Uyirae en Uyirae - Part I

[rsubras]

P.S: Hi Guys It is nice to be back after a longgggggggg time.... I am only trying to continue the story that I have started almost an year ago..... Ippothan continue panna aarambichirukken....pazhasai konjam edit panni...trim panni... so please bear with me for atleast one more post till i complete this one...


Athu oru kaalai velai. athikaalai velai lam illa... konjam athiga neram aagi vitta kaalai thaan... aduthaduthu snooze panni vida patta insult thaangama oru vazhiya antha mobile alaram adikkarathai stop pannirunthathu. ithukellam konjam kooda feel aagama, antha veyil sutteritha kaalaiyilum oru kaaLai (athaanga Bull ) thannoda kaalai (leg) neeti sugamaga paduthirunthathu. camera va apadiye leg la irunthu aarambichu konjam konjama mela Joom panneengana (vijaykanth style la zoom pannunga) rendu pillow ku nadula oru dirty fellow voda mugam theriyutha.....avar thaaanga indha kadhaiyin Nayagan Chinnu...ennada ithu Chin -nu, cheek -ku, lips -u nu lam peru vaipanga la nu yosikareengala...avanoda appa enamo avanukku Chinnasamy ngra thannoda thatha perai thaan aasai aasai ya vachaaru...... aana enna prayajonam...intha SMS kaalathula namakku podura dress lernthu, sappidara sappatai cook panra time varai ethaiyume surukki thane pazhakkam...... athan Chinnasaamy ngra thannoda azhagana perai surukki Chinnu nu vachikittan...


Chinnu voda family oru azhagana, niraivana family... government employee Appa... Highways department la velai paarkararu...Amma home maker.... ore thangachi Shwetha BSc final year student.... Chinnu oru Gen-X jenmam...i mean..Gen-X gentleman... Engineering mudikkara 90% graduates maathiri avanum pathu manikku office poitu, irava, pagala, kulira, veyila nu ethuvume theriyatha nerathula veedu thirumbara oru typical IT Employee..athunalathan paarunga, kadigaaram ettu maniyai thaandi avasarama odinalaum, ethukkume asarama nammaalu thoongikittu irukan..

"dei anna...... office ku time aagaliya..innum ennada thoookam" nu kettukitte ulla vara... ithu avanoda anbu thangai Shwetha... one moment wait panni paarkira thannoda anbu annanai, next moment washbasin la irunthu oru mug thanni pidichittu vanthu avan face la peechi adikkira..... kanavula ularikittu irunthavan intha unexpected attack la alarikittu enthirukkiraan.... para para nu enthiruchi kann muzhichi paartha kai la mug oda sirichikitte nikkara swetha...avanukku vantha kobathukkku semmaiya adi pinniruppan... but antha samayathula intha pasangaloda amma Mrs.Varalakshmi Rajasekhar entry tharaanga...

(Varalakshmi, their mother comes inside)

Chinnu: Amma..paarunga ma intha kazhuthaiya...nalla thoongitu iruntha en mela thanni ya adichitta

Swetha: thanni adichittu thoongarathu than thappu.... thoongara oruthana thanni adichu ezhupparathu thappe ilae

Chinnu: iva vaaiyai paarunga... college padikkira ponnu mathiriya nadanthukkara... nonsense...

Swetha: podaa Dog.... ettu manikku kooda asarama thoongikittu irukkara nee mudhalla software engineer maathiri nadanthukko...appuram ennai sollu

Varalakshmi: sari podhum di....anna ku konjamaachum mariyathai kodu...enna than irunthalum unnai vida periyavan

Swetha: periyya ivan.... paarunga ma ivanala en friends mathi la enakku maanam poguthu

Varalakshmi: en enna panninan?

Swetha: en friend malaavika irukka illa? anniku ava namma veetukku vanthappo eee nu pallai kaamichittu vazhinjittu irukkan

Chinnu: acho...illave illa ma...actually en pallu la oru chinna problem... antha ponnu oru BDS student aache. Adhu than ava kitta pallai thiranthu kaamichu kettutu irunthaen.athai intha pisasu thappa soluthu..

Swetha: adappavi......!!! Amma...nambave nambatheenga... konjam kooda koochame illama eppadi pesaran paarunga...

Chinnu: (samalichufies) ada...en pallu la koocham irunthathu nalathan ava kitta pesinaen.... Satyam ah ma...

Swetha: vidarathu reelu.. ithula Sathyam, Inox, Studio 5 nu udans vidaran ma...

