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28th January 2009, 02:05 PM
#11
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Nilai maarum ulagil.... nilaikkum endra kanavil :P
Seven social sins:
1.Politics without principles
2.Wealth without work
3.Pleasure without conscience
4.Knowledge without character
5.Commerce without morality
6.Science without humanity
7.Worship without sacrifice
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28th January 2009 02:05 PM
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28th January 2009, 04:04 PM
#12
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29th January 2009, 07:46 AM
#13
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Thank You Wibha. You dug up something more than 3 years old !!
Sarna, mAtram onRE ulaga niyadhi aagum
SP, Happy Endings are too imaginative, aren't they ?
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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29th January 2009, 08:25 AM
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Originally Posted by
Prabhu Ram
Thank You Wibha.
You dug up something more than 3 years old !!
Sarna, mAtram onRE ulaga niyadhi aagum
SP,
Happy Endings are too imaginative, aren't they ?
vera velai?
I loved the narration. Bamm Bamm Bamm.... and the end.. short and crisp
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29th January 2009, 08:50 PM
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twist in the tail :P
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30th January 2009, 01:16 PM
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Thank You Wibha and Madhu.
Glad you enjoyed it.
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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2nd February 2009, 09:31 PM
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Kumudam oru pakka kathai mAthiri irunthuchu But twist koncham ottAtha mAthiri oru feel Twist'kaaga kathai enguRa mAthiri
And those who were seen dancing, were thought to be insane, by those who could not hear the music - Friedrich Nietzsche
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2nd February 2009, 10:21 PM
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I agree with roshan, a feel similar to stuffing hasty lyrics to fit in a wellcomposed tune.
Or just may be, we expect much more from PR
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2nd February 2009, 10:49 PM
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Thank you Roshan and SP.
I will hide behind the fact that I wrote the first draft when I was in college.
I admit, the twist holds a lot in the overall impact of the story.
The original idea was to write a longer story with multiple parallel threads each with such reversals due to unsaid 'complications' inbetween left to the readers' inference. adhu avvaLavu sariyA varalainnu vittuttEn.
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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2nd February 2009, 11:04 PM
#20
good one! short and crisp. totally unexpected , filmy ending.
On second thoughts why not attempt to write in detail of your earlier (college days) conception of the now short story?
hope to read more!
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