Antonio, The Boss. :D
The girl's shot bad, but still alive, she manage to escape I guess.
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Antonio, The Boss. :D
The girl's shot bad, but still alive, she manage to escape I guess.
Gianni despised his uncle Capello, all he wanted the old man to do was curl up and die, but he had done great service to their family by letting his father live, and now he had to return the favour...next
I know that it's kinda late to ask this ?. But who's Gianni, and Capello? :oops: Antonio is the boss right?
Sorry.
Nothing at all to be sorry about Surya :D Always good to clarify :wink: so far Antonio is the boss of the hitmen (Phil and Jack and/not the gurl?) anyways Capello is the guy they are all against...and Gianni is Capello's nephew sent off to do Capello's dirty work...hence to get Antonio....whew k back on track now? 8)
Crystal clear now. :D
Antonio shook his head gravely at Phil's slouched body. He looked at his watch. His train left in 20 minutes. Gianni was still after him. He'd better leave.
Thanks Q! All clear. :D
Ok....
Antonio ran upstairs to take his guns before anyone else does. As he enters the room, he trips over Jack corpse.
"Look here you find Antonio, and you don't lay a finger on him, I want him alive, I want to be the one to see his face before i blow it off" snarled Capello as Gianni somberly nodded... next?
eh Surya looks like Antonio should have looked A-Head :twisted:
The storyline is better when he doesn't look, and someone gets their head blown off. :twisted:
Antonio, shocked, searches Jack's body, nothing. He continues to get his guns, when he hears footsteps downstairs.
WOW!! Looks like Niro has completly abandoned the thread due to excess violence! :twisted: :lol2:
He cursed to himself as he recognized Gianni's footsteps. The open window was appealing so he made his exit.
Grabbing the Sniper on his way out, Antonio realized that he was on the second floor!!!! (remember?) :lol: He landed hard on his side, splitting a bush in 2, and maybe a broken rib. :D
Two stories above him, Gianni's silhouette appeared in the window. Antonio raised his rifle and fired a quick shot before limping off into the woods. The train station was in a small village located in a clearing in the forest. He'd better be there or be dead...
Antonio tied his bandana around his ribs, waited hearing silence, cautiously limped down the worn forest path, while Gianni stared at his brother's headless body...
guess he recognized Jackie by the dragon tattoos on both his arms :wink:
He knealt down. A drop of tear squeezed it's way out of the sides of his eyes. Mistaking that it was Antonio who beheaded his brother, Gianni sprints down drawing his mini-gun from his coat. :D
Antonio sprinted through the trees; branches scraping his face. Someone behind him. He whirled around raising his rifle. CRACK. CRACK. KLIK. Damn he thought as he threw it to the ground.
Following his instinct, Antonio jumps to the ground. Pieces of lead breeze by where he once stood. "Come on out Tony!! Oh where, oh where has my little tony gone?" Gianni's voice was insanly stable.
Next. :D
Antonio now crawled on the ground frantically not noticing the sounds of the crunchy leaves were making as he crushed them...'Like catching fish in a barrel'...Gianni smirked as he took aim...
next 8)
Gianni's finger wrapped itself around the trigger; he had Antonio dead in his sites. A hand clamped down on his shoulder. He turned just in time to receive a hard cross to the face, sending him to the leafy ground.
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Originally Posted by Surya
What the hell was that for? You again? What the hell is wrong with you? Why don't you go live off your father's filthy money somewhere! I dont think Cappello would want to know his little princess is playing rough... :lol: *blam* this time she managed to knock him out cold...
Antonio picked himself off the ground. Something had happened, but he didn't care. Just so long as Gianni was occupied. He started again for the village. In the distance a train whistle could be heard...
:lol2: Cool!!!
Antonio now limping towards the train heard a gun gun go off behind him. Who was shooting who? He didn't care. He continued for the train.
Antonio limped past a sign reading, "Village 1000 ft." A last burst of energy surged through him and he began sprinting. The trees began to thin as he got closer.
C-Man!! Vincent! Nice Avatar!! :D U MADE JUNIOR HUBBER! :D
As Antonio got to the Village, he noticed a few familiar faces. One of the men drew his gun and fired in Antonio's direction. Antonio froze, he was alive. Each second that went by felt like an hour. He was still breathing.
