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    Don’t adjust to suppress yourself

    Stanza 1

    She,Visarathika is the only little daughter of that great/psycho man...
    She loved her father more than any one else in this world. But she was separated from the rest of the world because of his peculiar characters and believes.
    That may be called as fate that mother left her...
    But what people around will tell was because of her father's foolishness her mom left her...
    No one else in this world can realize his greatness, except her...
    She is left all alone because of these things...
    Is she waiting for a Prince to take care of herself and her family?
    Or she is not expecting any one to rescue her from her problems...
    Is she the one to take revenge against all giving her problems?

    Stanza 2

    Her life also started with all beautiful colors and butterflies flying around, with sweet chocolates and balloons around.
    She remembers only some of her sweetest moments in her life..
    Always played together with friends in school, received good name and prizes from her teachers.
    She imposed all her ideas over them being as a leader.
    All of them were golden moments..
    In house also she is the queen to her sweet mother and pa, and even in her locality also as most of the houses belongs to them.
    But all were just scenes and miseries covered by the clouds, once when the rain come those clouds will go and the reality will cum into picture.
    Even God gets bored with smooth lives. He also needs some climaxes, some situation turn around. God also wants to see something thrilling and interesting..
    She was never knowing that so much troubles will be there in her life in some ten years..
    Everything was fine then..

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    hi frds,
    After so many months i am entering into hub...
    Realizing that i have to spend myself sometime...

    Comments please on this release...

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    Stanza 3(Age 25)

    She is now working in a good multinational concern with a neat environmental atmosphere and of course not a strict boss.(Letting to take leave at any time)

    She is having all in her life, lovely little home, with beautiful car.(of course not with any strict big’s to trouble going out with boy friend)

    She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..

    But she is not satisfied with all these…

    She just wants to take revenge of this society.

    How her anger intrudes in to every field of the society like mixing poison into river water and kills people silently……

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    Quote Originally Posted by ramyap

    She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..


    welcome ramyap
    so far, story is intresting...............keep writing
    Anbe Sivam

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    Ramyap!
    I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! Please continue!! :thumbusp:
    Back after a while...

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    Really it is terrible, sometimes we won’t understand the people who really loves us, but will go for the present seconds console and satisfaction.
    After getting really relieved all sufferings because of her father’s not steady mind, she just entered in to a new city.
    But of course for some days some of her friends may be with her. But then she was left all alone, may be because of her peculiar nature of not mixing with people so easily.
    At that time, she happened to have chat friends and has become so close to one guy who just started to love her.
    But what is this age, it is never stable and confident in any decision many times. So only she could have turned to another guy.
    It may be because of the situation she have been brought up, one father combining his wife and dear daughter as having Lesbian relationships. No point in having such doubts, but how come its possible for a man who is having daily sexual relationships with all the lady Gods and feeling it both physically and mentally.
    When every one was feeling for leaving home, she was happy with that.
    Really terrible, but in Visharathika’s life came one guy just like that, just invited for her to go out for dinner out one day.
    Of course, it is the wish of any young girl to go out with a guy in nice moon light to a dinner. So she accepted and gone. But when he invited her for his house the next day, she would not have gone.
    But they are some physical needs and mental attractions at this age which will hide all the moral values stored inside.
    That was the situation where no one was even caring for her. Yeah, even there are so many girl friends around, a guy having sexual feelings towards her will show greater attention and help towards her, which will make feel other loves diminish.
    The fact she lost herself in that visit to his house, she cannot oppose whatever he has done towards her, may be she is need of all of them at that time. But being from a cultural background, she can ask only one question to him, can u marry me and being satisfied with his answer of ya, definitely.
    She knows it is just to satisfy the inner soul during the illegal intercourse. But thank God her inner heart has woken up. She just left out of that place.
    No one can be told, all because of lack of control.
    After this bad bitter experience from that guy, who just wants to enjoy her for fun, she realized the true love of her chat friend, Vishwa.
    But now she could not even talk to Vishwa, because of her own guilty conscience. She started avoiding him.
    But how long Vishwa’s true loving heart towards her, tolerate her avoidance.
    Now she has just realized that love cannot be compared to anything. May be there sexual needs but that does not stand in front of true love.
    She now planned to use Vishwa as her tool to rescue the poor and helpless and take revenge of all those corrupters and killers.
    But when she is going to realize there is never a perfect man or woman in life.
    Every one might be good or bad in some situation.
    If she finds fault in everyone she has to find fault in every one. If she finds good ness in every one she can find in every one.

    She is still not mature enough, so only. Lets see her tool (Vishwa) will turn her towards a good girl destroying her from her series killing plans, or will he also will involve in destroying the society for destroying the evils(some activities mentioned so by our ancestors..)


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    Quote Originally Posted by crazy
    Quote Originally Posted by ramyap

    She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..


    welcome ramyap
    so far, story is intresting...............keep writing
    thank you yaar..
    yenna irundhalum boy frd, girl frdnu yethavthu pota than oduthu illa?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Surya
    Ramyap!
    I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! Please continue!! :thumbusp:

    thanks pa.. really great people will have great mind to appreciate even not eligible people. i cannot even understand u'r stories with my little knowledge. They are of that high range.It is a great pride for me u r considering my writings too.

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    Welcome back Ramya
    Click here to reach the Index page of http://www.mayyam.com/talk/showthrea...A-LEARNED-YES)... All Sagas could be accessed from this page...

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    Quote Originally Posted by ramyap
    She is still not mature enough, so only. Lets see her tool (Vishwa) will turn her towards a good girl destroying her from her series killing plans, or will he also will involve in destroying the society for destroying the evils(some activities mentioned so by our ancestors..)

    killing plans................
    Anbe Sivam

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