃÀ¡ì¸¡ «Ê측¾¢í¸ µÊð§¼ý þ§¾¡)


(( «¦¾ýÉ Š†ì¾¢ ??))

ÅõÒ¼ý
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¾¡ò¾¡ì¸û þÕôÀ¾¡ø À¡ðʸÙõ þÕôÀ¡í¸ôÀ¡, ³öÂôÀ¡!
ÅõÒ ±í¸ÙìÌõ ÅÕõ...ƒ¡ì¸¢Ã¨¾!
±îºÃ¢ìÌõ... 'Š¨Áø' ă¡!

Shy,

:)) :))

¿øÄ¡ ¦º¡ýÉ£í¸...ÀÚ¢ø¨Ä Å¢Îí¸...³ÂôÀý ²§¾¡ 'ÅõÒ' mood-la þÕôÀ¡÷ §À¡Ä þÕìÌ..

M, ¯í¸ ¸Å¢¨¾ "±Ð «ÆÌ??" - ±øÄ¡§Á «ÆÌ. ±ýÉ þôÀÊ ±ó¾ Å¢ºÂõ-É¡Öõ ¦ÅÙòÐì ¸ð¼ ¬ÃõÀ¢îº£ðËí¸? Å¡úòÐì¸û.

ºÃ¢.. ±Ã¢Á¨Æ - §Åñ¼¡õí¸. ±Ã¢Á¨Ä-¡¸ þÕí¸ (preferably a dead volcano). «Ð¾¡ý ºÃ¢.

«ôÒÈõ.. // Ponathu elaam pogatum vidunga...anything that is lost doesn't belong to us...today is all we have... þýÚ þó¾ ÁýÈõ þÕìÌ, ¿ðÒ þÕìÌ, ¿ñÀ÷¸û þÕ측í¸, ¿õÁ ¸Å¢¨¾¸û þÕìÌ...þÐ §À¡Ðõ... //

a paper to scribble
to forget what went wrong,
a shade to rest
when tired and dishevelled,
a stick to guide
when mind goes blind,
a shoulder to cry on
when all else fails,
a sentence to read
if i need something to lead..

:)

PP

:-)

Ž¢¸¨ÁÂõ «Õ¨Á. §À¡É Å¡Ãõ Å¢¦ÈâóÐ ¸ðÊ ¸¢¦ÃÊ𠸡÷ð À¢ø¨Ä ¿¢¨É×ôÀÊò¾¢Å¢ð¼Ð... ( ¿È ¿È...)

:-)

Kathir & PP,

unga iruvarin kavidhaiyum nala iruku...

//a shade to rest
when tired and dishevelled,
a shoulder to cry on
when all else fails, //---Wow, very nice Kathir!!

PP,

//ÀÆ¢ §Åñ¼¡õ//--superrr ¸ÕòÐ...ºÃ¢Â¡ ¦º¡ýÉ£í¸ :))

Kathir,

'º¢Å§É', ¿øøøÄ¡ þÕìÌ... :)

¬É¡ §¿òРŨÃìÌõ ¿øÄ¡ò¾¡§É þÕó¾£í¸...þô§À¡ ±ýÉ ´§Ã
º¢ÅÁÂÁ¡ þÕìÌ??

:)) :))

:-)

ÁøÄ¢¨¸ìÌ À¾¢ø ¦º¡øĢ¢Õ츢§Èý ±ýÚ ¿¢¨É츢§Èý... ¸Å¢¨¾ìÌì ¸Å¢¨¾ þ¨Æ¢ø... :-))

:-)

Suresh,

first part of the kavidhai rompaaaaaa nala iruku...
:)) :))

//¬ýÁ£¸õ ´ý§È
¬ñ¸ÙìÌ ¸¾¢... // OOO, «ô§À¡ ¿£í¸ ±øÄ¡õ ¬ýÁ£¸ò¨¾ §ÅñÊ §À¡¸¨Ä¡??...§ÅÈ ÅÆ¢ þøÄ¡¾¾¡Ä ¬ýÁ£¸Á¡??..þô§À¡ ÒâﺢÐ...

:)) :))

:-)

¾¢ì¸üÈÅÛìÌ ¦¾öŧÁ Ш½...

:-)

M, thanks.

:))