Paradigm Scrawl

[Shakthiprabha.]

Date : February 14, 2007
Place: Statistics Lecture at college.
Title: No clue what to keep the title as ...


The first waves splash
Gently against the rocks
As the day goes
Harder on the rocks
Engulfing and enveloping in his strong waves …..
At noon the sun burns the rocks
But the water will cool
And the rocks will await for those warm waves
Come evening the waves will subside
The excitement of the day is no more
For the sea now romances the moon
At this moment the rocks will sadly await …
For the morning
For the sea…
But yet again, next evening
The rocks will be alone
Waiting for the morning
Waiting for the sea..
But how long to wait??
The sea will never stay
With the rocks forever
So why wait??
Just like they always say
Today’s sorrow is tomorrow happiness…
Someday, the hard waves,
Powerful tides would have
Beaten the rocks to granules
Grains of fresh sand
Forming a beautiful beach
An abode for all love
All affection and all fun..
And then will realize the sea
His waves and tides
That without the rocks
He would ne’er be
The blissful, gentle, beautiful beach
That they form together , now….






cheers
chevy
ps: i'd like to know what people think about the above poem. What do you think was running in my mind when i scribbled it ?? Lemme see if any1 close to what i had in mind, ... it will enable me to judge my poetic skills .. hehe ...

hmmm... I did not read ur explanation before.

So I thought... of

SHUNNED love...
IGNORED love (of any relationship)
one side yearns, otherside cares less..

SOMEDAY they would realise...by then its too late... nevertheless, it can take a NEW LEAF.

I guess u had similar explanation

Chevvy,

good flow of words, JUST THAT, my feeling (personally ) IS
make it MORE CRISP. ( less words, MORE IMPACT)

i may be wrong too

but I loved ur poem.

My choice for title would be

" impressions "