Varalakshmi: sari podhum unga sandai... chinnasamy..nee poi kulichittu office kilambara vazhiya paaru....dee swetha..nee college po vendama......... En rendu perum ippo kaalai la nerathula mallukku nikkareenga

Chinnu: Mallukku nikkala ma... mallu vana iva friend maalu kaga ninuttu irukkom

Swetha: deii.... Maalu vam maalu....iru iru...maalu voda aalu, baalu nu oruthan irukan... avan vanthu, un pallai odaippan.... appo theriyum unakku entha pallu la problem nu

Chinnu: hehee...ok ok sister... ithukkelam kochikkalama... lets make peace

Varalakshmi: podhum da unga vilayaatu.... nee poi kuli po....Shwetha... un tiffin box la sappadu eduthu vachirukkaen..eduthuttu college kilambu po

Ippadiyaga, ovvoru morning layum Chinnu veeetula usual ah nadakkara antha casual convo mudivukku vanthuchu... Chinnu rushes to the bathroom for performing his early morning duties, while Shwetha leaves for her college...
Chinnu voda parents, native Tanjore ngrathunala, avanga veetula sappadu eppavume special ah irukkum.... athu lunch oh, illa breakfast oh illa dinner oh ethuvanalum irukkatum.... Ovvoru naalum vitha vithama sappadu senju vaippanga... Indraiya menu, ven pongal, idli, kesari and arisi uppuma...Shwetha vum ava appavum erkanave saptutu, avangavanga work place ku kilambi poittanga... Chinnu mattum than baaki... Varalakshmi amma, dining table la avanukku sappadu eduthuvachittu, paiyan ready aagittu sappida varathuku wait pannitu irukkanga.... 8:30 ku bed room vittu velila vanthavan..... nithanama ovvoru velaiyaiyum mudichittu, arakka parakka 9:45 ku dress pannitu odi varaan hall ku....

Chinnu: amma..amma... en watch ah engae vachae...

Varalakshmi: en da.. night thooongumbothu kanda idathula pottutu kaalaila tension nerathula thedarathu.... ithukku than naan appave sonnaen

Chinnu: sari podhum ma..ippo advise ketka neram illae...watch ah eduthu kodu

Varalakshmi: en da ippadi erinju vizhare.. T.V stand mela irukku paaru un watch..eduthukko

Chinnu: 10 mani ku onsite la irunthu oru call irukku....erkanave ennoda manager en mela oru gaanda irukkaru... ithula meeting ku late ah ponena mirugama maariduvaaru...

Varalakshmi: en unga manager enna Gaandaa mirugama?

Chinnu: haiyyo amma... unga mokkai ya kettu koba padarathukkku kooda neram illae...... (quickly puts on his shoes) naan varen...

Varalakshmi: dei thambi.. itho paaru sappadellam eduthu vachirukkaen..saaptutu poppa...

Chinnu: Time eh illama...so sorry... ippo eating ah vida meeting than enakku mukkiyam...sariya... Bye bye

Varalakshmi: dei dei... ennada.. kaalaila sappidalai na udambu kettu poidum kannna.... please konjamaachum saptutu po da

Chinnu: oru neram sappidalai na onnum aagidaathu... erkanave intha company sernthathu la irunthu semmaiya fat aagitaen nu ellorum solraanga... ithu vayira.. illa MRF tyre ah nu en friends lam gindal panraanga.... so intha maathiri high calories sappta than udambu kettu pogum....

Varalakshmi: athukkaga onnume sappidama vayithai kaaya poduviya

Chinnu: (stylish tone) no no no.... enga office food court la vidha vidhama sappadu kidaikkum.... meeting mudinja pinadi sandwich and juice saaptupen... I am in diet u know.........Vartta.....

thannoda Hand vachu senja Veetu sappattai vittutu Sandwich nu etho bread ah sappida poguthe intha pillai ena nondhu konde, padi thaandi pattini yaga pogum maganai antha padi thaanda pathini Varalakshmi ammal kavalaiyodu paarthu kondirukka, thann honda shine bike ai kilappi kondu office selgiraan Chinnu

[Scene-2]

The clock has already ticked ten past ten when Chinnu reached his office amidst the morning traffic at chennai that moved at a snail's pace. A tensed Chinnu hurriedly entered office and scampered past his colleagues who wished him good morning, to his cubicle. Before his manager notices, he should settle in his cubicle, open the PC and any application to give an impression that he has come long ago and is busily working. He is already ten minutes late for the meeting...but nevertheless busy ah irukkara maathiri scene kaamicha thappika mudiyutha nu paarkalam nu he thinks....This has been the daily routine for Chinnu who has earned the reputation of a regular late comer. Vaangatha thittu illa from team lead or the manager or the on site coordinator, but Chinnu just could not change his habit even a bit. Yaarukavathu birthday, marriage nu wish panrathuna kooda, he would not wish on the same day...avanoda habit padi, Be-late(d) ah than wish pannuvan...

