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    Hey what a clever way to start a story....here i was thinking logically we are going to hear the young man's life! Yet you have hooked my curiosity how what event could possibly move a young man to such an open display of emotion!

    I too would like to hear the gems that fall from your old man's wisdom....

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    .......................then
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    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    Hey what a clever way to start a story....here i was thinking logically we are going to hear the young man's life! Yet you have hooked my curiosity how what event could possibly move a young man to such an open display of emotion!
    Thank you very much Querida, for your encouraging words !! Kindly keep reading the other parts as well and posting comments..

    I too would like to hear the gems that fall from your old man's wisdom....
    Me too...

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    Quote Originally Posted by crazy
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    Hmmm....thanks for reading through, Vaasi!! Let's wait and see..

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    nice description cook... introduction of the meeting and the suspence abt that story is nice...

    i cant able to understand the first para.. its tough to me...

    is it will happen a guy can cry in front of unknown person, even if they ask abt him??? (i am not sure abt it...) hmmm, maybe he will have a very sentimental story beside his hears... hope so... and waiting for that...

    good try southie cook... to you...

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    and then? :P

    (good one s.c, however its lil tough to believe someone can open up before a GANG OF TOTAL strangers )

    waiting for the next.

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    ah sipi

    GREAT PPL THINK ALIKE

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    Quote Originally Posted by southiecook
    Quote Originally Posted by crazy
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    Hmmm....thanks for reading through, Vaasi!! Let's wait and see..
    Why thanks?
    i dont have anything to do other than reading stories
    Anbe Sivam

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    Quote Originally Posted by sipi
    nice description cook... introduction of the meeting and the suspence abt that story is nice...

    i cant able to understand the first para.. its tough to me...

    is it will happen a guy can cry in front of unknown person, even if they ask abt him??? (i am not sure abt it...) hmmm, maybe he will have a very sentimental story beside his hears... hope so... and waiting for that...

    good try southie cook... to you...
    I really thank you Sipi, for your comments..First para is just a reflection of the feelings of extremely desperate Jeeva, who was thinking about running away from life...

    Yeah, let us wait for the following parts...

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