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    two creatures
    tethered
    stalk each other
    one brutalizer
    one brutaled
    one beater
    one beaten
    one's monstrosity
    spins in angrish violence
    the other's
    pitiying crime
    believes its fate
    deserved....

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    :P
    Anbe Sivam

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    Hi Crazy

    just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?

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    *re-sound de sounds*

    al-one-ways
    di-vide-dee-di-vine
    sub-mergeds in germed-suds
    v-ainit-y aint vit v-anity
    dul-drums um drul-dums
    sin-sear-city, sin-scar-ity
    found fou und fond
    be-leave-ebbs-by-lies-be-sott-by-be-très-all
    ad-ditch-shun...add-is-sham
    al-one-ways


    fyi
    *und - and in deutsch
    *très - very in francais
    *re-sound de sounds*

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    Interesting, meaningful, poetic experiments!
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    Hi Crazy

    just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
    nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
    Anbe Sivam

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    Quote Originally Posted by crazy
    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    Hi Crazy

    just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
    nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
    Speechless!! That good!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by chevy
    Quote Originally Posted by crazy
    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    Hi Crazy

    just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
    nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
    Speechless!! That good!!

    wordless ..maybe
    Anbe Sivam

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    queri :

    I love the last three ...different from the rest and it has something that wants you to read those again n again

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