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18th November 2004, 10:38 AM
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That’s Why...
Everything you do
Resembles me,
Every Happiness you got
Erased my sorrows,
Every smile you delivered
Retrieved from my lips,
Every dreams you faced
Became real for me,
Every step you marched
Fulfilled my wishes,
Every touch you did
Blossomed me the flowers of feelings,
THATS WHY....
Every poem of mine
Has you as its Theme.
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18th November 2004 10:38 AM
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19th November 2004, 12:35 AM
#2
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wow well written.
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19th November 2004, 08:46 AM
#3
very well try...flow is nice....try to make coincident in endings like "yethuhai"
From u nothing expect except ur friendship
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19th November 2004, 09:20 AM
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Thanx 4 ur compliment Querida
Originally Posted by
Querida
Thanx 4 ur compliment Querida.
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19th November 2004, 09:22 AM
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Thanx gowtham
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gautham
Will concentrate on yethuhai and Monai very well on upcoming poems ...Thanx 4 ur compliments
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