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25th August 2008, 10:33 AM
#21
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Originally Posted by
chevy
and I must also confess some of the poetry makes me desperately want to ring up my english teacher and test their knowledge..sorrry..clarify some doubts... hehe..
yeah such rich choice of words! I cant help admiring every bit of it
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25th August 2008 10:33 AM
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25th August 2008, 10:39 AM
#22
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Que... needless to mention.. .. kalakkals
I have to admit that I had to read the story once again to be sure of what I understood is right :P
Yea .. as u said you were struggling to get rid of the poetry and make it pure prose ... but I think, the unique style made the story look polished..
All the best for ur future stories
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26th August 2008, 09:35 AM
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simply blown away by the narration style, queri..........implicit narration at its best..........wish i could write in this style one day
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26th August 2008, 10:19 AM
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27th August 2008, 10:12 AM
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28th August 2008, 01:33 AM
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28th August 2008, 06:03 AM
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18th September 2008, 05:30 PM
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Good one Q !
Have always toyed with the idea of making a story out of journeys in TTC. The motivation vanished as I stepped out. The moments "inside" are pregnant with untold stories.
The fractured storytelling style was impressive. Had to read carefully and piece things together.
That the moment and theme may be less than universal but is quite important to the narrator was brought out quite well.
Keep writing
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