LOVE after marriage

[ramyap]

Comments please so that i can know whether i am boring or not? and can decide to proceed further or not?

This has been very nice till now. The idea is good but I feel some places sound repetitive.

I don't understand why you wait for our responses to proceed. Don't you write the story out completely and edit it ? That may help improve the storytelling.

thank you..... But i am writing it at a stretch whatever comes from my mind and i am new to these things so only....