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7th February 2005, 06:18 PM
#1
Junior Member
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newbie's poem
Hi All,
I am a newbie to the forum as well as writing poems. Here is my first poem. Review and give your comments.
Situation: A guy is just visualizing his lover and singing this..
«ý¨É¨Â ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý «ýÀ¢É¢§Ä
¬½Åò¨¾ ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý «Æ¸¢É¢§Ä
þÉ¢¨Á¨Â ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý þ¾ú¸Ç¢§Ä
®ðʨ ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý ®Ãì¸ñ½¢§Ä
¯ñ¨Á¨Â ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý ¯ûÇò¾¢§Ä
°¼¨Ä ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý ÀÕÅò¾¢§Ä
±Ç¢¨Á¨Â ¸ñ§¼ý ¯ý þ¨¼Â¢É¢§Ä
²ì¸ò¨¾ ¸ñ§¼ý ±ý þǨÁ¢§Ä
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7th February 2005 06:18 PM
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7th February 2005, 07:58 PM
#2
Administrator
Diamond Hubber
³Â¡, «ÆÌ ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢§Ä..!
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8th February 2005, 12:53 AM
#3
Senior Member
Veteran Hubber
Female-Lover's Reply:
Å¡í¸ ³Â¡ ¬ñ «Æ¸¡ ¯¸ó¾ ¸¡¾Ä¨Éò §¾Î¸¢§Èý
¿£í¸ ¦º¡ýÉ ¾Ì¾¢ ±øÄ¡õ ±ÉìÌ þÕìÌ ±ôÀÊ? ±ýÉ?
²í¸¢ì ¸¢¼ìÌõ ¿¡§É «¦Áâì¸ò ¾Á¢ÆÅû ¦ÀüÈ Á¸û
À¡íÌ ÀñÀ¡ô §ÀîÍ ¯ó¾ý §¸ðÎò¾¡ý §Á¸Å¢Î ৾¡?
§Á¸Å¢Î àÐ «ó¾ì¸¡Äõ ±É ¿¡ý ¿¢¨Éì¸Ä¡§Á¡ ?
¾¡¸õ ¾£÷ìÌõ ¸¡¾ø ¦¿È¢ º¢ÃﺣŢ ¾Á¢Æ÷ «¸-¿¡ëÚ
§Á¡¸õ §ÁÅ þǨÁ ÐûÙõ ±ý ÅÂÐ ¦º¡ø§Å§É¡?
§Å¸õ ¸¡Äõ ¬É¡Öõ ¸¡¾ø ±ýÚõ ŠÅ£ðÎ ±ý ÅÂÐ !!
Most INVALUABLE TREASURE is.. Time.
Spend it MEANINGFULLY Spread effectively.
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8th February 2005, 03:47 AM
#4
Senior Member
Senior Hubber
Venkat,
neenga first attempt-la pass aayiteenga..good...
but kavidhai enavo end aagadha maathiri oru feeling..just an opinion, ok...neraya eludhunga...
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8th February 2005, 03:47 AM
#5
Senior Member
Senior Hubber
Sudhaama,
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8th February 2005, 08:29 AM
#6
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Sudhamma,
±ÉìÌ ¸ø¡½õ ¬Â¢ÎîÍ!!!
±ý À¡¼Ä¢ø ²¾¡ÅÐ ¾ôÒ þÕó¾¢îÍýÉ¡ ¦º¡øÖí¸...
need your comments...
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10th February 2005, 06:39 AM
#7
Senior Member
Veteran Hubber
"«ô" À¡öóÐ ÀÈóÐ ÅóÐ «ýÀ¡ö «¨½ò¾¢ÎÅ¡ö
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Á¡¾Å¨Ç ¦ÅÚí¨¸Â¡ö ¾¢ÕôÀ¢É§Â Å£ñ §À¡?
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§Á¡ºõ ¦ºö ¬ñ ÌħÁ ¦Àñ ±ýÈ¡ø §À¨¾Â§Ã¡?
§Åºõ §À¡ðÎ ±õ¨Á ²Á¡üȢ ¸¡Äõ §À¡§Â §À¡ö
§¾ºõ Å¢ðÎ §¾ºõ Å¡úóÐ À¡÷òÐô Òâ󧾡§Á
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Å¢¼¡Ð À¢ÊòÐ ¯ý¨Éì §¸ûÅ¢ §¸ð¸ ¿¡ý ÅÕ§Åý
«¼¡Ð §Àº¢ÊÛõ ±¾¢÷òРţº¢Îõ ÒШÁô¦Àñ ¿¡§É
«¼¡Ð ¯ý ¿õÀ¢ì¨¸ Чá¸õ Á¨ÉÅ¢ìÌõ ±ÉìÌõ
¦¸¼¡Ð Å¡úóÐ ÅÕõ à ¾Á¢úô¦Àñ ¿¡ý "«ô"-À¡÷ !!
Most INVALUABLE TREASURE is.. Time.
Spend it MEANINGFULLY Spread effectively.
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10th February 2005, 10:34 AM
#8
Senior Member
Regular Hubber
hi venkat..
hi venkat.. enna ippadi thideernu pottu udaichitteenga! sari vidunga.. unga kavidhai muyarci nalam. that too, thamiz ezuththukkalil.. indha hub engira kutrala aruviyil kuzippatharku ododi vandha engalai yematradheergal, ezuhdunga venkat, ezudhunga!
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