As Chinnu was gazing through his outlook inbox for the day's mails, his next cubicle colleague parthi comes near him.

Chinnu: Dei machaan ..enga team pasanga lam meeting poitaangala..? you know..actually i was held up in a critical task..i mean...

Parthi: dei enkitaye un peter ah kaatariya, nethi namma manager 10'0 clock meeting ku kandippa ellorum nine ku varanum nu sonappo, fine fine nu thalai aatitu, vazhakkam pola Ten Ten ku variye da.... kaalailaye un mela kaari thuppitu meeting ku poirukkaru manager with shanki, susi and Jaanu alone...

Chinnu: sari vidu...kaata vendiya film kaati nan avara cool pannikaren.....

Parthi: podaang....sari po..nee epadiyum thiruntha porathillae... namma Jaanu endra janaki yoda engagement next week varuthu la... we are collecting Rs.50 from everyone, unnoda kaasu pending...eduthu vai athai....

Chinnu: dei aniyayam da... athu than marriage ku gift vaangi tharuvom la... engagement ku ennada panna poreenga aalukku 50 Rs collect panni?

Parthi: namma team saarba oru cake vaangitu poi engagement couple avangala vetta solla porom..... cake vettumbothu balloons lam parakka vittu jamaaika porom.....

Chinnu: athellam Wedding day ku thaanda intha mathir cake vaangi vetta solvaanga da..engagement anniku ethuku thaniya oru vetting day?

Parthi: It is team decision..nee pulambama paisa va edu..

Chinnu (aluthuthukonde): Sariyana vasool raja da nee.... Janaggi........un friend kitta dabbu nagi ma.... intha nerathula dog ennai paduthuthu paaru

Parthi: dei mooduda...call mudichittu Jaanu and team varaanga paaru....

[Shanki endra Shankar, Jaanu endra Janaki and Sushi endra Susheela return from their onsite call]

Sushi : hidaa chinnu, as usual innikum un punctuality puncture aayiducha

Chinnu: hehee.. enna panrathu sushi.. nilamai appadi.... intha meeting kaga breakfast kooda sappidama odi vanthen theriyuma

Shanki: that doesnt motor da....u didnt make it to the meeting anyhow....entha oru velai seriathilum pretend panrathukkum correct ah attend panrathukkum vithiyasam ithu than

Jaanu: Shokka sonnae shanki..paiyan enna solrathu theriyama shake aagitan paaru...

Chinnu: sari sari.... overaa ottatheengappa....

Shanki: sari da free ya vidu.... enakku semmaiya pasikkuthu..come on lets go to Food court and have something to eat...Client kitta pesi pesi thaavu theernthu pochu enakku

Chinnu: hmm ok..i too will have something to korichify... lets go folks.........

[So antha 5 member team proceed to Food court for breakfast]

Scene-3
[Venue: Food Court]

Shanki: Guys...naan poi ellorukkum bill pottutu varen..wait pannunga.... Jaanu nee as usual cornflakes than sappiduve...others..enna sappida poreenga

Parthi: enakku idly solluda

Sushi: enakkum..

Shanki: ok cool..unakkennada Chinnu

Chinnu: I am going for vegetable sandwich da..

Shanki: sari..... oru nalla place ah paarthu settle aagunga... naan poitu order pannitu vaangitu varen..Jaanu..neeyum vaama...

Sushi: pasangala..anga oru table gaaliya irukku paarunga..lets go there.....

[Ellorum table la poi utkara, Chinnu coke tin vaangitu joins them]

Chinnu: hey guys..coke kudikareengala.... Food court la vaikkara thanni kudicha thaagam adangave maatenguthu..... athan coke tin vaanginen...

Parthi: poda.. 10:30 is coffee time for me.. naan coffee sappiduven

Chinnu: milk powder la podara namma vending machine coffee thaane..uvvee...athai eppadi da kudikare..... over coffee udambukku aavathu da....itho paarthiya diet coke...calories kammi.. not bad for health.....

Parthi: enna machi panrathu.... pazhagidichu..vida mudilaye...

