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15th April 2005, 06:42 AM
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My first attempt at Tamizh Poetry
My very first attempt at Tamizh poetry. Pizhai irunthaal (etharkku irunthaal, irukkum) mannikkavum.
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Ó¨È ¾ÅȢ ÁÉ¢¾¨É ÀüÈ¢ ӨȢ¼
À¼÷ó¾ ¬¨Äò¨¾ì ¸ñÎ, Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ ¿¢Æø «Ç¢ò¾Å§É,
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¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ±ýÉ?
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¬¨Ä¸û ¦ºö§¾¡õ, ¦¾¡Æ¢üº¡¨Ä¸û ¦ºö§¾¡õ
«íÌ ¬ð¸Ù째 þø¨Ä §Å¨Ä,
þíÌ ¬Ö즸ýÉ §Å¨Ä
±ýÚ Å£úò¾¢É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼
ºÄºÄ¦ÅÉ þ¨º ¦ºöÔõ «Ãº ÁÃò¨¾ì §¸ð¼¡û ÅÉ ¸ýÉ¢:
ÁÃí¸ÙìÌ «Ãº§É
Á¡¾÷¸ÙìÌ ¾¨ÄŨÉÔõ ¾¨ÄôÀ¢ÃºÅò¾Ôõ «ÕûÀŧÉ
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ±ýÉ?
¬ÃºÁÃõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ:
Á¡¾÷¸û ¸¡¾Ä÷¸Ç¡ö ¸¡§Äƒ¢§Ä ¾¨ÄÅ¨É Á½ì¸¢ýÈÉ÷
À¢ÃºÅò¾¢÷째¡ §¿Ãõ þø¨Ä - º÷§Ã¡§¸ð ¾¡¨Â §¾Î¸¢ýÈÉ÷
«ÃºÛõ þø¨Ä, «ÈÓõ þø¨Ä, «ÃºÁÃõ ÁðÎõ ±¾÷즸ýÚ
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼
Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
ÁçÁ¡ «øÄÐ ÁÕ󧾡 ±ýÚ ¸ºó¾¡Öõ «ÕÁÕó¾¡ö Å¢ÇíÌÀŧÇ
Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á
Òò¾¡ñ¨¼ò ÐÅ츢 ¦ÅöìÌõ §Åõ§À
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ¾¡ý ±ýÉ?
§ÅôÀÁÃõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ
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¸ºó¾¡Öõ ¿ý¨Á ¾Õõ §Åõ¨À §¾Î§Å¡÷ þø¨Ä
Òò¾¡ñÊüÌ À¡÷ʸÙìÌ ¦ºøÖÅ÷
Á¨ÄÁ¸¨Ç Á¨Ä¡¸ ¦ÅÚõ ¸øÄ¡¸ì ¸¡ñÀ÷
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼
§¸ð¼¡û ÅÉ «Ãº¢ §¸ð¼ À¢ý ÜȢɡû:
ӨȢ¼ Åó¾Å÷¸¨Ç Өȡ¸ì §¸ð§¼ý
¿¡ý ¦º¡øÖõ Å¡÷ò¨¾Ôõ §¸ûÁ¢ý
¸ÅÉò¨¾ þÆó¾¡ý ÅÉò¨¾ «Æ¢ò¾¡ý
þíÌ Åɧ¾Å¢§Â ÅÉò¨¾ §¾Î¸¢È¡û
¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
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15th April 2005 06:42 AM
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15th April 2005, 08:00 AM
#2
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†¡ö Àòâ !
¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐ...
À¢¨Æ þÕìÌõ ±ýÚ ´ôÒì ¦¸¡ûÅÐ ¯í¸û ¾ýɼì¸ò¨¾ì ¸¡ðθ¢ÈÐ.
¦À¡Õû ÌüÈõ þÕôÀ¢ý ±ó¾ ¿ì¸£ÃáÅÐ ÅóÐ ±ÎòÐî ¦º¡øÄ¢ Å¢ÎÅ¡÷..
¬É¡ø ¬í¸¡í§¸ ¯ûÇ ±ØòÐô À¢¨Æ¸¨Ç
¿£í¸§Ç ¾Â× ¦ºöÐ ºÃ¢ ¦ºöРŢÎí¸§Çý !
¯¾¡Ã½ò¾¢üÌ,
"¦Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ "
±ýÀ¨¾
"¦ÁªÉò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦ÁªÉ ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
"§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
Á¡üÈÄ¡õ.
