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    PSHYCO..

    The ambulance was blowing and in the i.c.u was the hero lying with blood flowing all over his body...after 5hrs with light consiousness the hero sat up..
    infront of him was a police officer and gaining more comsiousness john(hero)asked the police officer how his wife was...[two weeks back]...
    john's daughter was put dead in front of his house with her eyes taken fingers cut and tongue cut..john and his wife went in to deep state of deppressness
    unable to digest this they complained to the police about the death of their daughter and asked them to take severe action and the case was taken over by a special
    police officer who is well known for his detection and encounters..his name was robinson.
    [memories coming as rain in the brain of john]
    john who himself was a proffessor in the oxford university was well
    known for his simplicity and his knowledge.he had great depth of knowledge and each student of
    this college liked him very much..his daughter was his only precious possession and she was his soul.he had great love for her..
    one evening she was missing and john and his wife phoned to the police and asked to make an investigation.
    one week had passed and sill no status of improvement..
    it was second week and it happened at that week on that day..
    his daughter and the police man who had come for the investigation for his daughter's absence
    was also dead and at the same time john's wife was attacked..
    [after two weeks of rest in the hospital john got discharged but he came to know that his wife had died]..
    robinson without the knowledge of john made plans and ordered his men to execute them..
    after close analysis john came to know the truth of these disaster...
    [interval]....

    robinson came to know that it was john who had killed his daughter,wife and the policeman.
    john was infected by a brain disease which agitated him at times of night..
    during his childhood he had great love from his parents but unfortunately his mother died and his father married again....
    but his second mom was not like his first she had no care for him and on the absence of her husband she used to illtreate him in front of her child
    and kept burns in his buuttocks and his body..she also plucked his hair using sccissors,kept cigar ashes in his eyes,
    and john had to undergo great difficulties...he was not able to say about this to his father because she would punish him
    severely..once when he tried to say to his father she gave shock treatement to him..so he kept mum..she wanted only money from his father
    and one night she was looting all the money and was about to go.. and at that time john's father saw her.. and with frustations she killed him which john saw..
    he was unable to control his feelings and so the animal in him woke on that day that he killed her and buried her in the garden behind..
    from that day onwards his animal had to undergo development and it aggreviated him to kill all ladies which he meets during the night especially
    since it was like an amnesia to him that all resembled his second mom..he not only kills but cuts the body to several pieces and
    put them has a prey to the vultures which he grows in the garden in the underground..
    he killed his daughter because once when he was killing a lady in the garden his daughter happened to see it..so
    now he had no option but to kill his own daughter he asked her not to say to anyone but after seeing pieces of hands
    ,legs,etc.she was very much sad of her father and decided to say to the police.so after killing his daughter he himself put her body in front of his house and acted
    so well that he is not the culprit.now it was only his wife whom he decided to kill because she started to doubt him.so he planned in such a way to kill her which the
    policeman who was appointed came to know and he decided to stop it. on doing so he took out his revolver but to the misfortune he was too late that john had pierced the
    knife in to her stomach twice...to john's surprise the policeman asked him to surrender without knowing john's capability..
    john was hurt down by a bullet in the shoulder and on the other end the policeman was dead...to make it more thrilling john himself rang to the police and the ambulance
    and later after doin so he fired himself in the thighs and in the hand...
    [john was shocked to hear it from robinson]...
    john wanted to kill robinson but he was handcuffed...then robinson said that he had come to know all about this is because of the camera that the policeman had kept in the rooms and in the hall of his house
    which he had not known and to more shock news for john he also showed the video snaps that he had got when john was killing his wife...
    so then john admitted his murders of killing 49 women...all the murders without any evidence and the one evidence is that of his wife..
    so he was sentenced to death and the day came for him to be hanged and was..
    john walked away from the police station...[wat confusing!]
    yes it was robinson who was hanged...john had put a face mask resembling robinson and for robinson it was that of his..
    after john accepted that he is surrendering robinson removed his handcuff and not knowing that john was having a knife in his hand he puntured the body of robinson and made it similar
    to that of his..and now removing th face mask john was free..the paper also published the end of the serial killer and at the same time also included the death ot Mr.robinson in a car crash[false news by john]
    so john was a free bird who started his serial killing again...

    [wow that was a good dream that i ventured cinematically]...
    who lives if india dies:who dies if india lives?

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    ragav89, the warning note in your signature forces me to keep mum instead of starting to point out from the title......
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    seems copied from various sources(films),the climax line is old,but altogether o.k!

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    Indha threat PSYCHO pathi dhanae? Spelling mistakeooo
    Shivaji Rao Gaekwad: "...Kamal never let me fall. In 1983, when I wanted to leave everything behind it was him who cajoled me back to the material world..."

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    well sorry about the spelling mistake and i have changed my quote..and thanks venki for ur report abt this story..
    who lives if india dies:who dies if india lives?

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    Raghva..........your story was filmy , but good job
    Anbe Sivam

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    vasavi call this fella kaushik! (he didnt get an id so,he kept his bro's name for the id )

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    Quote Originally Posted by VENKIRAJA
    vasavi call this fella kaushik! (he didnt get an id so,he kept his bro's name for the id )
    ok kanna
    what happened to ur stories..........?
    Anbe Sivam

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    i'm editing them.didn't have a look at paathasaari sacan it,u'll find a lot of changes(especially spellings,gramatical errors,a bit more explanations,etc.)i'm concentrating on perfection akka.BTW,come to poems,i'm busy there.

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    vasi akka,gald to see ur signature:aaniver!hope thats not another sachein from john!

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