[Few moments later Shanki and Jaanu join them with the food items and they settle down eating, chit chatting]

Sushi: enda shanki..namma Jaanu three years ah love pannitu iruntha paiyanaiye kattika veetula successful ah sammatham vaangitaa engagement varai kondu vanthutta...nee five years ah oru love story ottitu irukkae... eppo athai marriage stage la arangettram panna porae

Shanki: Hmm... avalukku enna..athai paiyanai love pannina..so perisa entha problemum varama easy ah matter mudinju pochu...en kathai appadiya.... appa kitta antha ponnai kootitu poi...intha ponnu enakku etha ponnu pa.. ivalaiye katti vaingapa nu sonna...Mavane un taste ku etha ponna iruntha pathathu da...namma caste ku etha ponna irukanum nu ketkararu...enna solla solra... etho pechu vaarthai nadanthuttu irukku.... paarkalam

Sushi: pechu vaarthai ethanai varusham than nadathuve..seekiram oru mudiva solli kalyana sappadu podu...

Jaanu: athellam irukkatum..intha Parthi paiyan oru ponnukku nool vitutu irukkanae antha kathaiya ketkaliya nee...

Sushi: yaaru...antha Punjabi ponnu Pavithra thaane... theriyum theriyum...

Jaanu: enna theriyum..avan nethiku avala propose panna poitu bulb vaangitu vanthathu theriyuma....

Shanki and Sushi (chorus) : Wowww...theriyave theriyaathe.... dei paarthi...enga antha story ah sollu...

Paarthi (embarassed): yey...Jaanu.. puhleeease....vittudu...maanathai vaangathe...

Jaanu: haha..ithula enna irukku da...cool it machi... etho oru loosu paiyan kodutha idea la...ivan oru greetings um rose um eduthukittu nethikku Pavithra cubicle la kondu poi ava illatha nerathula vachirukan.... ava athaiyellam paarthathum semmaiya tension aagi....... yaaroda velai ithu nu koochal potirukka..... paiyan ava kitta poitu ithellam unakkaga than nu solrathukku yeh teri liyae pavi.. nu solla start panninavan ava kannula therinja kobatha paarthu mirandu poi...teriliyae pavi..enakku therilayae... nu maathi ularitu odi vanthuttan..hahaha...

[Everyone laughs at Paarthi....]

Shanki: enda dhairiyam ah solla mudiyathavanukku lam ethukkuda love-u?

Paarthi: sari vidu.... naanavathu oru level varaikkum ponaen..aana namma Chinnu evlo naala antha Swapna ponnai thoorathula irunthe love waves pass pannitu irukkan... Intha mokkai murali ya evanavathu ottureengala....

Chinnu: ennai enda vambuku izhukkareenga... en kaathal konjam aazhamanathu illiya....athunala than naan aazham paarthutu irukaen..... ava kitta solrathukku kaalam paarthuttu irukaen...hehee

Paarthi: thoda...love ah solrathukku vazhiya paaru da na..ipadi vazhiyare...

[Their friend Hari arrives]

Hari: dei chinnu..mama...nee route vittutu irukkiyae un aalu Swapna inniku white Salwar la bright ah devathai mathiri summa super ah vanthirukka da...ippo Cafeteria la than iruka

Chinnu: appadiya....ohhh...etho wedding poitu inniku late ah varuva nu ava team mate sonnan..... antha costume la than vanthirukkala office ku.... then itz a must watch...naan kilambaren..guys...see u later

Jaanu: ennamo Sify oda cinema review maathiri sollitu poraan..must watch nu...

Sushi: dei vaangi vacha sandwich ah sapidama odariya.... nee sariyana jollu da...

Shanki: avan summavae avalai pathi uruguvan... nee vera yen da hari avana ethi vidare....

Hari: hmm..just thought of sharing this info..satharanama oru alukku dress la vantha kooda azhagu nu solvaan..inniku nijammave super dress la vanthirukka....ivan mattum avalai paarthan na...mayangiye vizhundhuvuan

[Venue: Cafteria]

Chinnu goes to the cafeteria situated in the right side of the Food court..Swapna was not there..all other friends were there....oh..probably Coffee vaangitu vara poiruppa, thinks Chinnu and prefers to wait for Swapna taking a corner seat, some distance away from their desk...As his heart pumps up awaiting Swapna in a supposedly cute dress, his mind pens up a poem in that cycle gap....

"Vennira Salwar-il nadanthaadum Perazhage,
un vazhiyile Selvaar-in manathai panthaadum un azhage.."

ippadi oru bit-tu Chinnu manasula uruvaagitu irukkumbothu avanoda kavithaiyin nayagi Swapna Coffee cup oda thannoda idathukku thirumbi vanthu kondirunthal...Vantha antha Ponnu looked deep into namma Chinnu's eyes who was ogling her a few meters apart..Avalai aavaludan kannodu kann paartha andha second, solla mudiyatha maatrangal pala happened to Chinnu...His heart beat rapidly, the face started sweating and he felt butterflies flying in his heart...."Idhudhan kaadhal enbatha...idhayam pongi vittatha..." ena avan ninaithu kondirukkumbothe, the butterflies shifted their position from heart to stomach, kangal soruga, namathu kathaiyin nayagan Chinnu mayakkam adichu keezhe vizhunthan



[To be Continued...]

