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25th February 2007, 12:02 PM
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BG,
Story is increasingly ROMANTIC these days
why bg
? :P
Shakthi .... if u would remember, it is the continuation of the same scene which was started earlier .... i have even quoted the continuation in red and italics as i would quote always ..... and Arun and Shree who are basically residing in far off lands .... konji pesardhu is a common fact ..... hence u see it to be romancing on the higher side .... the catch was both came on the same saga ....... be happy ... ppl would be in dire need of such a good scene down the lane .....
btw, ur narration on SHREE KEEPING HER HANDS ON HIPS (PREGNANT WOMEN) typically reminded me of TAMIZH movies
To remind u i AM WRITING a screen play ... and certain descriptive factors are needed to make the reader feel the scene dont u think it would be obvious to include her actions as in the current state prove necessary for screen play !?
All thro the SAGA i felt, SHE IS GONNA GET LABOUR PAIn... and wow she got!
Shakthi's insight is COMMENDABLE :hehehe:
Shakthi ..... u ve been trying to guess it all but my expectation is that to take u all along with the story btw .... u did a wild guess :P
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25th February 2007 12:02 PM
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25th February 2007, 12:15 PM
#682
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Madhu ... first indha post ai paathuttu Shakthi dhu nnu ninaichen ... en theriyumaa
1. Eyes avatar ....
2. Ovvoru sentence kkum naduvula oru line gap
padichikkitte irukkum podhu ... Vasanth nnu paathen anga dhaan catch ... avanga rare aa thaan Vasanth nnu perai solli koopiduvaanga .... appuram paatha .... Madhu
Power :
the Romantic wave is coz of Valentines Day.. may be !
But Labour pain before labour day... thats a bit early !
Vasanth...
expecting next saga.. !!!!
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hahahahah Madhu
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25th February 2007, 01:52 PM
#683
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25th February 2007, 11:48 PM
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I like the fact that theres romance in the scenes between Mathi and Sathi. They are a newly married couple and it makes it more real. Also andha hip touch scene ellam nice touch.
Hey Ive always liked descriptive writers
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26th February 2007, 01:13 AM
#685
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Originally Posted by
ssanjinika
I like the fact that theres romance in the scenes between Mathi and Sathi. They are a newly married couple and it makes it more real. Also andha hip touch scene ellam nice touch.
Hey Ive always liked descriptive writers
SSanjinika .......... Shakthi tension aaga poraanga
Well, anyways ...... thanks for ur comments ...... badhil laye oru kavidhai nayathai kondu vandhirukkeenga ....
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26th February 2007, 02:06 AM
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Originally Posted by
bingleguy
SSanjinika .......... Shakthi tension aaga poraanga
Well, anyways ...... thanks for ur comments ...... badhil laye oru kavidhai nayathai kondu vandhirukkeenga ....
Naan konjam SP-ya usupi vidalamE-nnu than romance pathi sonnen . Avanga enna Chennai-kku vandhu udhaikama errunda seri :P
But seriously speaking I enjoy descriptive narrations and yours is pretty good.
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27th February 2007, 08:54 AM
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Naan enna anti-romance gang aa :P
hmm....
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21st April 2007, 05:45 AM
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Pretty neat episodes. In 30 you had served some more of the match-match between the two lead-pairs. The hook was a little predictable there. The conversations in 31 were just perfect. Kamalam in particular. Even where it seemed to meander it painted wholesome pictures. Am still digesting Ramana, being a girl ?! Here again, the hook was predictable, but the way you had worked up to it was great.
I shouldn't be the one to say, but still: next one quick !
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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9th May 2007, 02:16 AM
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9th May 2007, 12:43 PM
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/digr/
Viru Viru maandi Virumaandi ...
Enna bg puthu getupa ? Athuvum Stamford poi .. Thirumbi varumbothu unga veetla "Yaaruppa nee ? VAsanth Us poyirukkan ... " apdeennu solla pora ..
/end digr/
Sari seekiram next SAGA seekirama podunga ...
The realization of happiness happens only after experience of pain.
If we desire to blossom like a flower in the garden of life,
Then we must learn the art of adjusting our life with the thorns!
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