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31st July 2008, 11:00 PM
#1
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Indigo
Indigo
in there i go
where i left before
in through the dark i glow
floating thru the crevices that i do not know
stepping upon the words that flow
clearly once more i see, eyes all a-doe
something rediscovered...something to show
in to the indigo
i go
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31st July 2008 11:00 PM
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31st July 2008, 11:07 PM
#2
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Anbe Sivam
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31st July 2008, 11:46 PM
#3
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nice to read u again
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1st August 2008, 10:53 AM
#4
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Metaphysical beauty!
Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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2nd August 2008, 12:05 AM
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thank you for your support and comments...I thought after all this while i should try even if it goes unnoticed...therefore your posts mean so very much to me!
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2nd August 2008, 12:25 AM
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glassy eyed we all appear,
no pity for us,
no deity for to pray,
yet on our faces
a false piety remains.
each tearing seam,
each loosened string,
dealt with yet another unmovable grin.
stuffing poked,
and tatters folded,
patches hidden,
scratches dulled.
still we sleep when we lie.
still we call when prompted by,
those very hands,
that may toss us or deny,
their very own eyes
awaiting what
antiquity belies.
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2nd August 2008, 10:12 AM
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Another figurative philosophy!
Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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2nd August 2008, 02:12 PM
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Q
Anbe Sivam
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2nd August 2008, 07:30 PM
#9
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Originally Posted by
Querida
still we sleep when we lie.
still we call when prompted by,
those very hands,
that may toss us or deny,
I liked that the best!
The style was very much akin to lot of tamizh poetries.
Curse to human beings,
species made specially with such characterisitcs
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6th August 2008, 06:55 AM
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escape is a word that sweetly singes those who have no way...
but what fate awaits those who are enslaved
by mediocrity,anonymity, sheer uninterested invisibility...
to merely submissily, submissively, submit
upon the lounging, lazy, lanky, languor lying heavy upon your limpid neck...
doldrums drumming,
lentemente strumming,
all linger...all finger...
slowly stirring the swirls of somnolence........................................
who does dare rupture
such delcious dipping of one's dimly lit nuancive niches
out of the softly laid silkly plied slumber
that awaits all ready to smoothly swallow
such staccato actions/thoughts/feelings whole...............................
treacherous? ...yes....quite so...so very so....
(but oh what a verbous word that is)
why don't we just remember the pleasurous of passivity?
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