[pavalamani pragasam]

vazakkam pOla vaarththai jaalam arumai!

[Madhu Sree]

appram appram...

[Shakthiprabha]

Indraiya menu, ven pongal, idli, kesari and arisi uppuma...

OrE naaLaikku ivLo menu-va TV-serial / movie vara bf table mathiri irukku

elaam ungalukku pudicha itema irukkum. (enakkum koLLai priyam, esp veN pongal and arisi upma )

athikaalai velai lam illa... konjam athiga neram aagi vitta kaalai thaan... aduthaduthu snooze panni vida patta insult thaangama oru vazhiya antha mobile alaram adikkarathai stop pannirunthathu.

Sushi : hidaa chinnu, as usual innikum un punctuality puncture aayiducha

Chinnu: sari sari.... overaa ottatheengappa....

Jaanu: paiyan ava kitta poitu ithellam unakkaga than nu solrathukku yeh teri liyae pavi.. nu solla start panninavan ava kannula therinja kobatha paarthu mirandu poi...teriliyae pavi..enakku therilayae... nu maathi ularitu odi vanthuttan..hahaha...

Jaanu: ennamo Sify oda cinema review maathiri sollitu poraan..must watch nu...

his mind pens up a poem in that cycle gap....

ithellaam naan rasitha varigaL. Humour simply oozes out in ur narration!

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and...before we forget whoz chinnu, swapa and their gang plz tell us what happened in their lives

[rsubras]

thanks in lots for pavalamani, madhu and shakthi prabha..........

well.... konjam research pannitu irukkaen for the next part of the story...... will post it within this weekend.......

Thanks for your cheers

[ezhil89]

"Idhudhan kaadhal enbatha...idhayam pongi vittatha..."

intha songoda lyrics entha padam nu yosichite irkem but strike aaga matenguthu well neenga en posta padicha reply panunga sir.

last la twist panitinga ethuku chinnu mayangi vizunthan ???

[Jyothsna]

"Idhudhan kaadhal enbatha...idhayam pongi vittatha..."

intha songoda lyrics entha padam nu yosichite irkem but strike aaga matenguthu well neenga en posta padicha reply panunga sir.

last la twist panitinga ethuku chinnu mayangi vizunthan ???

Hi Ezhil

Welcome to hub.. The Song is Netru illatha matram from Puthiya mugam.

[rsubras]

Sorry all for the enormous delay.........have the story climax in mind.........but flow than romba thadai paduthu........ will post as and when the flow starts flowing Thanks much for all of ur support and cheers

Ezhil.........thanks.......anga than varuthu twist uuu

[Querida]

Hi RSubras,

As usual really enjoyed reading your story

the mix in of lingo and humour is just so enjoyable

really sounds like a good script...keep it up...looking forward to reading more!

[rsubras_1]

So sorry guys for the lengthhyyyyyyyyyyy break...... I was able to complete the story only now..........and unfortunately my profile got locked..so I created another id here

Location : Get Well Soon Hospital @ Mylapore
Time : 1 pm

Doctor Rajaram's cabin.

Dr.Rajaram was having his mid day meals as Nurse Rita drops in with a coffee mug


Nurse: Enna doctor ippadi medhuva saptutu irukeenga...anga patients lam ungala consult panrathukku thudichittu irukkanga....


Dr.Rajaram: Patients na konjam patience-um irukkanum Rita....... enna than naan doctor ah irunthaalum, only when I am in good health I can look after others health' illiya...athukku velaikku naduvilayum vela velaikku correct ah sappidanum


Nurse: athu sari..unga custom ungalukku.......avanga kashtam avangalukku..... inthaanga Coffeee.. daily 3 cup coffee kudikkarathu mattum ketta pazhakkam illiya


Dr.Rajaram: aama ketta pazhakkam than enna panrathu...... vida mudilaye.... thappo right oh ovvoru manushanukkum oru addiction irukkum..enakkum ethavathu irukka vendaama...athan ithu ....


Nurse: Basic ah ve ungala jeyikka mudiyaathu....... idhula pesi jeyikka mudiyuma doctor...


