Thaiye, niyum...avanum…en vazhvey

[Amsa]

Thaiye niye en uyir
Avanum en uyir thaney
Unnai pirivadey kodumai illaiya
Avanai piriya sollavadu niyama
Un maraivu ennai kollum illaiya
Avan pirivo maranathin vaasal allava
Thaiye, niye uyir kodutha dheivam
Avano en uyir thangum jeevan
Naney un ratham
Avano ennul odhum ratham
Unnak yiiddu yedhum illai
Avanuk yiiddu unnai thaviru vear yarum illai
Endrum un kozhandaiyaga vazhava
Illai en kuzhandaiyai theddi sellava
Thaiye, anbai uttri vallarthaiye
Avan idham nan konda anbai veruthaiye
Un kuzhandaiyin ninaivigalil vazhvaiye
Nangal kannavugalai madhithu vazhvomey
Idhayathaiyum koduthai, mutchi kaatraiyum koduthai
Enna vendum endral… Yenna seiven… ?
Udallum uyirum koduthaval nee endru
Oovoru tudipum ninaivutta, idhayam vendum
Avanai swasikamal nan illai endru
Mutchi kaatru solla vendum
Anbil yen thaiye pirivu ?[b]

[xlntbarani]

innum.. innum..
muyarchi seynga
amsa...

[Amsa]

Innum innum kandipa muyarchi seiyuven

[Parthee]

Kalakiringa amsa.

I love this kavithai.
Ena solrathune theriyala..

Keep it up and write more

[gragavan]

Hi Amsa. Please try to post in tamil. That will encourage people more to read your poems. Also post all your poems in the same thread. That will be helpful for tracking and providing feedback.

wishes,
Ragavan

[Amsa]

Romba thanks parthee ninga solluradhu enna romba encourage pannudhu


Ennaku thamizhil ezhudha theriyadhu