Next. :D
--Huzzah! Only 975 posts to get to seasoned! :x
Antonio pulled a .25 target pistol out of his ankle holster and shot the man in the chest, CRACK!, sending him stumbling back into a newspaper stand. Somebody screamed at the gunshot. Where was the train platform?!
Three other men drew their pistols. Antonio had realized what he had done. He turned around. Gianni was Shot. He took another look at the man he killed. It was Raj. His own Bodyguard. :D
He spotted the platform a hundred meters and a ten foot chain linked fence away. He leaped up and clambered over the top. The three men opened fire. Dirt and gravel began shooting up from the ground around him. Something bit into his calf. He stumbled to the train tracks but continued running...
--This is pretty cool We should do something like this where everyone controls a single character and follows a storyline or something--
Wait...Cman, Anotiono shot HIS own bodyguard.....who shot gianni who was trying to kill Antonio. The other guys are also part of Antonio's crew.....
*Flashback* Louie, the head of his bodyguard, faced Antonio.
"You're fired Lou, take a walk." Louie's face flushed with anger.
"You washed up man! You gonna die, man!" Louie screamed as he stormed out of the room. Antonio continued running to the platform. He regretted firing Louie now. For a lot of reasons. One of them was in his leg.
Bravo!!!!! Excelante!!! Tres Bien!!! Super!!!! :clap: :clap: :clap: :thumbsup:
The three men stated to pull. Antonio took cover behind small wall, he was just a couple feet away from the train. "MOTHAARFAAKAASSS!!" He randomly pointed his .25 over the wall and started to pull as well.
Talk about insane!!! :?
*TOOOOOOT* Antonio's train blew its horn as it chugged into the station. At the same time his gun stopped kicking in his hand when he pulled the trigger. He threw it over the wall and dashed for the train, sharp teeth digging into his calf every time he raised it. Another man ran to catch the train as well. He looked back. His ex bodyguards were shooting it out with the arriving police. He was going to make it. The train blew its horn once more signaling that it was about to leave. Antonio grabbed ahold of the railing and breathed a sigh of relief. Suddenly someone behind him said,
"Hey, remember me? Benny Capello from the bronx?" He turned around. BLAM! BLAM! Antonio shuddered as two .45 rounds cut through his abdomen. His hand reached out to the railing to keep him from falling. BLAM! He collapsed to the concrete, blood trailing from his mouth. His eyes moved for Cappello but he was already gone. Blood gushered from Antonio's mouth. He tried closing it to keep it from coming but it forced its way out. His moved his hands to his chest and brought them back to his face. They were covered in blood. He tried to breathe but choked instead. Was this the end?...
--sorry for the violent post. And I know this is a lot more than one line. :?
You want Violence, I'll give u violence!! :lol: Ok lets see what u think of this..
Capello started sprinting towards the bushes. "Uncle?" He stopped, and turned to see his neice Mary. He looked around. No one. "Mary...You're still alive!" he walked towards his beautiful neice. "Uncle..." She hugged him. "It's nice to see you again." Capello pulled away, so did mary, but she had his .45 now. She backed up. "Uncle...who's idea was it to....send thugs to kill me?"
"What?" Capello backed up.
"you know, sending Tony, and Tony hiring Jack and Phil, and all." She clasped the pistol tight in right palm.
"I don't know...what..." He stopped. He was looking down the barrel of his .45.
"Why?" She started to cry. Capello started towards her slowly. "WHY!!???" She pulled the trigger, and pushed lead into capello's left thigh. Capello colapses on the ground. He started to cry. He knew they were his final tears. "I told you that I wouldn't tell anyone about Steve!!" She kicked him in his solar plexus. Capello screamed and gasped for air. She kicked again. This time Capello tasted something sour in his mouth. Mary knelt down, and grabbed his hair. Capello screamed. They were both crying. "How could YOU!!!!???" She brought his head up off of the ground, and slammed it back hard on the gravel covered earth. Capello felt a vibrating pain go through his body. He was cry too hard to scream. "Now, u pay the price." She pushed the .45 against his dangerously bleeding head. Capello tightly closed his eyes still crying. CLICK. The .45 was empty. Capello looked at her. Mary was stil crying. "Well, it's your lucky day isn't it?" She said, and tossed the gun into a bush. Tears stopped from Capello's eyes for a second. His vision was getting blurred. "NO! NO! NO!" Mary realized that he was loosing concience. "I want you to feel your death!!" She pulled out a pocket knife from her pocket. "This is for killing Steve!" She jammed the sharp 5 inch knife into his chest. Capello coughed. "This is for hiring Tony!!!" she brought the knife back and jammed it into his solarplexus again. With each penetraion, Capello was spraying blood into the air through his mouth. "This is for saying that I can't go into MY caslte!!" She jammed the knife into his dying body again, and agian. Capello's blue shirt was in the shade of black now. And THIS IS FOR SENDING GIANNI TO KILL ME!!!" Mary brought her knife to his neck and started sawing. Blood squirted into her face. She kept loosing the grip of the blood soaked knife. "AHHH!" she continued to saw his neck. Capello's concience was fading. Mary Continued to saw.