BTW, ¿¡§É ´Õ «¨Ą̃Ⱦ¡ý.. «¾É¡ø ±ý¨Éò ¾¢ð¼¡¾£í¸ ! :P
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15th April 2005, 08:04 AM
#3
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ÁÐ «Å÷¸§Ç: Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢. Á¡üÈ¢ Å¢ð§¼ý.
þ-¸Äô¨À¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöŧ¾ ´Õ ¸¨Ä. þ¾¢ø ±ý ¾Á¢ú spelling §ÅÚ! «¾É¡ø ¾¡ý ¿¡ý ¦ÅÌÅ¡¸ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöž¢ø¨Ä.
besides, it take so much time. It took me more time to type this poem than to actually think and write it!!!
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
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15th April 2005, 08:38 AM
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Àòâ, ¸¡ïÍô§À¡É ÁæÁøÄ¡õ, À¡ þÕì¸ ÁÃò¨¾ô À¡òÐ ¬Ú¾ø «¨¼Ôõ. «ó¾ ÀÍÁçÁ ¦ÅðÎôÀð¼¡, ¸¡ðÎÁÃí¸û ±øÄ¡õ «Ðí¸ ¸Å¨Ä¦Â Åɧ¾Å¨¾ ¸¢ð¼ ӨȢÎí¸. ¬É¡ Åɧ¾Å¨¾§Â ¸Äí¸¢ ¿¢ýÉ¡ «ó¾ò§¾Å¨¾ìÌ Â¡Ã¡¦Ä ¬Ú¾ø ¦º¡øÄ ÓÊÔõ?
http://www.raaga.com/channels/tamil/movie/T0000222.html
Ethu nadakkumO athu nanRaagavE nadakkum.
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15th April 2005, 08:41 AM
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Wow! Àòâ, Á¢¸×õ «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾; ¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐȢ×! À¢¨Æ¸¨Çô ÀüÈ¢ «ÄðÊ즸¡ûÇ¡¾£÷¸û! þÐ ±ýÉ ÀûÇ¢ìܼÁ¡, ¿¡í¸û À¢Ãõ§À¡Î ¿¢üÌõ Å¡ò¾¢Â¡÷¸Ç¡? ¦º¡øÄ Åó¾Ð Òâó¾Ð, «Ð §À¡Ðõ ±ýÀÐ þì¸¡Ä ÒÐ communication era's concept. ±ô§À¡Ð "¸Å¢¨¾ìÌ ¸Å¢¨¾" ¾¢Ã¢ìÌ ÅóÐ ¸Äì¸ô§À¡¸¢È£÷¸û?
Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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15th April 2005, 08:44 AM
#6
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¾ðÎò ¾ÎÁ¡È¢ þô§À¡ ¾¡ý §Â¦¾¡ ±Ø¾Â¢Õ째ý...«ÐìÌûÇ, ¿£í¸ §ÅÈ PP Madam!!
By the way, ellam, ungal kili pechhin inspiration thaan
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
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15th April 2005, 03:43 PM
#7
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Re: My first attempt at Tamizh Poetry
Originally Posted by
sbadri99
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¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?
¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ þó¾ ¸Å¢Ãº... ÒÄõÀø...
¦¸¡ïºõ... «ÄõÀÖõ ܼ....
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TSO ... ²ý ±ô¦À¡ØÐõ.. ±ý ¿¢¨É׸Ǣø þÕ츢ȡ÷Û ¾¡ý ¦¾Ã¢ÂÅ¢ø¨Ä...
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17th April 2005, 12:19 PM
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Badri,
idhu nejamaavey unga mudhal attempt-a, sollunga??..bcos most of us write only 4-5 lines in our first attempt...aana neenga oru periya kaaviyamey eludhi irukeenga...
nala iruku...innum neraya eludhunga...
//ÁçÁ¡ «øÄÐ ÁÕ󧾡 ±ýÚ ¸ºó¾¡Öõ «ÕÁÕó¾¡ö Å¢ÇíÌÀŧÇ
Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á //---very nice lines..
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18th April 2005, 04:56 AM
#9
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Malligai: Nejamave mudhal attempt thaan...
ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!!
Thanks much for the appreciation!
When we stop labouring under the delusion of our cosmic self-importance, we are free of hindrance, fear, worry and attachment. We are liberated!!!
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18th April 2005, 06:55 AM
#10
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ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!!
achachO !
appadi ellaam ninaikka kUdaadhu !
evvalvu nalla theme solli irukkeenga !
kaNdippa ezhudhunga !
ungaLaal mudiyum ! :P
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