Dr.Rajaram: (sips the coffee) aaha aaha..sooper coffee po...... chumma solla koodathu....... Nurse's coffee na Nurse's coffee than..besh besh sooper ah irukku.....


Nurse: vilayadatheenga doctor..... seekiram seekiram..... patients lam wait panranga paarunga...... antha IT company pasanga oru paiyana kootitu vanthaangalae......

Dr.Rajaram: Yaaru Chinnasamy ngra chinnu thaane......theriyum theriyum..... avanoda appan enakku childhood friend

Nurse: appo neenga avangalukku Family doctor ah

Dr.Rajaram : apadi lam illa........ Family Friend than... eppavachum meet pannipom........ sollirukan avan thannoda pasangala pathi

Nurse: sari, Chinnukku neenga sonna test lam eduthaachu.... avan friends lam ungalukkaga than waiting..........Office la permission kettutu vanthirukkangalam....... result ah therinjittu seekiram ponum nu avasarathula irukanga........


Dr.Rajaram: intha software company pasanga thollai thaangalae....... office la evvalo neram nalum velai paarkama arattai adippanga.........aana ippadi oru thevaikku nu velila vantha kooda seekiram ponum seekiram ponum nu parappanga


Nurse: athu sari doctor, ennathan office la velai paarkalenalum, angaye iruntha salary ku prachinai varaathu........ithu thirumba porathuku late aachuna, leave, loss of pay nu poiduchunna........ Salary cut aayidume...anyways....avangala first attend pannungalen.....


Dr.Rajaram: With pleasure madam...... Come on lets go......

(Doctor gets up and walks in to the room where our Hero Chinnu was admitted)


Chinnu voda friends Hari, Paarthi, Shanki, Sushi, Jaanu were standing anxiously around Chinnu, as he was still recovering from the giddiness


Nurse: Inga paarunga..patient ah suthi ninnuttu irukkanga..... konjam idam kidaicha podhume...enga paarthalum circle form pannida vendiyathu


Doctor: (to nurse) Chinna pasanga thaane...ithukku peru than Ilavattam nu solvaanga..free ya.... vidu........ (sathamaga) Friends..... enna panreenga...... paavam antha paiyan..... kann muzhikkum bothu avan thalaiya suthi neenga ninnuttu irukkaratha paartha, marubadiyum thalaiya suthidum avanukku...... konjam air varattume patient ku


Paarthi: enna doctor... kilambu kaathu varattum nu solreenga


Doctor: haha.......good one...... irunthalum naan appadi sollalai........ konjam spread aagi nillunga nu sonnaen.....

[Meanwhile Chinnu slowly re-gains his consciousness much to the relief of his friends]



Hari: ennada Chinnu ippadi pannitae... oru pechukku nee ava azhagula mayangiduve nu sonnaean..... nijammave mayangittiye da..... avlo azhagava iruntha

Chinnu: (suthi paarthuttu understands the situation he is in) oh my GOD...what I am doing here........ innaiku oru delivery irukku....naan ponum


Paarthi: dei dei overaa scene podathe da..namma Manager inga illa..Doctor than irukar... nee delivery athu ithu nu pesina avar vera maathiri purinjikka poraar


Nurse: Mister...


Paarthi: yes Sister!!!


Nurse: ipadi neengale mokkai pottutu iruntheenga appuram naanga eppo than pesarathu enga Doctor ah pesa vitteenga na thane avar Chinnu voda problem ah pathi explain pannuvaar....



Hari: Sorry doctor, Please sollungo.... We are very curious to know if there is anything serious?


Chinnu: enda Hari intha build up......Doctor, pasanga thevai illama kalavara pattutanga ninaikaren........ Devathaiyai kanden... Kaadhalil vizhuthen maathiri Kaal thadukki vizhunthen....... avlothan.... mostly enna..vitamin kurai paadu irukkum....... Becosules sappita sari aayidanum ninaikkaren..am I right?

Doctor: so smart...... nee oru software engineer nu prove pannite thambi...... naalu anju vishayam internet ah paarthu therinjukittu udane entha problem kum ithan solution ngrathu......

Paarthi: Sorry doctor........avan oru cashewnut...eppavum appadi than peter vittutu irupan.........neenga solllunga... avanukku blood test lam edutheengalae.. Result vanthatha.....

Chinnu: sss..sorry doctor.... neenga sollunga

Doctor: mm..athu..... ok Chinnu, blood result , ECG report lam vanthathu...... ECG is fine........... but you have a high blood pressure.......and moderately diabetic as well........... BP shoot up aanathunalathan unakku mayakkam vanthirukku

Chinnu: (Shocked) bp ya........ (bp ya bp ya nu moonu thadavai echo aaguthu around the room) ena doctor solreenga.... I am barely 23...... enakku poi BP yum sugar- uma... I cant believe this.......