"BLEED BIT*H BLEEED!!!!" Capello's head rolled away from it's body. Capello's left arm started to twitch. "BLEEEEDDDD!!!!!" Mary pulled herself away. "Jack.....Phil.....Gianni...." She looked at down. "Capello." She said, and started towards the castle. She had killed everyon who had gotten in her way. No one could stop her now.
What about this for Violence!! :twisted: :twisted:
The Seasoned Psycho!! :twisted: Just Kidding. I'm not crazy! :lol:
Sorry guys. I just had to do this. I'm sorry, I know the writing is horrible, the flow, the facts, etc. I'm not feeling very writery today. :D
Later. 8)
I believe I've watched enough of Godfather to last me a lifetime, guys!!
For all this violence, you call me back for a re-cap of more of your hatchet job????
Coltsith - you ought to be ashamed!! Getting me out of retirement, for nothing!!!!! :x
And Surya - Since you are full adrenalin here, why don't you bring down your primal vibrations a notch or two, and come into Annamalai at least to write something worthwhile! I've already invited Radhika et al, to take a peek by the way! :wink:
:o Niro, I take it that u don't like violence? :lol2:
Annamalai? I went there today, it was over me. But after I catch up, I'm there. :D
WOW!!! :shock: I guess we scrared Querida away. :oops: :lol:
I think I did the world a favour when I wrote an early finis to this story...pity you've all revived it with such fervour only to absolutely wade through blood!!!
:D
Yes, Sorry abt that. I promise that Coltsith and I will not flip out of control again. :lol2:
Querida please return!! Ungal Sevai intha threadukku thevai. :D
Speak for yourself! :x My part of the story was a fairy tale compared to yours:-Nirosha, just wanted you to see how far the story had come along.Quote:
Originally Posted by Surya
-Querida, hope you aren't scared off by all this.
-sbadri99, maybe you can start off the next one after this post.
-surya, :shock:
Ayyo what has happened here???? :lol: Scaring me away? when will you guys learn :roll: :P ....ok ok first Surya yela didn't i tell you red bull and choco not good for you...Coltsith who cares how many posts it takes it matters how good your posts are....sorry i don't know what's wrong with me but i actually enjoyed being captured up in the action you two wrote....:D sigh my poor mother :lol:
but Surya towards the end ya that was like :shock: ...more skill less kill...
hmmm i think it is time to start a new topic or if you'd like a good transition (1-3 line guys remember :P )
Niro, Badri perhaps this is to your advantage?
I will check tomorrow if no line is posted will start one of my own ok? :D
C-Man! I was stayin away from all the blood until ur "Hey! It's me Capello from the Bronx.
This passage triggered me. :lol: :oops:Quote:
Originally Posted by C-Man
Querida,
Not much skill in that passage. I was just going for goary, violence in taht passage to counter colt's. :lol2: I guess ur fierce when it comes to violence. :D
Well,
Since I started the last one, I'll let someone else do it this time. :D
Alright, one advantage of being down under is my day starts earlier than most of you out there...so let me try my hand at the one to three liner...
And Colt and Surya - you are absolutely forbidden from making this into another blood bath, no matter how much Querida encourages you...
She looked up into the mirror, her fingers tracing lines on the weathered face that stared up at her. She hadn't always been like this - there had been days when she had been pretty- yes, with a string of young men, trying to win her attention
So, who's next?
Ok, well some fighting and violence is inevitable, depending on how the story goes. It will go along with the story. But I promise, I will not post anymore uneeded graphic explit violence. :D
....Ok.......I'm going blank. I'm gonna wait for someone else to continue. :D