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  1. 5th May 2005, 08:38 PM #101
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    very cute

    as for your candyman....just shudder to think how this is a true scenario somewhere...
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  3. 8th May 2005, 06:15 PM #102
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    Jannal oruma.....

    Dear Friends,

    This is my first ever try at Tamiz Poem,
    I do not write Tamiz, I can't write.
    I write what I speak in Engllish.
    If I make a mistake, please have a large heart and forgive me.

    Jannal Oruma.......


    Moodi vittu kadhavugal,
    Mudaindhuvittu kadhaigal,
    Ennodu ninaivugal..
    Ellam Artham Illadhu vin pechi.

    Jannal valiyaghu varum katril,
    Ippoddhu Vasanai illai.
    Jadhi Malli chadi
    Kanji pochhu.

    Aaghayathil udhikkum Vennila
    Oru magghi pona
    panji urundai matrum dhaan.
    Chanda Mama oru Shakuniya Mari vittar

    Oru nodiyil
    Ulaghame mari pocchuda.
    Naan dhan oru paithiyum,
    Indhu Jannal orama
    Katrii Irukkirain.

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  4. 9th May 2005, 04:25 AM #103
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    oh Nichiro must your tamil poetry be so melancholy as well?
    nevertheless you have expressed yourself well
    clever to use such a image of waiting at the window,
    these lines are quite striking for me amongst the rest:

    Jannal valiyaghu varum katril,
    Ippoddhu Vasanai illai.
    Jadhi Malli chadi
    Kanji pochhu
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  5. 9th May 2005, 06:52 AM #104
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    "oh Nichiro must your tamil poetry be so melancholy as well? "

    I ask the same question Q asked
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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  6. 9th May 2005, 09:04 AM #105
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    Re: Jannal oruma.....

    Quote Originally Posted by Nichiro
    Moodi vittu kadhavugal,
    Mudaindhuvittu kadhaigal,
    Ennodu ninaivugal..
    Ellam Artham Illadhu vin pechi
    N....
    Arumaiyaane beginning.......
    Aanaal, rombe thaan sOgum!!!
    Why Pa??
    Anyway, keep it up.......!
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  7. 9th May 2005, 12:06 PM #106
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    My First Tamiz Haiku

    Hello Friends,
    My first ever Haiku in Tamiz is as follows.
    My vocabulary in Tamiz is very limited and also my language poor.
    Please correctme/help me in choosing the right words.
    Thanks.

    Tamiz Haiku #1

    Uppin Vilai

    Kadavul kanniril matrum uppu veithar'
    Kodi Kodi yugangalil pengal vitta kanneer dhaan
    Ippodhu Ezhu kadalaaga maRi vittadhu .



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  8. 9th May 2005, 12:09 PM #107
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    Re: My First Tamiz Haiku

    Quote Originally Posted by Nichiro
    Hello Friends,
    My first ever Haiku in Tamiz is as follows.
    My vocabulary in Tamiz is very limited and also my language poor.
    Please correctme/help me in choosing the right words.
    Thanks.

    Tamiz Haiku #1

    Uppin Vilai

    Kadavul verum kanniril uppu sumaindhar,
    Kodi kodi yugangalil pengal vittu kannir dhan
    Ippodudhu ezu Kadala mari vittudhu.

    Nichiro
    Nichiro

    Just a small suggestion:

    Kodi Kodi yugangalil pengal vitta kanneer dhaan
    Ippodhu Ezhu kadalaaga maRi vittadhu

    Spelling and words, that is all.

    So now venturing forth into Tamizh haikus too!

    congrats!
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  9. 9th May 2005, 12:10 PM #108
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    By the way in Kadavul verum kanniril uppu sumaindhar, what do u mean by Uppu sumaindhar?
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  10. 9th May 2005, 12:17 PM #109
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    Hi Badri That was quick.
    What I want to convey is that
    God put salt only in tears.
    How do you put it correctly?
    Thanks for your help.
    Look forward to corrected Haiku
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  11. 9th May 2005, 12:46 PM #110
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    Looks like you have corrected it already and made it "veithar"

    But then, kaneer is not the only thing with Uppu, dear sir!!
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