Doctor: hmm...... nee ketkara kelvi nyayam than......... aana makkal epadiyo diseases um appadi thane irukkum..... ethukum neram illai neram illai nu paraparappa odittu irukkara intha fast food society la.... diseases kum porumai irukkarathu ila.......... athan early age laye vanthuduthunga..........

Chinnu: but but doctor..... I am very health conscious you know....... I am a tee totaller......... alcohols sip paninathu kooda kidayathu.........cigaratte ku strict no no...... beedi enna...... beeda kooda nan podurathu kidayathu....... enakku poi BP nu neenga solratha enna la namba mudiyale doctor.... itho paarunga intha Paarthi.... oor la irukkara A-Z ela ketta pazhakkamum irundhirukku........ ivane last week panina medical check up la all clear aagi vanthirukkan

Paarthi: dei dei nanbana nee....... nambikkai dhrogi.......... romba nalla manasu da unakkku

Chinnu: sorry machaan........ oru emotion la pesittaen........ Enga friends circle laye naan than more health conscious.... athulayum past 2 months ah naan diet la than irukkaen..... i dont drink coffee or tea and only Diet Coke..... Morning sappadu ngra per la enga veetula podara heavy luggage ah complete ah avoid pannitu, I go in for sandwiches @ office.... Gym la enroll pannirukken

Hari: aana weekly ethanai vaati povaan nu lam ketka koodathu

Chinnu: summa iru da.. Night kooda soru sappidama tiffin thaan sapidaren..... I dont know being a software engineer working 24 x 7, what else I will be able do to maintain my health........ [sighs]

Doctor: haha...relax thambi relax...... There is a truth and tragedy in whatever you had told...The truth is you have just spelled out the reasons why you got high BP at a relatively younger age........and the tragedy is you had been fooling your own self by developing an illusion that whatever you had been doing is healthy

Chinnu: Doctor....


Doctor: First and foremost........ stop having the illusion that just because you do not smoke or drink means you are a very healthy man..... Smoking and Boozing are a must avoidable but they are only an apparent evil thing known to everyone.... People miss the larger picture here.... there are pretty bad things which do not get classified as an avoidable thing at all and continue to be patronized ...... The Fast foods for example........Do you know the level of sodium and sugar in those foods.... or the Transfats and Saturated fat contents? Single handedly these junk foods can lead you to cancer, brain tumor or heart attack

Chinnu: ......

Doctor : Secondly, you were referring to your skipping breakfast as part of diet.......that is the most insane thing that one will ever resort to......... Breakfast is nothing but Breaking the Fast, i.e breaking the starving period for around 10 hrs since the previous night...... It is the most essential part of a day's meal in providing the energy for your day's activities..... By ignoring the breakfast routine and resorting to snacks at odd times you had only been putting yourself at high risk category... And definitely when you starve like this........ you would have gone for fillers, like biscuits or puffs to keep your mind happy....... ippadiye overload pannitu iruntha antha digestive system paavam enna pannum..... intha maathiri than react pannum

Sushi: Agreed doctor...... Not only Chinnu, but almost all of us take up snacks between lunch and during the evenings... But then.....arent we in the age where the elders would say "Kallai sapittalum karaiyum"..... Our digestive system are supposed to be in the prime form at this age.....

Doctor : you seem to be a smart girl...........but you miss a point here...... The age old adage you mentioned is not false at all........ But imagine............when was this coined....... At an age when the youth had to toil hard daily to earn their meals....... Even the rich kids had to keep themselves physically fit for the demands of the then society. But what is happening today? You get everything at the click of your mouse and the comfort of your house....the physical working part is almost literally removed........... But does the people really compensate for the loss of the advantages they had with the earlier life style.......... Today.....even for visiting a friend at next apartments you need a bike or a car, even for going to your office in the 1st floor you take up the lift.........Dont you ever know that climbing up the stairs brings down your pressure......

Nurse: Therinjirukum doctor..... pressure romba irangiduchina low bp vanthudumo nu bayanthuruppanga

Doctor: hahah... Good one.......appuram games.... Chinnu paiya..tell me when u last played cricket or football or any such outdoor games?

