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andRu oru naaL
Topic suggested by Shilpa on Thu Apr 15 13:55:07 .
Hi all,
This is my first attempt...
Please give it a read and give your comments/suggestions
Eagerly waiting for your words
Shilpa
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chandy (@ 209.*) on: Thu Apr 15 14:57:39
Hi shilpa :
Good maiden effort! keep it up!
A few suggestions :
- I found some your sentences too long. It'd be good to narrate in smaller sentences.
- I was reminded of Mani ratnam's Dil Se when i read your story :). You started off well, but seem to have got a bit lost somehere midway - the theme as well as narration. I guess your intention was to narrate things in "as-&-how-one-would-think" style. But this back-and-forth movement hasnt been very effective.
Your description of gokulashtami and its preparations made me feel very nostalgic :)
I'm sure you'd do much better your future stories!
chandy
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babu (@ 198.*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:24:18
good one shilpa, keep it up
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aruLarasan (@ psip*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:32:40
shilpA,
very good one. the ending, which is not there, is great. pAttiyin "samaththA nIyE velagiNdudu" advice is ...
excellent.
endhA Uril indha kadhai nadandhadhu. nAval pazham parichchu thinnuvadhA!... you have touched some subtle points
in this story very well. good job. the general theme of the story (as i perceive - life goes on) is beautifully
brought out. your pi.ku is more interesting than the story itself.
btw, is shilpA a punai peyar? the name and the story don't seem to go hand in hand :-))
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shiva (@ user*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:34:22
good effort considering this is your first story...paaraatukkal shilpa ..
but EnOa intha incest, gay, child molestation kathaigal nerya varuthunnu ennaala purinjikka mudiyala..
athuvum ungalOda first kathaiyilaeyae nInga antha subject aa thotirukkeenga..maybe theres a wrong concept that touching these subjects makes the story different...
apart from that there were some long sentences which made reading dificult..
an overall good effort..
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babu (@ 198.*) on: Thu Apr 15 20:53:48
Shiva,
maybe theres a wrong concept that touching these subjects makes the story different..
I cannot resist commenting on this line of yours. (since I too stand accused - nilAk kAthal)
That statement makes me feel that you assume authors go about hunting and/or inventing concepts such as the ones you have mentioned above. Thats not true, sadly - I can vouch for that. A story is actually a reflection of what one sees in life, its a verbal rendition of the various facets of life. The fact that some are not comfortable with such concepts is regrettable, but that does not mean that one should not venture into the realities of life. Would you be happy if all the stories talk about the 'conventional' love, about how the hero pines for the heroine (by standing in the bus-stops for instance) ? Don't you think Tamil Literature would be claustrophobic with such mundane topics ? Do you think there would have been a "sila nErangaLil sila manithargaL" or a "mOga muL" if poeple had not dared to write socially 'unacceptable' concepts ? ( I am not comparing the my stories to them, let me remind you)
The fact that Shilpa deals with such a touchy subject with finesse in her/his very first story itself is commendable. Keep it up shilpa.
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shiva (@ user*) on: Fri Apr 16 09:09:31
mmhmm...at last that triggred an argument..huh??
perfect babu!!! i did'nt say NO...'NO' to such topics at all...
i did'nt write such comments when each of u
touched on such subjects...but this comment was the outcome of the increasing nature of such stories in this thread...and maybe an apprehension that writers digress from such mundane topics as love(???) to make their story conspicous...
i knew this wud be an "egg or hen first" paradox.
i wud'nt be elated At ALL if all the stories touch LOVE subjects..c'mon isn't there anything else?... friendship, humour, sci-fi, real-life, autobiography and what not??
that does'nt in any way rule out that u shud'nt touch these sensitive topics...but those are increasing...thats what is alarming...
and lemme be clear, that does'nt, in any way take the credit of the way in which shilpa has written this story..
