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7th February 2008, 10:44 AM
#751
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Originally Posted by
Arthi
really superb narration Vasanth...
keep going...
One request....Let the breeze visit the shore frequently
Arthi hope u enjoyed it :P ..... naanum appadi dhaan ninaikiren adhukku dhaan try panren ....
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7th February 2008 10:44 AM
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9th February 2008, 11:51 PM
#752
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hayya.... pakkam vandhaachu
Anbe Sivam
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10th February 2008, 10:06 AM
#753
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Hi BG,
Nice to have you back.
One of those lie-low something-is-brewing episodes.
I await more.
One point: The paragraph-long description of the intimacy is getting a bit repetitive. Not that it is unenjoyable. Just that it feels familiar to such descriptions once in every few chapters...hey deja vu !
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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10th February 2008, 10:18 AM
#754
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Originally Posted by
Prabhu Ram
Hi BG,
Nice to have you back.
One of those lie-low something-is-brewing episodes.
I await more.
One point: The paragraph-long description of the intimacy is getting a bit repetitive. Not that it is unenjoyable. Just that it feels familiar to such descriptions once in every few chapters...hey deja vu !
Thanks for ur time PR !!!
PR .... i believe this is bought the second time ... first time ... it was for describing the love of newly married ... its very necessary to be not just romantic but fiercely intimate ....secondly now ... which is to show an understanding relationship which is romantic as they knew each other so very well ....
inbetween there were two instances where i had to bring back the first intimacy - as as continuation to the saga from the previous one so it might have stood in ur mind .....
as such i dnt remember any other instance bringing up closing intimacy .... correct me if am wrong !!!!
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10th February 2008, 11:38 AM
#755
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Oh fine. Perhaps it is just me ageing. After all, who are you and me to pass judgement about when the couple chooses to be intimate
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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10th February 2008, 11:47 AM
#756
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point taken !!!
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10th February 2008, 09:20 PM
#757
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Originally Posted by
prabhuram
Oh fine. Perhaps it is just me ageing
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18th February 2008, 07:04 PM
#758
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Hello BG,
today has been a very odd day...woke up super early...had ideas buzzing around in my head...actually felt like expressing my views about current fave show it has been soooo long since I have come here, and while typing looked up to see my inbox tab and came upon your message...it fits well with the oddness of your latest episode smooth narration as ever...hope for something more substantial soon...but that is just a reader's desire not to be teased even further with intrigue...please watch your spelling BG...yes we have the ability to guess what a word might be from context...but simple editing is always appreciated...can't wait for next episode!
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18th February 2008, 09:35 PM
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19th February 2008, 05:10 AM
#760
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Aaahaaa!! arumaiyaaga ezhuthi irukeenga bg....looking fwd for more...... ty for taking time despite yr hectic schedule to write this.....
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