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    In the last two episodes you erased (or atleast blunted) the horns on Ashwath's head. With "th" being dropped even when referring to him in third person you have brought him a fold closer to the story. Subtle things like, the guy who was nasty with the exam supervisor insists on paying the auto-driver. The situation is so built such that one is unable to conclude anything about him. i.e. there is sufficient scope to attribute his behaviour to the demands of the events. Good writing.

    And (as usual) the story is interestingly poised.
    மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே

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    Kya kahani hai.. Bingle ji ... unga "pen" nnukku Dhrishti suthi podungo...

    The realization of happiness happens only after experience of pain.

    If we desire to blossom like a flower in the garden of life,
    Then we must learn the art of adjusting our life with the thorns!

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    Prabhu !

    The horns were not his own, that was only a part of an alteration in his lifestyle ... Actually he was basically a kind n good hearted person, but owing to the dejection, he had changed ... infact adhai shree solra maadiri kaamichiruppen ....

    he is gaining his originality -> could be a simple sentence to prove what i ve tried to say
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    Quote Originally Posted by rami
    Kya kahani hai.. Bingle ji ... unga "pen" nnukku Dhrishti suthi podungo...

    Comment / Compliment ????
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    Of course ,, A complimentary comment..

    The realization of happiness happens only after experience of pain.

    If we desire to blossom like a flower in the garden of life,
    Then we must learn the art of adjusting our life with the thorns!

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    vasanth vendam

    idhu ellam nalla illai

    enakku porumai kidayadhunnu ungalukku nalla theriyum. one month officekku leave pottu kadhai ennannu ore samayathula mulusa sollungo

    good going
    pala
    vedikkai manidharaip pole - naan
    veezhve nendru ninai thayo?

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    Quote Originally Posted by swathy
    vasanth vendam

    idhu ellam nalla illai

    enakku porumai kidayadhunnu ungalukku nalla theriyum. one month officekku leave pottu kadhai ennannu ore samayathula mulusa sollungo


    good going
    Nandri
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    just ONE SINGLE WORD.

    Excellent.


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    Kadhai kalakala pogudhu.. i really liked 21st episode.
    I pray for my dear shree & Sharmi
    Sarva dharman parithyajya mamekam sharanam vraja, aham thva sarvapapebhyo mokshayishyami ma suchaha

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    déjà vu (23. WHEN AM DR FIRST)

    WHEN AM DR FIRST

    Srinivasan turned to see her hands showing towards the clinic ... seeing that he rushed inside.... Ashwa n Sharmi giving each other pale looks stood there in dead silence ... hurridly started walking towards the clinic .....................


    As Sharmi entered the clinic ......... Shree ... seeing Shree slowly tilting her head towards her n smiling gently ... Shree, onakku onnum illayae, are u alright ? she couldnt control herself but threw herself taking shree's hands.... but slowly controlled her tears by taking a deep breadth ...

    She held Shree's hands tightly and turned back to see Srinivasan,

    enna Shree, are u ok ? ennada orey gabra pannuitaa... paaru bayandhae petta... hmn ... nothing, nothing ... cmon, slowly hold my hands and try sitting up, slowly, slowly ... ya, gud .... Shree, slowly holding Sharmi's hand and chittappa's hand got up slowly

    Sharmi took a pillow and adjusted so that she could rest firmly and comfortably on the bed

    thalaikku mattum marundhu pottuduren .... konjam eriyum, poruthukkanum ok yaa ... seeing Shree nod her head, Srinivasan applied the medicine on her forehead ...Ssss haaa ... was a small snizzet from Shree ... aachu, aachu ... avvalavudhaan ...

    ok, ippo medhuvaa keezha irangu......... no no sharmi, kai vendam, she can do it all by herself .. cmon shree ... vaa, namba car la eri ukkandhukkanum ... vaa ...


