Varam Vendum

[Parthee]

vasamika malare,
unaku kidaitha bagiyum...
enaku ilaye,
aval kunthalil suda......

melliya isai ezupum koluse,
unaku kidaitha bagiyum....
enaku ilaye,
aval kaladiyil saran adaia....

kathoram lolake
unaku kidaitha bagiyum....
enaku ilaye,
aval kathail en kathalai solla...

enaku ivay evai enum
onraga enaku varam vendum...

[adsort]

Nice One. Whole new different thoughts, keep it up Parthee

[gragavan]

parthee maatikitaaru! yaaru parthee athu all the best.

regards,
Ragavan

[Parthee]

Ragavan,

Kavithaiku poi azaghu undu.

[Sudhaama]

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Penhnhin Badhil ( REPLY from the Girl) :

Paarthiyaa vasiyam mihu vaarthaiyaal eerkiraar
"Paarthi" enum Aanh Azhahar kaadhalaal virumbinaroa?
Paarthaarai mayakkum en azhahinaal mayanginaroa?
Paarthu vaa Malar, Kolusae, Loalaakae noattamidu.

[gragavan]

Ragavan,

Kavithaiku poi azaghu undu.

poiyile pirandhu poiyile valarandha pulavar perumaane! super parthee!
regards,
Ragavan

[Parthee]

Srini,
sorringa enaku puriyala, nenga ena solra varinganu

[Sudhaama]

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Noattamida vandhaen Aiyaa Paartheeyai paarththu Naanae Lolaakku
Vatta mihu yen Thalaivar yenai Udaiya-Nangai vum Kaadhali Thoodhaay
Naattam kolh Thahai Nallarhivu voanga Vinjnaana Munnaetram viduththu
Aattamihu Amerikka Thaazh-Vazhi Penh-Inaththai Bommaiyaay izhivu
Kaatti Udal uriththa Keezh-Vazhi vodhukkineerae Panhbazhahaa!! Vaazhha Nee!!

[Parthee]

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Noattamida vandhaen Aiyaa Paartheeyai paarththu Naanae Lolaakku
Vatta mihu yen Thalaivar yenai Udaiya-Nangai vum Kaadhali Thoodhaay
Naattam kolh Thahai Nallarhivu voanga Vinjnaana Munnaetram viduththu
Aattamihu Amerikka Thaazh-Vazhi Penh-Inaththai Bommaiyaay izhivu
Kaatti Udal uriththa Keezh-Vazhi vodhukkineerae Panhbazhahaa!! Vaazhha Nee!!

Sudha madam,
nenga ezuthuna rendu kavithaigalum enaku puriyala
moreover i don't have the font also

[Sudhaama]

Dear Mr. Parthee,

// Sudha madam,
nenga ezuthuna rendu kavithaigalum enaku puriyala
moreover i don't have the font also //

I appreciate and enjoy your Jovial- Lovers thoughts in a HEALTHY SPIRIT...

... which you initiated by your Fictional Poem... titled as... "Varam Vaendum"... ....

... addressed to your imaginery Kaadhali (Female-Lover)

In reply Jovially I started writing poems with the same spirit and reciprocal sense....

... responding from the other side as your Female-Lover.

... Imagining myself as your Kaadhali, I composed the words...

... which are quite simple and direct... and NOTHING TO GET CONFUSED.

Because you described her Beauty combined with Jewels, Hair etc....

... I picked up the Thread from your words.... and continued the topic in Poetic-form.. as if ....

... Your Lover sends her Loalaakku in the capacity of her Ambassador / Messenger...

... to meet and gather more information about you.... her Stranger-Lover.

What I expected from you was ... a REPLY-POEM ... in continuation of your initiating first poem... as the Male-Lover...

... in the Conventional manner we find in our Literatures all over....

... either the Rich-ones or the Light ones... or even the Cinema-Song-duets... or ...

... mutual Love- Letters in Prose or Verse- forms.

And on your suitable replies in series from the Males angle.... I would have replied to you.... one after another... from the Female-Lover's angle (even though I am a Male by birth)... in a Poetic-form

I am unable to understand what difficulty you find in my poems. ... in words or sense? Please be specific.... whether any one word or words are too tough to follow. I will clarify as you feel necessary. Or if you want to write the meanings word by word... yes... I will try to keep up to your expectations

If you like my participation further... Yes I will.... Otherwise I am prepared to quit on your advice.

Regarding the Fonts, nothing to worry. It is simple. Just DOWNOAD ... MURASU ANJAL... If you have any difficulty, you can seek the help of Administrators.

Till such time you can reply me as you feel convenient

You started this Separate Thread with some idea behind... I believe.

So... Please continue.... in any case... without further Stagnation.

With Best Wishes,
Sudhaama.