Chinnu: well....... 9th standard varaikum vilayadittu irunthaen...... Then 10th vantha pinnadi, studies appadi nu responsibilities vanthuttathala I dont go for playing at all..... athukappuram vilayadarathukku naanga enna chinna pasanga la nu enga friends ellarum vittutom

Doctor: mm..paaru.......... adhuvum kidayaathu.......... chinna pasanga than odi odi vilayadanum nu ethum auto pinnadi ezhuthi pottirukangala enna? enna paaru........ My age is 53..naan vaaliba aal illa.......aanalum volleyball aaduven daily......ethuku..... to keep my body fit and keep my mind in good humor.......... ippadi wrong ah na food habits nala udambula toxin mela toxins ah eduthukittu, athai compensate panra maathiri entha oru physical activities um panama.......... ottu mothama unnnoda body system ah nee kai vittutae..... athuvum paavam evlo than handle pannum...... Infact ithu verum warning sign thaan........ nee sutharikkalena it can lead to Cancer or other potentially risk diseases.......

Chinnu: enna solreenga doctorrr...

Doctor: Kanna unna bayamurutharathukaga naan ithellam sollala.......unna maathiri niraya youths and that includes ur friends here......... world economy pathiyum politics pathiyum, ovvoruthar personal life mishappenings kooda correct ah therinju vachikkaranga.......aana health vishayathula mattum arai vekkaduthanama konjam konjam thernju vachikittu, spoil pannikarom nu theriyamalayae avanga health ah spoil pannikaranga....... antha aathangathula than konjam niraya pesittaen......... Dont worry.........all is not lost............ blood pressure moderate ah than irukku...... if you wake up now and change ur life style understanding your body you can lead a very healthy life.........

Chinnu: hmm..ok doctor....... eppadiyo bayamuruthinalum fact ah solli puriya vachirukeenga..... I will definitely change my life style both in terms of food habits and physical activities....sss aanalum over advice....... konjam thoonga vidunga doctor

Doctor: hahaha...

Paarthi: (mimicking Doctor) Good one!!! appadi thane solveenga doctor

Doctor: makkals lam nakkals nalla than panreenga........... sari...... enakku time aachu..adutha patient ah poi paarkanum....... Vartta... Good luck and Get well soon

Chinnu: Thank You doctor!!!

(Swapna.......the white chudithar angel of Chinnu drops in to the room in a hurry)

Swapna: oh oh...what happened to Chinnu......... what happened to Chinnu....

Paarthi: enna ma enna..enna avasaram

Swapna: illa....... naan kaalai la coffee sappida poirunthappo en munnadi oruthar mayakkam pottu vizhunthuttar......... enakku romba bayama pochu...........udane I screamed

Jaanu: scream panniya... enga yaarukume ketkaliye

Chinnu: Icecream voice ponnukku..High scream eppadi varum Jaanu.........

Jaanu: dei jollu jaggu..mooodu da

Swapna: ivara andha nilaima la parthavudane enakkum appadiye mayakkam vanthuduchu........ appuram friends than thanni adichi ennai ezhupinnanga

Paarthi: nalla technique ah irukke... Whiskey ah brandhy ah......

Swapna: haiyyo.........water en face la sprinkle panni ezhupinanga nu sonnaen

Hari: verum water adichale mayakkam thelinjiduma

Paarthi: akka vukku low budget mayakkam vanthiruku pola....... athan water wash laye enthiruchittanga.....

Swapna: appuram naan friends kitta visarichathula sir ku than mayakkam vanthathu... intha hospital la admit pannirukkaratha sonnanga...... Ivara pathi Appa kitta phone la sollumbothu than therinjathu.........en appa vukku onnnu vitta cousin than ivanga amma vam......... enakku ivar Aththan murai venumaam

Paarthi: adra sakkai ...Love waves unakku satharanama work out aagala da..Tsunami range ku work out aayirukku

Swapna: kandippa poi paarthuttu va nu appa sonnanga...athan udane taxi pidichu odi vanthaen.......

Hari: taxi kula utkarnthe vanthirukkalame...en odi varanum

Jaanu: niruthu da...nee sollu ma

Swapna: Chinnu..... enai parthutte irundha neenga en mayakkam pottu vizhuntheenga...... athu kooda ok athai paarthu naan en mayakkam pottu vizhanum

Chinnu: athu onnum illa Swapiii..naama rendu perum orae nerathula Kaadhalil Vizhunthuttom..... WE just fell for each other because we were made for each other

Hari: adappavi adappavi....... doctor ippothaneda 1 hr lecture koduthuttu ponaaru......ponnai paarthathum plate ah maathi pesi kavuthuttiye da

Paarthi: Vidu machi....... Avanukku love work out aayirukku.........as friends naama santhosapaduvom...... Love dialogues lam anubavikkanum aaraya koodathu........ vaanga naama ellorum kazhandukalam........ Machi Get well Soon da !!!!

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