déjà vu ( 1. A LEARNED YES)

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Bingleguy, really emjouable serial story-telling. Nicely packed events, characters, situations. Everything is smoothly suspended waiting to get harmonized. Most importantly your sense of length for each episode makes it eminently readable.
And as you have pointed out, I can see and hear the story comfortably. Great going, keep it up !