MY POEMS AND WRITINGS....Some food for thought .!!

[Nichiro]

If you think deeply taking the meaning of the heading, you would realise the purpose.
Agreed to your arguement,but source is one.

[Nichiro]

If you think deeply taking the meaning of the heading, you would realise the purpose.
Agreed to your arguement,but source is one.

[pavalamani pragasam]

Nichiro! Taking God to your side to see pain in the world(mainly woman's) only? Well, if it is your plan to submerge us in a sea of salty tears, let me warn you when the salt gets saturated it will become a Dead Sea where we cant drown!

[rajasaranam]

Nichiro,

Ungal kavithai miga nandraga irunthathu. Aayinum pala naatkal munnae paditha 'haikku' kaana variaarigal en nyabagathil irunthu

moondru varigalil amaiya vaendum
muthal iru varigalukku aazhntha thodarbu irukka vaendum
moondram vari mutrum thodarbatru irukka vaendum allathu oru thirupam irukka vaendum
mothamai paarkayil moondru varigalum etho oru thodarbu kondirukka vaendum

satendru thodriya oru 'haikku'

'un kannathil
en parkalin adaiyaalam
nilavil vadu'

i googled and found this page. may be iam wrong but iam giving the link anyway
http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/#whatishaiku

sorry if i have intervened in your thread

[Nichiro]

Hello Rajasaranam Avl,

Haiku which is a Japanese form of telling a lot in minimum words is a form of poetry
which is generally
5 letters
7 letters
5 letters.
These letteres were Konji form of writing which means, a single letter could convey many things apart from what it was supposed to mean.
This usage of just 5 letters of Konji script was enough.
We cannot translate the same rule in English as single word may have over ten letters.
Same thing holds true in other Indian languages.
Hence during early 60.s Gujarati poets who started Haiku movement in Gujarat, started off with 5,7,5 words usage.
I was a part of that movement in my school days where I tried both 5,7,5 letters and words forms.
Thanks for the link,
Also thanks for your kind words about my poetry which I know is very primitive.
You are most welcome any time to enter this thread.
Ellam Inba Mayam.

Nichiro

[rajasaranam]

thanks for welcoming me

i just found out there are more haiku lovers in this HUB

RR and sooriyavizhi are wriitng haiku's in other threads.
continue with your nice works

[Nichiro]

RR composes in English ?

[rajasaranam]

dont know but he composes haiku in Tamizh

[Nichiro]

Hello Friends,
A poem for today's "Superman"


CONQUEROR

Standing among the dead bodies of questions
His reason of being is waiting.
Two questions have refused to die.
He has not let any sanity
Come anywhere near himself.
A wall of vaccume has
Imprisoned the conscience.

For it was taught
"Be Ruthless and Thou shalt win."
"Be alone and Thou shalt go far"
He has refused to belong,
For, relationship are dead weight.
That's what he had learnt.

Now he has only one aim,
To conquer Time.
"Will he?" "won't he ?" are the only
Two questions, he has not been
Able to kill.

Nichiro

[Nichiro]

.Dear Hubbers,
A poem for child labour activists.


...And they said, children's fingers make best products

In a dingy room
Rows of children...
Very young children,
Weave coffin cloths for
their childhood ......

A childhood,
which died before they were born.
And people call them Carpets.

Same nimble fingers have
Lost sense of touch
And mechanically, now,
They roll tendu leaves
They do not fill tobacco
But each leaf roll is filled with
Their childhood.

A childhood,
Which died before they were born.
And people call them Beedies.

In an isolated factory hall,
Rows upon rows of children,
Wearly roll papers,
And fill them with
Their childhood.

A childhood,
Which died before they were born
And people call them Fireworks.

Come, let's give back their childhood,
And freedom to play and dream.

Give up with determination,
Smoke, carpets and crackers.
Each one , teach one.

Nichiro