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Ramki (@ pm06*) on: Fri Apr 16 10:13:31
Shiva and others, we now have 55 stories in this forum. Out of this, 3 deals with homosexuality, one with adultery(ennoda kathai hahah) and one about incest.
Its 5/55 . But this small percentage of so called 'abnormal'stories seem to have bothered quite a few readers here.
This really intrigues me. As Babu had mentioned,these themes are not authors invention or imagination -they are reflections of whats happening and happened in our society . We cant neglect them saying its not rite to talk about such concepts when it is very much happening.
All these 5 stories (and others too)werent explicit ,they were approached and written with much maturity and sincerety.
So lets not stop or discourage people from venturing into such themes
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Ravi Sundaram Sun Sororiyan (@ 192.*) on: Fri Apr 16 11:59:4
Ramki,
Almost all the popular tamil magazines have editors who decide what gets
published. But not here. No one can stop any one from publishing any
story on any theme.
The wide variety of themes you talk about is quite recent. Just 2
months ago, sexual themes dominated the stories forum.
I agree with your observation that even debutant authors have
shown great maturity and sensitivity in handling the sexual themes. here.
The fact that incest, homosexuality etc exist in the society is not really
a justification for *fiction* based on it. **Nor** the fact that it is
considered taboo by many a **prohibition**.
For example, Time Travel does not exist. But wonderful fiction is
written based on Time Travel. Sexuality exists. But not all sexual
themed stories make great reading.
So let us read/write/enjoy/discuss stories that make a good reading,
be the theme real, imaginary, complex or taboo. As long as there is
a wide mix of themes with no one theme dominating, I'll keep
coming here for more.
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Reka (@ atl-*) on: Fri Apr 16 12:07:06
ok! Time for a sorry:-( and a smiley:-)
Since its still April, thought i'd pull another one......
Chandy, AruL, Babu, Shiva, Ramki - thanks for your wonderful dissection!
More than the story, your arguments have made this page read-worthy :-))))
Coming to the story, Chandy, i cant help but write long sentences. When i try to trim them, it disturbs the continuity. Next time, i'd pay more attention to the narration too.
Dil sE? hmmm:-)))
AruL-
Shouldnt u have been content that my character's name goes hand in hand with the story? u had to ask for more:-) btw, my real peyar too doesnt suit the story:-(
nAval tree was there right in Madras in my granny's house and never failed to give atleast a handful of fruits for every gOkulAshtami. sadly, 2 yrs ago my granny sold her house to a flat promotor/builder and the first thing to go was the tree:-((((
Shiva, how can we be sure that a person has not written a portion of his/her autobiography when writing about incest, gay, child molestation?????
One can never say!! I wanted to experiment with a familiar theme and hence i chose this.
As babu and ramki have already pointed out, these stories are not always a piece of fiction but real things that have troubled us sometime during our lives and story-writing serves as a vent to our otherwise locked-up feelings
TGIF:-) gotto go!!
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aruLarasan (@ psip*) on: Fri Apr 16 15:51:15
sUriyan,
The fact that incest, homosexuality etc exist in the society is not really a justification for *fiction* based on it.
nothing justifies anything at the deepest level. if reality cannot be a justification for fiction what else can be? we
can all happily live forever in the land of stooges (they are my greatest heros, that's besides the point :-) )
now for everybody,
one story of gOkul's was about gay marriage (mudivu), one was about incest (manaveLi oru sila mirugath thadangaL) and
two were about adultery (oru payaNa kuRippu and akkA). please don't say we don't have to write about adultery. his other
stories in the hub are maraNam, peyarillAdha kadhai (i like to call it agrahAram), nirangaL, azhivu are quite off-beat.
i have read his other stories (sorry gOkul to say this here) which he has chosen not to publish here which are very good.
maraNam, peyarillAdha kadhai, nirangaL were posted on jan 1st and azhivu on Apr 1.