    Shree , looked at Sri Ranganathar photo in front of the bed, closing her eyes gaining some strength walked slowly out of the clinic bed towards the car, seeing Ashwa talking over in his mobile, she slowly got into the car ....

    Purappadalaama ... on hearing this from Srinivasan, Ashwath .... ok da, pinne vilikkaaam ... so saying kept his mobile in his front jean pocket and moved towards Srinivasan who was sitting in the driver seat now ... naa...naan bike la varen, will follow u

    .... oh ok, ok ... no problem ...
    so saying Srinivasan as usual touching Sri Ranganathar in his car, n thinking him in his mind, started the car .... Janaki, he shouted at the nurse, oru one hour la vandhuduren ... paathukko ...

    seringa doctor ...


    When he sneered up the engine, Ashwath started the bike and slowly followed him ....



    ma .... naan Shree aathukku poittu varen

    Sharu ... irudee ...
    said her mother ma, naanum poi andha kozhandhaiya paathuttu vandhu dren .... Sharu, naanum varen vaa .... paathuttu vandhudalaamso saying sharmi's mother came along her making her saree fleets to set in the right position ....maa, naan poittu konja naazhila vandhudren ...

    oru nimisham dee, indha saree nannave illa, maathindu vandhuren ... was sharmi's mother ....

    ma, enna ma, kalyaanam vijarikkavaa porom, nanna paathu pattu podavaiyaa kattindu porathukku ....

    illa sharu, ava aathula shree appa iruppa, ippadiye pona nanna irukkaadhu, oru nimisham dhaane dee ....

    seri appo naan nadandhu poindu irukkattumaa ?

    vendam, vendam, dho rendu nimishathula vandhutten ....
    so saying Sharmi's mother walked in ... while sharmi sat on the porch, but hearing her mother calling she went in ...... standing behind the wooden closed doors answering the questions from her mother ....

    scan report ellam onnum illa nnu vandhuduthono ?
    mmmm
    bayappadara padiyaa onnum illaye?
    mmmmhummm
    ava chittappa enna sonnar ....
    came a voice from inside the kitchen, the voice of her grandma ...

    mmmmm, onnum illayaam .... verum keezha vizhundha adhirchidhaanaam ...
    paritchai vera varradhe dee .... paavam, kozhandha adhukkulla nanna aayidanum .... enna ?
    mmmmm...

    the doors opened, from which sharmi's mother came out and said en dee ellaathukkum mmmm nna enna artham ... badhil sollalaamolyo ? nee dhaane pakkathula irundhu ellathayum paathundu irundhaa ....

    mmmmmmm, idhoda moonaavadhu dhadavaiyaa kekkra ....


    seri seri ... verungayyoda avaathukku poga vendam
    so saying she tried goin inside the kitchen, while sharmi held her by her hands ... amma, adhellam onnum vendam, vaa ...

    iru dee, maambazham vaangi vechirundhen illaya, adhula konjam eduthundu varen, .... mmmmaa nhn nhn sniffed Sharmi, naanaavadhu munnaadi poiruppenolyo ?
    by that time, Sharmi's mother has entered the kitchen. She opened the rice case and took three big banganapalli mangoes and took a plastic cover from behind the almera and took them inside....

    vaa ....

    hmn, inimae nee edhaavadhu edukkanum nnu sollu
    so saying sharmi held her mom's hand tightly and pulled her over to the steps ...


    amma, ivar saayandhram late aagumaam varrathukku, phone panninar, naan konja naazhila vandhuren ...
    before she could complete, sharmi has pulled her down the steps ... vaasa kadhava saathikkongo mma ....

    Sharmi n her mother started walking towards Shree's house and from a distance Sharmi could see Ashwath's bike infront of Shree's (it was mentioned as Sharmi previously, it is supposed to be Shree, sorry for the inconvenience) house .................................................. ..

    Saga 23 : WHEN AM DR FIRST is the anagram of FRIEND'S WARMTH. Is an Admirer = Married ?
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