one story by kAnchanA (kanA kaNdEn thOzhi nAn- Mar17) was about gays. other stories by her were totally different and dealt
with finer aspects of our mundane life. oru kELvi and kAdhalin maRupakkam were posted in mid-feb and the others were in
march and now there is an X. she had posted her stories at regular intervals.
rAmki posted few stories way ahead of others and his serila mAthA pithA guru vadham was the only one that dealt with
adultery, even though two of his other stories dealt with sex and love.
pae stories, except for muttai parOttA, were nothing close to sex or love or other "unspeakables" of our hypocritical
life.
probably, none of us could appreciate PJK's stories. (it is stupid of me to write such a statement but it's way
for me to vent my anger. sorry) his thamizh was very different from the chocolate quoted fake thamizh of sujAthA's and
his clones we are all used to. he has probably altogether left this hub for lack of any appreciation of his
stories. this is a sorry state of affairs.
rAdhA sanjay wrote three stories very early in this forum and one of them was about adultery (vElaikkAri). the other two
were fabulously sweet "homely" stories.
bAbu wrote kolai, nilA kAdhal and nERRu varai nAn. except for nilA kAdhal, his stories weren't about taboo issues.
sUriyan wrote two: varasidhdhi vinAyagar and erichchal vandhadhu EnO? which one of them is unlikable?
i am stopping the listing here with the oldies. the recent wonders shivA, bull, aruLarasan, rEkhA, what can we say about them.
i have tried to list here the stories that did not deal with the taboo issues and you could see many of them were published
here before "recent phase of rekindled interest" in this hub. if only stories which deal with adultery and incest and
gays affect us more, then it means that (1) those stories were written in a powerful manner; (2) we are not able to
digest what's written there; (3) maybe we are afraid of something. is it xenophobia?
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Udhaya (@ 205.*) on: Fri Apr 16 21:54:13
Shilpa/Reka/Aishwarya/Michelle Pfeiffer,
whomever you are, "Andru Oru Naal" is a classic in narration. By listing the young girl's everyday routine and slowly weaving in the danger that's possible amidst our mundane everyday life, you've handled domestic horror in the best possible way--subtlety. Understatement makes the issue rage.
Handling inflammatory material doesn't make a writer gratuitous. Only those getting off on the taboo nature of the written material in a wink-wink-nudge-nudge manner is the truly troublesome thing about such fiction. A keen look at every so called "troubling" story in the forum shows the absolute class and care given by all writers in this forum.
I've already mentioned my sentiments about writers catering to readers' tastes in the last part of Ramki's "Maadhaa Pidha Guru Vaadham". A writer is not a Jukebox. . .
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Reka (@ atl-*) on: Sat Apr 17 01:02:51
Ravi Sundaram Sun Sororiyan- thank you!
Udhaya, it is a real pleasure to read your comments. I owe it all to you for the support and encouragement you have given me always.
Thanks a million!!!!!
AruL, thanks for including me (and yourself) in the recent wonders:-)))))
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sun/sooriyan/ravi sundaram/ravilyn sanders (@ 192.*) on: Fri
aruL: My point was that fiction does not need
justitication. I illustrated with an example
too. One does not have to say " I wrote about
the because it happens in
the society". It is always the authors
peroregative to choose the subject.
The theme mix is refreshingly varied and wide in
this site. It is hard to believe some of them are
first time writers from the style/ sensitivity/
naLinam with which they have handled even the
tough subjects.
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rama (@ 202.*) on: Tue Oct 26 15:45:58
whatz this nothing is decodable?
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Venky (@ ineh*) on: Tue Oct 26 16:45:11
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Sugrutha (@ 1cus*) on: Sat Apr 29 18:36:28
Shilpa,
As someone said your story's potency was multiplied by weaving that dangerous moment into a deceptively normal day. These things have probably always happened in our society but swept under the carpets for the sake of not disrupting harmony in the family. Buit imagine what these little girls and boys go through for a very long time after these incidents. Some of us have had first hand experience, so we are careful with our children. But some of us never exposed to these incidents, and for such of us these stories are enlightening and educative and helps us to take care with our own children.
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kumar (@ ) on: Mon Aug 13 11:26:40
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chitra (@ 61.1*) on: Mon Sep 10 11:36:48
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sri (@ 203.*) on: Tue Oct 30 01:19:10
Dear all
Kindly send some of your stories.
wishes
sri
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raj (@ sdca*) on: Sat Nov 17 18:57:00
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Somanath (@ 61.1*) on: Fri Nov 30 07:12:09
Hai,
I am not able to get the story since my system is not supporting tamil fonts. what to do to get it?
or Shilpa can put in both versions..
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web_park_2000 (@ ppp9*) on: Mon Dec 24 08:12:13
can you send tamil incest stories pls
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web_park_2000@yahoo.com (@ ppp9*) on: Mon Dec 24 08:12:20
can you send tamil incest stories pls
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mehwish (@ ws1.*) on: Wed Dec 26 04:05:06
hey shilpa can u send me some storeis in english not in any other laguage plzz
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Siva (@ 195.*) on: Sat Jan 26 04:08:30
Nice Work - For Lonely Men like me in Desert!!
Siva
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SIVA (@ 195.*) on: Sat Jan 26 04:09:40
Nice Work for Lonely Men likeme in Desert.
SIVA
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sangeetha (@ 61.1*) on: Sun Mar 10 17:56:13
priyaaaa neenga enna story eluthi irukkinganu enakku theriyala..thappa ninaikathinga aioooo athai padika than kuduthu vaikala...bez en kitta tamila padikara software illa
any how
nalla eluthunga
enonda vaalthukal
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ram (@ dial*) on: Mon May 27 11:59:07
hi gals if any stories u ahve with u pl send it to me at balki01@indya.com
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Booty (@ ) on: Tue Mar 11 02:12:23
Send me tamil incest stories, in english please, since I'm not able to get the tamil fonts.
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surya (@ 202.*) on: Fri Mar 28 12:10:19
hi it's very good story girl.
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kathai priyan (@ ool-*) on: Fri Apr 4 13:51:06
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mana (@ 210-*) on: Wed Jul 2 07:37:39
kindly post me true tamil incest stories pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesd
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anbu (@ 195.*) on: Fri Jul 18 10:35:26 EDT 2003
Please help me to read this story. inform me which font used in this story.
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¬! %$^@ «ïºø!
It is definately not ekalappai!
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arun (@ 210-*) on: Tue Aug 5 07:18:33 EDT 2003
pls enaku tamil a incest stories (englishla )anupunga ippo naan type panninathu pola thanglishla type panni poda solluraen ethir parthu irukum naan nandri
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s g (@ 61.1*) on: Mon Aug 25 08:42:29 EDT 2003
Ms. Shilpa,
iam 23. working with a graphics company near hitec
city in hyd.recently i developed an interest in stories. i just happened to
check out the site forum hub. you have written some stories there but i
couldnt read bcoz of the font variations. but i hav read the reviews of
readers. now iam all the more tempted to read the stories.
would u pls send them to me .
hope to work with u more.
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rajini (@ ppp-*) on: Thu Sep 4 08:19:58 EDT 2003
Dear shilpa,
You have written some stories there but
Obviously I cant find any story in there
But I can c some font, which I dont even know wat language is that?
Very funny is people commented it
I was wondering wats wrong with people,
Nothing on the board people commenting
I puzzled couple of minutes and finally I found that
Couldnt read due to font variations
Why is that happening?
Plz advise me an the same ASAP
Am sorry if am offending u
THANX
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JOHN (@ cach*) on: Sun Sep 14 09:34:26 EDT 2003
SHILPA,YOUR STORIES GIVES ME GREAT PLEASURE.PLEASE SEND ME SOME INCEST STORIES IN ENGLISH
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prince (@ 219.*) on: Sun Oct 12 15:47:26 EDT 2003
pl sent more incest stories